Sirius seems a little out of charector but really good job. I'm impressed.
Author's Response: Thanks! Is he? I'd really appreciate it if you'd tell me how exactly...I hate OOC-ness more than just about anything else in fanfiction. Again, thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Nicely written! Well done! The emotion of Sirius fits well with the moment.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm really glad you liked it...it's always hard to do the "wrenching" emotions because you have to really delve into their psychologies...again, thank you :) P.S. I like your name :)