Reviews For Taking Flight
Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 08/31/06 19:32
Chapter: Taking Flight

Poor Charlie spends a lot of time on the floor, doesn't he? he he Love those awkward, true to life moments. I love reading their thoughts on each other. Sorry I never caught this earlier, but the paragraph where she is picking him up off the floor for the second time, of instead of off. You have no idea how many times I had to rewrite that to get it right. Love it! You know it!

Author's Response: And, of I go to fix that silly error! Luvers you!

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