Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 12/06/06 14:39
Chapter: Music To My Ears

YUSS! I must read the next part. I absolutely loved this, since I'm in a band, and it was murder to get a bassist. The guy we do have is, er, very sullen about having to play the bass. This chapter seems incredibly random compared to the rest of the story, though. The part making fun of rock music was quite funny, however, as well as the "Respect your llama."

Author's Response: Ever get the feeling you've seen something before?

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 12/06/06 14:39
Chapter: Music To My Ears

YUSS! I must read the next part. I absolutely loved this, since I'm in a band, and it was murder to get a bassist. The guy we do have is, er, very sullen about having to play the bass. This chapter seems incredibly random compared to the rest of the story, though. The part making fun of rock music was quite funny, however, as well as the "Respect your llama."

Author's Response: I kid bassists, they're lovely people. And I kid rock music, I love it. And you MUST respect your llamas. (They spit.)

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/06/06 12:45
Chapter: Music To My Ears

me wants validation me wants validation me really wants validation me needs validation me eeee forgot what me wanted to say vaLIDATION

Author's Response: I wants validation too. I's grammar are slipping....

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 11/29/06 18:29
Chapter: Music To My Ears

wow u are updating this story quicker than the last one.. are u sure you are the author and u are not some kind of fanfiction obsesed alien? any way, im looking forward to this chapter

Author's Response: I know, I AM updating quicker! I blame not having school work.

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/28/06 22:14
Chapter: Music To My Ears

Validate... validate... *pounds furiously on keyboard, then erases random letters that that causes* I could use a laugh, so here's to a quick validation!
~Moony

Author's Response: Don't pound furiously on your keyboard, or else it'll just freeze up next tiem you try to review!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 11/25/06 17:00
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

hahaha funny chapter... so just like a week happened sicne the last story?

Author's Response: Umm........I guess so. Yeah! Of course. I meant to do that.

Really u knew? i thought i has spotted sth not even the author had*sad*
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

Author's Response: Don't feel bad; I'm really not that great at timelines. And I will update, as soooooooooon as the queue is back up.

Reviewer: Potter Puppet Pals
Date: 11/22/06 21:22
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

AAHH! I think it was okay, it was a bit boring but it was funny when we found out that was nevell! (laughing: Queen of the flying monkeys)

Author's Response: Well, in my experience, exposition IS boring. So, I'm terribly sorry, but please continue to chuckle at the flying monkey queen idea.

Reviewer: phoenixfeather_quill
Date: 11/19/06 16:52
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

I'm trying to give you onions here...

Ar, this is great!

hehe. I love those warlocks.

and so much for low profile...

anyways, great job! 10/10 hurry on chappie 4!

Author's Response: Yeah, I love those warlocks too. And I shall do my utmot to get chappie 4 up soon!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 11/17/06 17:01
Chapter: In Trouble Already, And Itís Only The First Chapter

By the way, that llama duck review someone sent you a long time ago is not merely insanity, it's albinoblacksheep insanity. Google albinoblacksheep and you will see the light. (or the website. that too.)

fuzzy llama funny llama llama llama duck!

Author's Response: I do believe I have heard of albinoblacksheep, from a reliable looney source. I shall have to investigate someday.....

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 11/17/06 16:52
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

I thought that I was surprised that the figure under the cloak was Neville... or was it? What'll happen next?? A face-off between mimbulus mimbletonia and the Crumple-Horned Snorkack? Oink!

Author's Response: Snorky and Mimbly duking it out? Hmm.....

Reviewer: Zoheb
Date: 11/16/06 12:52
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

Hey there, fellow carbon-based life-form (You are one...aren't you?)
Your stories have inspired me! Really, they have! My loony-senses tingled as I scrolled my way down these perilous sentences, my valiant mouse rising to the occasion by refusing to co-operate with my commands! But that's a story for another winter afternoon in the alps, beside the firplace, with a pipe in mouth, grandkids sitting 'round...
Where was I? Oh yes...!
As I was saying, you could increase the wackiness of it all, no? I've got a few suggestions that you might want to try:

A) How about granting MALFOY'S wish (Or whatver you call 'em) for once? HE'll wish that Ron would just go start making a fool of himself in public (Or something like that), and Ron would start singing:
"Oh, Switzerland, how I dream of thee...!/ Where the sun doth shine, and the chocolate is free...!" Orsomething even more FOOLISH.

