ok, now she's so not a Mary-Sue. I love how well you showed her insecurities. and OMG I love your Luna. "she knows everything" that is just GREAT.
Again, I have only one thing to nag about. As much as I love the weasley reaction to Cordi's parents, I think her parents hating her is a little out of the blue. Yea, she mentioned that they didn't show affection, but she never said they were down right mean. I also think that if they were going to tell her not to marry Charlie, Her mother would have come the second she got the Invite, in order to talk her out of it. Her parents do not seem the type of people to wait till the last minute to express an opinion, esp. where Cordi is concered.
Ok, I think that's it for now..... But I do really love this series, and adore Cordi. (such a pretty name)
Author's Response: Ahhh. They didn't get the invitation until just a few days before the event. Molly and Arthur didn't have time to dash right out and convince them they were insane. I was drawing from the scene where Molly acts irrationally when she reads about Hermione in the Daily Prophet. I could only imagine that, as a mother, she would be overly protective of her son. Especially when he's marrying someone she's never gotten a chance to know. I'm glad that she doesn't appear Mary Sue-ish, now that you've gotten to know her. Keep an eye out for the family reunion piece coming soon.
HAHAHA that has got to be the best one yet..i laughed so hard when fred and goerge were wearing pink tutto's and singing i feel pretty..i just love west side story and cats and your great for writing that in there great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I did like this one quite a bit. Sdaly, I have not seen one of the shows that I had Fred and George sing the showtunes from. I shall eventually make it to the theatre. :)
I love stories theirgreat to read ;) i cant wait to read the second part to the chapter. Cordi's parents were horrible , i just wanted to slap them lol. Ok im a little confused, is chapter set after TBHL but before Her Other Half, An Evil Most Insidious? anyway like usual a great story
Author's Response: I still want to slap them. Come to think of it, why didn't someone slap them? Yes, this story is set after TBWL, but before Her Other Half. Thank you!!
First: I LOVE the spell Cordi casted on Fred and George-absolutely brilliant!!!!! The wedding was beautiful and the Weasley's sure are a great family to on your side. Cordi is very luck and they are lucky to get her. Wonderful job!!!!!! Love it! So glad to see it up.
Author's Response: Thanks. I still giggle when I picture the Phelps twins singing showtunes in pink tutus. *gigglesnort* I'm glad you like the wedding. The second part of the story, the reception and the honeymoon will center around the family, and then more of Charlie and Cordi as they explore Australia.