Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 04/28/08 11:15
Chapter: Shattered Hearts

Oh my goodness!! I hate cliff-hangers! I hope you update soon. :) I've really enjoyed this story and can't wait to see what happens next! I hope Ron can get over his anger and forgive Hermione. I love those two together! :)

Author's Response: A lot of people hate cliff-hangers, though I really enjoy them!! :) I'm glad you're enjoying this story, and I think we're all hoping (even me) that Ron and Hermione are ok in the end...You'll just have to wait and see!! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: gryffindorboi
Date: 04/28/08 8:31
Chapter: Shattered Hearts

Hurry and write more! Love that you managed to smack Fleur in the face...that's brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks!! It was rather enjoyable to write, although that could a little mean...oh well :) More will be coming really soon so long as the next chapter doesn't get rejected. Fingers crossed!! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: Uncle Arthur
Date: 04/28/08 2:30
Chapter: Shattered Hearts

You've put up another chapter, Whoot!
Well, that was rather intense, i especially enjoyed the Fred/George antics, hehe.
Keep it up luv!

Author's Response: Hey sexy!! I'm gld you enjoyed it, especially the twins!! Thanks for supporting me darling, and thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 04/27/08 18:13
Chapter: Shattered Hearts

I understand Ginny and Ron's reactions, but I can't wait to see Harry's. I have a feeling he will be the voice of reason. I am certainly hoping for a miracle cure too.

Welcome back!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I have a feeling you might be very close indeed ;) and a miracle cure would be very nice, but maybe not what will happen. Thanks for sticking with this story and reading!! :D

Reviewer: yogurtfish
Date: 04/27/08 16:45
Chapter: Shattered Hearts

Enjoying the story so far!!

Like the bits with Ron in and how he finds out that he is a father!


Author's Response: thanks a lot!! It's nice to see people are still reading this!! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: harrylove30
Date: 02/11/08 22:05
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

i loved the ending of the chapter. i can't for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thankyou!! It's good to see people are still reading this, despite my inability to post more due to beta issues. Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: Beeb
Date: 01/02/08 15:57
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

Whens the next its the best twister of a story ever. Apart from the real H.P series.

Author's Response: wow, thank you so much!! I was just happy people were reading this story, but to hear a comment like that is amazing. I hope that you keep it as the story unfolds!! Thanx for reading!! :D

Reviewer: bubblegumpinkhair
Date: 12/24/07 11:28
Chapter: The Missing Friend

hey that was pretty good and i like the story idea. I also liked the ending...very suspenseful.. anyways great job i really enjoy your style

and o ps my name is lucia to

Author's Response: thanks a lot! It's always nice to hear readers opinions, and even better if they really like it! Also, I'm sorry to say my name isn't actually Lucia - that's just my pen name. It's Lucy, but I do really like that name! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/19/07 15:44
Chapter: The Missing Friend

oh i was expecting more lol

Author's Response: Fair enough. Hopefully if you continue reading you will get what you desire. Either way, thanks for taking to time to read and review!! :D

Reviewer: SmartGryffindorGirl
Date: 11/28/07 19:25
Chapter: After All These Years

O-M-G This is awesome Lucia! I can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Thankou very much! I apologise for the major delay in chapter posting, I've had a lot going on right now! As soon as it all dies down the next chapter will be up; stick with me folks! Thanx for reading!! :D

Reviewer: Rhet
Date: 11/15/07 4:51
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

omg! how could they give poor ron all those hints but not tell him nething? we all kno how slow he can b ...(but i stil luv him)...wen wil he find out the truth (that us ASTUTE readers knew about from the beginning..hehehe i used a big word...) neway.....its rely good so keep up the good work and keep updating and dont let the staff giv u ne BS ;) luv rhet:) ps. i kno..i actually finally read it... lol, soz it took a while...

Author's Response: *giggles* Thanks for finally reading this, Rhet!! And I'm very proud of your big words!! The truth is not far off, I promise you!! Thanks for reading darling!! :D

Reviewer: AAA1031
Date: 11/11/07 0:30
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

The story is great so far! You've done such a nice job with the story. I've immensely enjoyed every part. Will the last chapters be out soon?

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! I love hearing responses like this, they're very encouraging to amateur writers such as myself!! Also, this story is far from finished. When i say 'far from', i mean that i have a handful of chapters written and being edited as we speak, and a lot more to write!! Stick with me, folks!! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: Vicster
Date: 11/05/07 9:37
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

wow its really good! keep it up! =]

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: maze
Date: 11/05/07 8:13
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

I really wonder what happen between them that Ron is unaware that he may be the father.Surely he has more than 'emotional range of a teaspoon'? Please update soon.

Author's Response: The reason that Hermione left will become very clear later on, but for now we'll just have to deal with Ron's stupidity over the whole situation :) Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: sudeshna2kool4u
Date: 11/05/07 2:21
Chapter: Secrets and Lies


Author's Response: *giggles* I'm glad to see that there are people REALLY getting into the story :P Hope you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: Uncle Arthur
Date: 11/05/07 0:00
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

hehe, Rons so stupid :)

Author's Response: Why hello my sexy Lexie! haha, I must agree with you there, that was my exact thoughts when writing this! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: wyfan_64
Date: 11/04/07 23:14
Chapter: In The Shadows

half the page is obsured cannt read it

Author's Response: Hi, I just checked that chapter and I know what you mean, this has happened to me before with other stories as well. I think the only solution is to hightlight the text and read it like that until MN fix the problem. Sorry about this, but I have no control over this! Thanks for reading, anyway!! :D

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 11/04/07 17:32
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

Yeah, I did see the Ron is a dad thing, but I like how you revealed it through the daughter instead of directly telling Ron. I hope The two of them can work things out.
Can't wait to see Fleur with a black eye! Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thankyou! I tried to reveal the secret in a slightly different way to how I'd read these type of stories before, so I'm glad you liked it! And I hope that you enjoy Fleur's moment to shine...r (haha like my pun?) Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: G_R_F_F_I_N_D_O_R
Date: 11/04/07 16:07
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

OMG i'm really loving this story it's brilliant i cant wait for future chapters it's actually great. keep up the good work .x.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: Firebolt2111
Date: 11/04/07 14:07
Chapter: Secrets and Lies

Oh my god this is an awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter it sounds amazing!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much, and thanks for reading!! :D

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