Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/08/06 13:04
Chapter: Part 1

OMG me too!! That is sooo cool.
It's funny, how Matai's name went from "Present" to "When".
Please write another story with Israeli wizards!

Author's Response: Heh, there's actually a really bad mistake behind that that I converted to a story (basiclly, I found the name Matai on a baby name website, named him that, wrote him in a chapter, then realized that it meant 'when' (and that no parent would willing name their kid that)). So I made up a back story for it. Glad you liked it. Also, Matai showes up in my story Trying to Live a Life Worth Living (currenty, he's only in chapter three). That is, if your interested.

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/07/06 18:14
Chapter: Part 1

This is funny, how it had to happen on a friday right before Shabbat...everything seems to lol. Are you Israeli? I have an obsession with Israel.

Author's Response: No, I'm American (Jewish, though). But I also have a obession with Israel...and I've been there. I'm glad you liked my story and left a review! Thanks!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/02/06 17:17
Chapter: Part 2

I really like Matai. He is definitely a well developed OC and well thought out. I have really enjoyed reading his adventures and seeing how he ends up helping his friend. Thanks for the enjoyement!


Author's Response: You're welcome! Matai actually originated in my story Trying to Live a Life Worth Living, but I decided to use him for this challenge too. But I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comments!

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