Very awesome! Loved the whole thing!
Keep on writing great pieces!
Author's Response: Adam- Your great man! Keep on reviewing! LOL :P
"Lass!" Thats funny! Was that a last ditch effort to rhyme??? NOODLES anyways, I loved it!
Author's Response: Noodles??? Kung-Foo noodles?? I like those! Anyways thanks for the review!!! Noodles to you too, I think!
Wow that was fantastic! I love the beat that the poem has. Meryal
Author's Response: Aww! thank you!
All I can say is... Great job!
Author's Response: Well I thought so too! But your review validates it so much more!:)
Author's Response: I saw that I am on your favorite authors list and it almost made me cry! THANK YOU!!! :)
one word - EXCELLENT
Author's Response: two words- THANK YOU!
Nice R/Hr poem you've got here! You've captured Ron's hesitation rather brilliantly, it's very in-character.
Normally, I don't review poems because I don't understand the intricacies of poetry, but this delighted me so much that I had to leave a comment about this (plus, it's freeverse, which doesn't have any rigid style).
A small typo ...
"Your smile warm me"
Shouldn't it be "your smile warms me"?
Anyway, good luck with your future fics!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing my poem, it makes me feel special! And thanks for finding that... sadlly I am not perfect! You found my one flaw!!! :)