Reviews For Three Little Words
Reviewer: Adam Hunter
Date: 09/06/06 23:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very awesome! Loved the whole thing!
Keep on writing great pieces!

Author's Response: Adam- Your great man! Keep on reviewing! LOL :P

Reviewer: secret_lover
Date: 09/06/06 0:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

"Lass!" Thats funny! Was that a last ditch effort to rhyme??? NOODLES anyways, I loved it!

Author's Response: Noodles??? Kung-Foo noodles?? I like those! Anyways thanks for the review!!! Noodles to you too, I think!

Reviewer: meryal
Date: 09/04/06 13:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow that was fantastic! I love the beat that the poem has. Meryal

Author's Response: Aww! thank you!

Reviewer: mionelove
Date: 09/04/06 10:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

All I can say is... Great job!

Author's Response: Well I thought so too! But your review validates it so much more!:)

Author's Response: I saw that I am on your favorite authors list and it almost made me cry! THANK YOU!!! :)

Reviewer: pottermania
Date: 09/04/06 6:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

one word - EXCELLENT

Author's Response: two words- THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 09/04/06 5:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice R/Hr poem you've got here! You've captured Ron's hesitation rather brilliantly, it's very in-character.

Normally, I don't review poems because I don't understand the intricacies of poetry, but this delighted me so much that I had to leave a comment about this (plus, it's freeverse, which doesn't have any rigid style).

A small typo ...

"Your smile warm me"

Shouldn't it be "your smile warms me"?

Anyway, good luck with your future fics!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing my poem, it makes me feel special! And thanks for finding that... sadlly I am not perfect! You found my one flaw!!! :)

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