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Name: dspotter (Signed) · Date: 07/21/11 21:20 · For: Lily's Eyes
Ok so this was well written but the whole concept of lily not being Harrys mum and James having an affair with her sister kinda ruined my life for five minutes. Creative, but... You get my point. I really hope I don't sound mean!!!! You're really good at writing!!

Name: MaraudersLover (Signed) · Date: 06/20/08 15:29 · For: Lily's Eyes
wow, that was a great twist at the end. this is very well-writen and interesting. so who really did write the letter? it was a phenomenal read and i will make sure to recommend it.

Name: Afifa (Signed) · Date: 12/27/07 15:11 · For: Lily's Eyes
okay, now that was surprising... but it's written very well all the same.

Name: yunru (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 3:54 · For: Lily's Eyes
not bad... it's convincing and not too "try-hard" like so many peices floating around

Name: I_LUV_MOONY (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 3:39 · For: Lily's Eyes
Wow, that sure was something. That's a scary thought you left us with. Is the writer who she says she is or an imposter? Jeez, I've never even thought of the prospect that Lily wasn't Harry's mother. I'm sure that she is in the books, but that's why this story is in Alternate Universe. It was excellent.


Name: Marauders_Girls (Signed) · Date: 03/26/07 13:17 · For: Lily's Eyes
this was good!!!!!!!!!!!

Name: Temeraire (Signed) · Date: 02/25/07 1:29 · For: Lily's Eyes
Very interesting indeed. It's a very good idea, although it makes James appear very selfish, and Lily seem to be foolish and weak - although I supose from Holly's point of view that's what it would have been like. Good job!

Name: sinfonia_concertante (Signed) · Date: 11/22/06 21:22 · For: Lily's Eyes
Wow! This is a very original idea. Please write a sequel!

Name: LovelyxLena (Anonymous) · Date: 11/03/06 16:26 · For: Lily's Eyes
Well if she is a death eater Voldy could have just told her. Or Voldy himself could have written it as a trap. He is certainly capable of being that convinving and manipulative, am I right?

Name: deanine (Signed) · Date: 10/22/06 19:29 · For: Lily's Eyes
Okay, this was interesting. You basically wrote a letter revising history. The point of the fic is the letter and as a one shot we know you don't plan to take it farther. It would feel more significant to me if you moved forward and let us at least see this woman, assuming she's real and not a Death Eater. That would be an interesting twist. Harry goes looking for her and finds an enemy ready to exploit his hunger for family. I'm digressing though.

It's clear your AU premise, you basically write it out in explanation for to Harry via the letter. I have a question though. Snape overheard part of the prophecy according to canon. But in your fic, Snape was told the entire prophecy by Dumbledore. I'm not sure why you changed this or how it helps the fic along. Except that you use knowledge of the entire prophecy as Harry's last it-might-really-be-true thought.

It was a good fic, an easy read, but I've loved other fics of yours better. I find letters disengaging and flat for the most part.

Quibble: I think you missed a period and some italics in this section:

Pretty much by habit at this point, he and Ron turned to Hermione as she unfolded her copy of the Daily Prophet Harry did not get to hear her report though, before something nudged his elbow.

Overall: I enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing :)

Name: rebellious_rocker77 (Signed) · Date: 10/19/06 10:05 · For: Lily's Eyes
One of my very dear friends recommended you and so I took up the opportunity and decided to read most of you stories during bio today...hehe. This one was one of my favourites! I think that the very last line summed up the whole story and brought it full circle. You should add more to it:D

Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 10/11/06 19:06 · For: Lily's Eyes
I looove this! It completely makes you think...and....just, wow.

Name: TheTrioLivesOn (Signed) · Date: 10/01/06 12:34 · For: Lily's Eyes
I think you should add on more to it.

Name: MJ_Padfoot (Signed) · Date: 09/28/06 19:48 · For: Lily's Eyes
Wow! That's cool! Good job! One ? though, who was Lily's headmaster while she was at hogwarts? dumbledore? Or dippet? anyway, good job!

Name: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy (Signed) · Date: 09/24/06 8:58 · For: Lily's Eyes
Im confused. So how on earth DID the writer have known the whole Prophecy? This is so weird

Name: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy (Signed) · Date: 09/24/06 8:55 · For: Lily's Eyes
Im confused. So how on earth DID the writer have known the whole Prophecy? This is so weird

Name: A_Pink_lady (Signed) · Date: 09/21/06 15:32 · For: Lily's Eyes
wow thats really good, the last line really makes you think really good!

Name: magicalmuggle818 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/06 14:50 · For: Lily's Eyes
this is really cool please update it soon

Name: Megan Radcliffe (Signed) · Date: 09/03/06 2:17 · For: Lily's Eyes
This story was a little confusing ... but other than that your a really good writer! Why does it say "Chapter Four" at the top??? This is a really good story but what has it got to do with Harry's eyes and Lily???

Author's Response: >.< There was a mistake in uploading. Chapter Twenty Four is in the Year Six fic. I have uploaded the REAL Lily's Eyes for your reading pleasure. Thanks for reading. lol

Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 08/31/06 19:50 · For: Lily's Eyes
Not sure what this has to do with Lily... I get the feeling I'm missing the context, too. But for what it was, this seemed really good! If there's more to this story, I'd love to read it!

Author's Response: It's meant to start in the middle and leave you a bit discombobulated. It actually fits right into HBP canon, if I remember correctly. Confusing, yes, and it doesn't answer all your questions. I loove it that way!

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