Reviews For James
Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 01/13/08 17:44
Chapter: James

Veryy Cute!!

Reviewer: Shae Weasley
Date: 11/22/07 18:23
Chapter: James

Aw, how cute! I really like this poem!

Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 10/06/07 12:08
Chapter: James

Oooo! I liked it a lot! I don't normally see poetry and a "story" in the same fic. This topic is used so often, but I think you made it cute and modern, really telling about teenage love. It seems like you know what it's like, as I think you really delved into Lily's head.

I see him now
And wonder why
I convinced myself
I hated this guy.

That was the best verse, because it was funny and really sweet. I hate to think about what will happen to them later, and almost cry. It was also a surprise when she was going to give it to James. I don't really picture Lily doing that, but I guess it depends on her age, doesn't it?

*Claire*

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/06/07 19:09
Chapter: James

Aw that was so sweet. so beautiful. this is great! I really liked it.

Reviewer: secret_lover
Date: 09/06/06 0:08
Chapter: James

NOODLE! I loved it!!

Author's Response: O.o Noodle? Anyway, thank you. I seem to have more luck with poems here on MNFF than stories, so if you have any type of prompt/topic, please let me know. I'll usually write about anything.

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 08/30/06 9:21
Chapter: James

Aw, this is so sweet! I found myself on your profile somehow, and saw no one had reviewed - But why not?? This is good!

Author's Response: Well, thanks! No one had reviewed because it was just put up. Thanks for the review, Pussycat123! --pp

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