Reviews For Gone
Reviewer: ferret
Date: 04/30/08 22:18
Chapter: Gone

even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.

Reviewer: ferret
Date: 04/30/08 22:18
Chapter: Gone

even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.

Reviewer: ferret
Date: 04/30/08 22:18
Chapter: Gone

even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.

Reviewer: ferret
Date: 04/30/08 22:18
Chapter: Gone

even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.

Reviewer: ferret
Date: 04/30/08 22:18
Chapter: Gone

even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.

Reviewer: ferret
Date: 04/30/08 22:17
Chapter: Gone

even though it's not a true story, it still made me cry. i.....i never cry. this story is one of the best, i think.

Reviewer: werloser22
Date: 01/23/08 14:14
Chapter: Gone

omg that's so sad. litterally. i was bawling by the end.

Reviewer: SquishyWormyDeadBird
Date: 12/15/06 17:11
Chapter: Gone

This is such a gay ass story, all you butches reviewing are stupid, you cried because of a story, that's just sad. Terrible story too.... Sycks to be you, lesbo.

Reviewer: Hermione_Gryffindor
Date: 10/20/06 12:47
Chapter: Gone

no hear u say u wrote a new story de......

Reviewer: SiriuslyMental
Date: 09/09/06 20:30
Chapter: Gone

Ooh, brilliant. Very emotional piece. Well one!

(and now off to make your banner, haha)

Reviewer: SiriuslyMental
Date: 09/09/06 20:30
Chapter: Gone

Ooh, brilliant. Very emotional piece. Well one!

(and now off to make your banner, haha)

Author's Response: =D Thanks! And excellent banner by the way!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 09/09/06 13:21
Chapter: Gone

I can't believe such a good story only has one review! It really stays IC for Sirius, even though you've put him in the "new" (for the reader) situation of having just lost a loved one. It's great how he swears he'll get revenge in the end - how very... Sirius!

Just a few little things maybe the line "Dark Mark upon her" should be "Dark Mark above her"... upon her sounds like she's been branded. Also, you wrote "cheer on me," which should probably be "cheer me on."

Otherwise, a very interesting read!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing =) Sirius is one of my favourite charators I just had to write something about him. And thanks for pointing out the mistakes! It would be cool to be branded with the mark though.. just a thought! XD

Reviewer: SIRIUS WILL NOT DIE
Date: 09/07/06 7:31
Chapter: Gone

That is really sad, it made me cry but I read it three times, great story! Poor Sirius.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it. Thanks for the review! =)

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