Reviewer: hermionesthegoddess
Date: 10/15/07 13:35
Chapter: Greeting The Past

People have said it. I have said it. I kow you're tired of reading it, but I am almost sure that Addy is Ron's kid. Just so sure. Anyways, I hated that the chapter was so short. I just wished you could have done a lot more. Why did they keep denying it? What was so wrong? I thought it was pretty harmless, then again, I read a version the reviewers thought apropriate. Thanks for updating (even though it took ages) and I hope the next chapter comes soon!

Author's Response: It seems everyone is sure about that fact! I was a little unhappy myself about the length, but the next chapter should be longer and hopefully reveal some things you all watn to know! In relation to the MNFF staff not validating my story, they told me that it was too short (obviously) and that my characterisation was 'way off'. I was unable to do a thing about it, because I have a lot of the story written already! I didn't have to change very much at all for them to validate it (finally). Well, thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 10/15/07 11:57
Chapter: Greeting The Past

finally, it took long enough. Loved the chapter by the way. can't wait till the next one. hopefullly it will get here sooner.


Author's Response: Thankyou very much. I very much hope that mugglenet continue to validate my chapters quickly for the readers sakes, but their constrctive critisism does help me to become a better writer. Thanks for the patience! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: sudeshna2kool4u
Date: 10/15/07 6:54
Chapter: Greeting The Past

Well, first of all, I'd like to say, the story is very nice. I really really really like it. And this thing about Addy, I also feel she's Ron's child. Ok, ok, maybe you are getting very irritated by the fact that almost all the reviewers are saying 'Addy's Ron's daughter!'.
I am looking forward to an update! :)

Author's Response: *laughs* I have no problem with everyone speculating- it's what tells me whether I'm getting my point across right or not. I'm glad you're enjoying this story. Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:33
Chapter: Greeting The Past

three dads... ugh since when???????????? Good suspense though

Author's Response: wow thanks for all the enthusiasm with your reviews! Hermione explains during this story why she seems like a bit...odd...but it definitely wasn't her plan for this all to happen. Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:30
Chapter: Precious Time

serious suspense help!!!!!!!!!!! stop the cliffies, PLEASE, I really can't handle it! Get Hermione toconfess! Please!!!!!!!!!!
(Sorry about the melodrama)

Author's Response: lol don't worry, I'm quite melodramatic myself. I'm sorry that my cliffhangers have caused you so much grief, but I must say that they will continue to crop up, so beware!! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:27
Chapter: Is There Anybody Out There?

filler, filler, let's get some answers yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: They're coming soon, just hang on a little longer!! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:24
Chapter: After All These Years

They talk!!!!!!!! Yeah it's about time! Now we just need answers.
Oh, and I've been meaning to tell you that Daniel is such a funny name fo rHarry's son becaus of Daniel Radcliffe but it makes me laugh so i love it!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Answers will come very soon. Daniel just seemed to fit in my head, and I also laughed at it!! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:17
Chapter: In The Shadows

Ohhhhh, a cliffie, come on no fair!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh well great chapter anyway!!!!!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:17
Chapter: In The Shadows

Ohhhhh, a cliffie, come on no fair!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh well great chapter anyway!!!!!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:16
Chapter: In The Shadows

Ohhhhh, a cliffie, come on no fair!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh well great chapter anyway!!!!!

Author's Response: The cliffhangers will continue, just bear with me and new chapters will appear (as soon as MNFF is fixed anyway). Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:11
Chapter: The Missing Friend

I really like the beginning and I'm curious about this break-up.
Congrats on your first fanfic!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks!! :D

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 10/12/07 20:52
Chapter: Greeting The Past

I have a feeling that Addy is Ron's daughter, the timing's about right.
I can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: A lot of people seem to be thinking along those lines! As I have said, the next chapter will reveal a lot. Well thanks for reading :D

Reviewer: luv4harryginny
Date: 10/11/07 12:13
Chapter: Greeting The Past

Ok, the oldest Adrianna is Rons??? Are we right?

Author's Response: As I said, all will be reavealed...the next chapter will reveal a lot...Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: lady_k
Date: 10/11/07 2:52
Chapter: Greeting The Past

Oh, don't tell me...Is Hermione's firsy child his?:P
Nice story!

Author's Response: All will be revealed soon...thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: harry_fan14
Date: 10/10/07 21:39
Chapter: Greeting The Past

if they are taking forever why dont you try posting on another site or something i agree that they take forever!

Author's Response: I've posted a few chapters on but I have more on here, and I also prefer this website simply because the validation time gives me time to write more of the story! Thankyou for sticking with me and reading! :D

Reviewer: anarf88
Date: 10/04/07 13:10
Chapter: Precious Time

I'm the one who is sick!! I think I'm gonna vomit!

Author's Response: alright, alright, no need to get nasty! Well, thanks for reading anyway :D

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 07/20/07 7:17
Chapter: Precious Time

I hadn't read this story in a while, but I can't believe it.
I can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: thanx 4 reading!! :D I can't wait for an update either!! lol thanx again.

Reviewer: hermsgranger
Date: 06/24/07 18:43
Chapter: Precious Time

OMG! Where'd the other chapter go?!

Author's Response: It's been rejected again, even though I specifically fixed the problems...Iguess I'll just have to fix it again, and try again...grrrr! lol fingers crossed it wont be rejected again...

Reviewer: the2ndWeasleytwins
Date: 06/19/07 18:53
Chapter: Precious Time

It's a pain to review for every single chapter, so
I'll review for the whole story (so far??). Good job, lots of suspense!! I hope Hermione makes it!!

Author's Response: Hey thanks heaps!! :D:D

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 06/12/07 16:30
Chapter: Precious Time

Oh my gawsh. You've got to update. This is brilliant! =) --RP/Kate

Author's Response: Thank you very much!! I am trying to go over the rest of the story so I don't have any chapters rejected again...that way, you guys won't have to wait as long for them!! I will be posting the next chapter (again) in the next few days, then all we can do is wait...fingers crossed everyone!! Thanx 4 reading!! :D

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