PLEASE WRITE MORE XX :d

WOOOOOOT! That was so weat! You HAVE to write another chapter. R/Hr 4eva!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is on the way!

This is lovely! I think you could go either way-it could stand on its own but if you have more to add you could put out another chapter. Good work!
-Daisy

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll upload as a second chapter soon.

Aww, I liked it! Wondering though, are you refering to the slower version of the tune on her 2nd CD or the first, faster version on her debut? I had the slower version in my head... Anyway, some bits were confusing - seemed like the story jumped quickly at times (or maybe that was me??) and I had to backtrack to see what I had missed. But I thought you did a good job especially with the bit where Hermie is lost in space and Harry asks, "You like him, don't you?" Good job. Also the bit with H and R at the top of the stairs. Good stuff. I was a waitin' with baited breath. Hope you continue. Mmm... what about using "Hear Me" by Kelly Clarkson? Dunno if the lyrcis fit. But isn't it something about "being ready now?" Just a thought.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! I'll keep it in mind. I'm already working with the next part, and I already have a song. But you gave me yet another idea for another songfic, and it definitely features this pair :P Thanks!

Yes,,,Harrry is a bit...OC maybe you can include some of the whole HPB Lavender Madness in here...makes for a more juicy story...Your writing style is lovely...makes me shiver sometimes...CARRY ON!!! ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks! I will go on, I think I finally found the song for it!

awww....so sweet


Author's Response: Thanks ^ ^