Reviewer: unfortunateorphan13
Date: 09/06/06 19:34
Chapter: In Trouble Already, And Itís Only The First Chapter

Heck yes, it's back! What's with David, although he does remind you of the Harry Potter worshipping creevy brothers!!! I'm glad you wrote another sequel, I was getting kinda bored looking for another fan fiction to get hooked on!!!!
......that reminds me of hooked on phonics.......oh well ...
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
With All Due Respect,
unfortunateorphan13
p.s. long live pie!!!!!!!!(and HP woot!)
p.s.s. BOTHER! wwhhhhooooo........

Author's Response: Mmm, pie.......Heehee, bother. Puppet Pals Rule!

Reviewer: Silver_Quill
Date: 09/06/06 18:54
Chapter: In Trouble Already, And Itís Only The First Chapter

IT'S BACK! WOOT! Great job with chapter one, keep it going, blah blah, blah. 10/10!
~Alexa

Author's Response: A pleasantries review! Blah blah blah indeed. :D

Reviewer: lost in a dream
Date: 09/06/06 17:42
Chapter: In Trouble Already, And Itís Only The First Chapter

Yes. I love this story.

Author's Response: After one chapter? Man, I must be good.

Reviewer: bookworm247
Date: 09/06/06 17:33
Chapter: In Trouble Already, And Itís Only The First Chapter

heyy how come no one reviewed???? okkk whatevs... he's BACK!!!!!!!!!!! omg!i can't believe everyone's still in *gasp* character. You know.... i do believe that that new OC is up to something.. *dundundun* i especially loved the similtaneous swering. ok.. keep writing.

Author's Response: I know! Maddening to have folks in character......and yeah, that OC is a bit dodgy.......

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