even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.
even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.
even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.
even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.
even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.
even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.
omg that's so sad. litterally. i was bawling by the end.
This is such a gay ass story, all you butches reviewing are stupid, you cried because of a story, that's just sad. Terrible story too.... Sycks to be you, lesbo.
no hear u say u wrote a new story de......
Ooh, brilliant. Very emotional piece. Well one!
(and now off to make your banner, haha)
Ooh, brilliant. Very emotional piece. Well one!
(and now off to make your banner, haha)
Author's Response: =D Thanks! And excellent banner by the way!
I can't believe such a good story only has one review! It really stays IC for Sirius, even though you've put him in the "new" (for the reader) situation of having just lost a loved one. It's great how he swears he'll get revenge in the end - how very... Sirius!
Just a few little things maybe the line "Dark Mark upon her" should be "Dark Mark above her"... upon her sounds like she's been branded. Also, you wrote "cheer on me," which should probably be "cheer me on."
Otherwise, a very interesting read!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing =) Sirius is one of my favourite charators I just had to write something about him. And thanks for pointing out the mistakes! It would be cool to be branded with the mark though.. just a thought! XD
That is really sad, it made me cry but I read it three times, great story! Poor Sirius.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it. Thanks for the review! =)
