Reviews For Take the Plunge
Reviewer: voldy178
Date: 10/14/06 11:42
Chapter: One shot

Ooh, this story is so good! I've read all of your one-shots, but thes one is by far my favorite.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the other ones as well.

Reviewer: sweetaresnickisses
Date: 09/21/06 19:35
Chapter: One shot

ooh i love this story. i am in love with malfoy! god he sperfect. and hermione, she loves it, she knows she does. lol

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not sure about the "perfect" comment, though... ;)

Reviewer: Helios
Date: 09/19/06 17:38
Chapter: One shot


Author's Response: Thanks, Helios!

Reviewer: Hermione5001
Date: 09/16/06 20:52
Chapter: One shot

This story is soooooo cute! Each fic is even better than the last one when you write. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: muggleprincess72
Date: 09/11/06 10:11
Chapter: One shot

i really liked this one...i'm a sucker for a good hermione/ draco fic!

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you liked it. Thanks!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/08/06 14:49
Chapter: One shot

Very good. A brilliant seventh installment to a brilliant series. LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, KneazleWeazl!

Reviewer: Feltonluver867
Date: 09/03/06 19:41
Chapter: One shot

I like this one a lot. Its different. You seem to capture moments perfectly. My English teacher said I have the same quality but I thnk that you are better at ti then me

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm sure your English teacher is right, though, but thanks for the compliment!

Reviewer: Assilem82
Date: 09/02/06 7:42
Chapter: One shot

I love your writing and enjoy reading it all. Keep up the good work, it's fantastic.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Assilem!

Reviewer: xLiFEerasedx
Date: 09/01/06 17:25
Chapter: One shot


Aww. Cuteee! I really really liked it, what an original idea.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lunar
Date: 09/01/06 13:34
Chapter: One shot

That was beautiful! The way you write is really amazing, especially how you have Malfoy and Hermione as different but they're still in character. It's amazing. And the way you describe everything is wonderful. Also the way the same ting is almost happening again, yet every time there's something different to it. Amazing. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you, Luna, it means a lot to me that you liked so much about it. Especially that you think their in character is fantastic to hear. Thanks!

Reviewer: ann
Date: 09/01/06 5:00
Chapter: One shot


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 08/31/06 23:46
Chapter: One shot

I haven't read any of your other one-shots cuz they all sounded kind of morbid, but I liked this. check your grammar and spelling though--it interrupts the flow of your story.

Author's Response: Not all of them are morbid. I wouldn't define "Isabelle", "New Year" or "Two Lattes from Hell, Please" as such. (And definitely not "Not Going to Happen, Chica" either, but that's a different category). So, if you want to, check them out. I'm glad you liked this one, thanks! I can't believe grammar and spelling can be bothering you. I've had a beta reader go through it, and I've reread it countless times myself. If a typo or any such thing has found its way into the story unnoticed, I do apologize, but I highly doubt it will "interrupt the flow of the story".

Reviewer: MuggleMunkey
Date: 08/31/06 21:54
Chapter: One shot

Hey it’s MuggleMunkey!
I bet you wondered when you’d be hearing from me! ^_^ ! I was absolutely thrilled when I saw that you had another story! So when I saw it I hurried over to read it but …I’m not the first to review this time! It makes me sad! *dumb Trig. Homework* I was beginning to wonder where you had disappeared to…I missed your wonderful stories! Even though this is a totally different subject, I think that you should update From Which There Is No Return! *HINT HINT*! I really liked this newest edition to your big family of Harry potter stories! It was very cute! Not so much fluff but it was very delightful! I think that all your readers should applaud you for the brilliant job that you do!


There, I think that should to it! Well I really loved your story your characterization in this one-shot. The part that I liked the most was:

“No!” Malfoy replied. “It’s difficult. Don’t touch me, because… Oh, damnit, I can’t do this!” he growled and resumed to walking towards the castle.

Hermione didn’t walk after him, but she did want to know what was bothering him. “Why, Malfoy?” she yelled after him.

“Because!” he yelled back as he furiously turned around in his retreat. “Because, Merlin forbid it, I like it!”

The way you wrote this was so realistic! And I loved it! Well I have to go now my internet is going to turn off! But I might leave you another review to finish my thoughts tomorrow! ^_^

Author's Response: MuggleMunkey! How are you? Of course I wondered when you might grace me with your wonderful reviews! But, as I so cunningly concluded, it was only a matter of time. I'm thrilled you were thrilled that I had written another story. I'm always excited about hearing people's reactions to new stories. No, not the first reviewer, I'm afraid. Someone beat you to it. But don't worry, you'll get other chances. I'm almost finished with the next one, but it's all hush hush, so don't tell anyone! And fear not - From Which There Is No Return will be updated shortly. My beta reader is editing my sixth and final chapter of my humour fic Momentous Change, but after that I'll send her FWTINR's final chapter. Thank you, I'm flattered you liked this newest edition to my "big family of Harry Potter stories". Oh, I'm glad you liked that part of the story. It's quite an important part, really. Thanks for the great review. Talk to you soon!

Reviewer: HermioneTwin7
Date: 08/31/06 21:38
Chapter: One shot

hmm. that sounded cool. i liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Miss Scarlett
Date: 08/31/06 20:24
Chapter: One shot

Bravo! I loved it. The progression of the relationship was just right, not to fast and OOC like some. Their banter was great and fit both of them. I would beg for more chapters, but its perfect as a one-shot. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the flattering review!

Reviewer: DracosPunkBabe
Date: 08/31/06 20:13
Chapter: One shot

ahhh, dat was soo good lol, i loved it. lol its so romantic. 4 a sec. there i thought some monster was gonna get her lol. but yeah. loved it.



Author's Response: Thank you! It was a monster... of some sort :)

Reviewer: tuttifrutty
Date: 08/31/06 19:36
Chapter: One shot

haha i will always love your stories, one-shots, no waiting for chapters and always with a fantastic ending!

you're such a writer =P

Author's Response: Thank you, tuttifrutty! Ending are important, no doubt about that, so I'm glad you like mine. Thanks! *blushes*

Reviewer: Crank_up_the_Volume
Date: 08/31/06 19:32
Chapter: One shot

Omg, that was the best one so far. I LOVED IT!!! Keep up the good work, it rocks more than a guitar~!


Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. It "rocks more than a guitar"? Oh, stop, you're making me blush ;)

Reviewer: rumplestiltskin953
Date: 08/31/06 18:04
Chapter: One shot

that was a really cute story!! loved it! one thing i dont get though is like what they're asking each other in the end. "do you think we'll go back?" go back where? go back to the ihatemudbloods ihateslytherinprats relationship? or go back to the hustle and bustle at hogwarts?

Author's Response: Thank you! The first option, definitely, lol.

Reviewer: lazer_angel
Date: 08/31/06 17:37
Chapter: One shot

Wow...this was another amazing one-shot. You're a great writer. I hope you write more one-shots soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Another one's in the works!

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