I really love this story. It's so cute. Your poetry is amazing. I really love the last one the most, but they are all great. The idea for this one-shot is really good. Now I'm going to read more of your storys because the ones that I've read are all great.
that was really good. i enjoyed reading it.
O i love this one it is so sweet and amazing!! your are truly a talented writer adn though we are only a year a part i hope i can write as well as you soon! This was so touching, i cant beleive how much i loved it!
hi i loved the story fluff and all!!! by the way the qoute by lily, in the film aquamarine one female says that the reson evry1 wants love is because its the closest thing to magic.. she obviously doesnt believe in harry potter!!! =) = P
What beautiful poetry! Have you entered under the poetry section? Lily's last letter reminded me of the song, Do You Believe in Magic?. Once again, beautiful! Write more!
Luna
this story is amazing, i hope you write more like it. but, you know. longer. way longer. good work, keep it up *thumbs up*
I loved the first chapter MarauderWannabe! I hope its not just a one-shot, but if it is, then I guess it works too...
Loved it! Keep writing!
awww this story is really sweet. i love it. keep it up, well, maybe not this story, since youv'e ended it, but you should still keep writing.
Aw, it's so sweet! Great job, love it!
your really good at riting stories and poems (Y), i wish i was as gifted as you :D
The poetry was amazing. And the last line.. wow.
I love th elast sentence .,... but the name jojo really has to go!
Something VERY close to it was said in "Aquamarine." Very good story!