B) Last time you made Dumbledore dance the jig, why not take it up a notch? Turn Dumbledore into a wannabe rapper/ rock god. It cant hurt anyone... except Dumbledore.

C) We have not yet seen Hagrid afflicted! Give us something good. How about, somebody wishes that he wasn't so obsessed with Dark Creatures and liked fluffy-pink animals? It'll be an interesting change...

D) Another thing... increase the romance angle of the story, BUT ONLY A BIT. Use it as an excuse to abuse the characters some more.

E) Make the new DADA teacher Gandalf. BUT, he is not really the way he was portrayed in LOTR. Her is much more... alcoholic.
...
OK, scratch that.

Okay, that's I got. Thanks for taking the time to read that.
Keep this stuff coming!

Author's Response: I do belive I am carbon-based, though I have not as yet set myself on fire to test this theory. I likes the cut of your looniness, and the lovely listings of ideas. I can never manage to put paragraphs in reviews.....

Reviewer: unfortunateorphan13
Date: 11/13/06 19:37
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

Ooookkkkaaayyyyyy.........right....um... HIlarious but what could Arbitrar have taken from neville..........and why would Arbitrar(E) go a lookin' fur the Dursleys?!!?!?! The suspense.!! NNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S KILLING ME...pretty soon I won't be able to........ finish.... th....is(this) ........review......................................*Suspense:MUHMUHHAHAHAHAHAHA!
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
With All Due Respect,
unfortunateorphan13
p.s. DUN-DUN-DUNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!(backround music)
p.s.s. HULAGIRLS???!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I like that, Arbitrar(e). What did he take from Neville? Do you not remember Neville being queen of the flying monkeys? That's all that power he was ranting about. And why did Arbitrar(e) go to the Dursleys? We'll have to wait and find out.....

Reviewer: Peridot_Horntail
Date: 11/13/06 16:53
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

Neville? I can understand that, since he was queen of the flying monkeys, but I dunno...seems more idiotic than the original POS.

Author's Response: Aren't sequels always more idiotic?

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/13/06 16:40
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

SORRY! I meant to hit 'r', but got 'f' instead! I meant you were right. You probably know that, but i just couldn't ignore that, sorry!
~Moony

Author's Response: See, I thought that's what you meant, but I couldn't pass up the opportunity to ask someone if they were asking for a challenge. But this way, neither of us are sad inside a wall.

Reviewer: mariarulez
Date: 11/13/06 14:32
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

This story is as good as the last one. I can't wait to see what happens at later on.

Author's Response: Me either! (You can probably tell, I make stuff up as I go.)

Reviewer: Ellie4Harry
Date: 11/13/06 12:30
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

Yes! Neville is going to reign over his flying monkeys again! I thought this chapter was great, the warlocks were hilarious :D It was worth the wait!

Author's Response: Ar, the warlocks. I loved writing that dialogue.

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 11/13/06 2:43
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

Hey! I didn't say it wasn't funny at all! I only said it wasn't VERY funny. I mean, like, no spiked punch, no totally engrossing games of I Spy, no Neville - oh yeah, there was, right at the end, where anyone could miss it! Then again, you're just getting warmed up. Soon we'll be back to duct tape and the like.

Author's Response: Well, OK, I'll give you that. I'll have to throw in more punch, spying, and duct tape. Oh, who could forget duct tape?

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/12/06 19:08
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

You're fight, finally! Great chappie and I can't wait for more!
~Moony

Author's Response: I'm fight? Is that a challenge?! :P

Reviewer: CrookshankstheCat
Date: 11/12/06 17:18
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

YES!! Finally Chpt. 3!!! Funny and interesting :)

Author's Response: Funny and interesting. Code for, "I was confused as heck, but laughing at the same time."

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 11/12/06 15:25
Chapter: Subplot Action, Part One: Questing For Arbitrar!

This chappie was a bit confusing, and not very funny, but I'm sure you'll get back into it with time.

Author's Response: I'll be the first to admit it, I'm not great with beginnings, so a story with two beginnings is, well, doubly challenging. It will get funnier later, honest. HOWEVER! Did you not read the warlock dialougue? I thought they were funny.

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