Reviewer: Palisades
Date: 03/08/05 15:53
Chapter: Queer Lands

Again another breath taking, heart pumping, tear jerker! Why do you torment me! Update soon! Aloha~ Erin

Author's Response: I'm working on Chapter 9, and am doing the fine tuning for it. (bascially I'm rewritting alot of it.) My goal is to have it submitted by the weekend.

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 03/06/05 14:49
Chapter: Queer Lands

there are so many different feelings and meanings in the story, especially in the poem, congrats 2 whoeva wrote it. so sad, but so good. lol, harry has a gun

Author's Response: A joint Muggle Wizard Operation. lol He has to carry a gun. Just wait till you see Dumbledore during the battle!

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 03/05/05 11:25
Chapter: Queer Lands

Wow that is all I can say. That was really good. It had a very deep meaning in it. Update soon.

Author's Response: I thought it did too. Espically the poem that my friend let me use just for this story.

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 03/03/05 17:53
Chapter: A Gift, and a Terrible Twist of events

That was a great chapter. What was the deal with mugglenet?

Author's Response: I had a bit of a disagreement with one of the moderators. This particular moderator whom I shall never disclose, told me it wasn't a great idea to post anything related to sept 11 because it could easily offend people. Which is understandable, I could see where they were coming from. However, the reason I disagreed, came strictly from they way I felt when 9/11 occured. I was definately offend when I saw this going on my TV. I was offended when I got called out to go to back to Kuwait, after only being home for 3 days, then was told I had to stay for an undetermined time. So strictly speaking, I had thought that quiting posting on this site would be the answer. And for those who wanted the rest of the story, I would send it to them. However what changed my, mind was two things, one the medical condition that had occured, and the second was when SunChilde and I Posted the last chapter to our story, and I realized how much I missed the review for my own story.So I contacted the moderator who has done 99% of the moderating, and asked her to moderate the rest of the story for me. Since she has agreed to do this for me, I solved my problem with Mugglenet. I'm glad to be posting again too. I missed everyone.

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 03/03/05 17:40
Chapter: A Gift, and a Terrible Twist of events

Where were you? I am glad you are still updating.

Author's Response: I had to blow off some steam, as I was rather frustrated with mugglenet at the time I quit posting.

Reviewer: lilystargirl
Date: 03/03/05 14:20
Chapter: Harry’s Confession

Really great story! It's an interesting take on life after Hogwarts.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: elfgive
Date: 03/02/05 18:35
Chapter: Like no Place on Earth

excellent. you konw i like that excellent authors like you add this kind of silence sex, what do i mean with this, that i love when you actually say that they did it, and they talk about it, but what i hate its that moderators dont leave you put only minor deatils, well let me tell you that you are an excellent writer and your story is one the bests ive read here. keep on work.SUBMIT SOON

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, I'm hoping chapter 8 will be up soon.

Reviewer: Palisades
Date: 02/27/05 16:10
Chapter: A Gift, and a Terrible Twist of events

Hey Bob! I figure you should see this. I was wondering if you got my response email reguarding Hawai'i? Hotmail placed you email in my Junk file! That's why it took me so long to write back. That and I was busy. Norwescon is coming up and I've been prepairing my Hogwarts robe :) I made sure that I can now accept your emails, so if you do write back, I can obtain them through my inbox! So until I hear from you...Aloha~ Erin PS: I'm really suprised that a guy wrote a brilliant romance story!! Very impressive. Please check out mine! It's on; my Penname is Pacific Palisades and the story is entitled: "One Summer's Holiday" its a Ron/Hermione romance. Have a good one!!

Author's Response: I'll definately take a look at your story. I have gotten your e-mail and I just haven't had the chance to reply

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 02/22/05 12:33
Chapter: A Gift, and a Terrible Twist of events

that was such a gr8 chapter, u really no how 2 xpress feelins really well, gr8 wrk! i luv the way u realted everything that happened into ur story, it fitted very well, and im anticipatin harry as an officer very eagerly! all the best, james

Author's Response: I hope I don't let you down. I'll be submitting chapter 8 probaly sometime this week. Just have some fine tuning to do.

Reviewer: Palisades
Date: 02/19/05 9:49
Chapter: A Gift, and a Terrible Twist of events

Wow! I really don't know what to say except...Bravo! That was very, very well stated. It just made me rethink about it all, and makes me appreciate my life ever more! Keep up the writing, and PLEASE let Harry be okay!!! You're Hawaiian Cousin in Spirit~ Erin

Author's Response: Thank you once again for your review. I should have chapter 8 up here soon. Speaking of Hawaii, Oh lord I can't wait for my nice little two week vacation that the National Guard is going to send me on next month. March 13th- March 26.

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 02/15/05 16:05
Chapter: The Wedding

lol, this has bin on my faves 4 ages, an i just realised i hvnt reviewed! soz. this is a gr8 story, u really manage to show the various situations the characters find themselves in to be almost realistic! its gr8 writing. hopin chp 7 will b up soon, but i no ur goin thru hard times rite now (ive bin readin the lily diary story (good wrk there 2!)). best of luck and undying faith, well, at least im hopin my faith doesnt die...! james

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind sentiments. I have submitted chapter 7 and I'm hoping it will be up shortly.

Reviewer: Jaislin
Date: 01/30/05 16:57
Chapter: The Wedding

what do you mean you're finished posting on this site!? Am I still supposed to continue editing for you? Let me know what's happening, you know my email.

Author's Response: I sent you an email, with an explanination.

Reviewer: tsinay
Date: 01/25/05 4:12
Chapter: Harry’s Confession

*yawn!* it had honestly bored me.... -_-. there's obviously too many long paragraphs. because of that, i lost interest in reading your story... -_- *yawn!*

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: jeweledbuggy315
Date: 01/22/05 20:40
Chapter: The Wedding

omg! i loved it! i'm addicted to Hermione/Harry and Ginny/Harry romances! Keep writng and in an earlier chapter when you wrote Philosher's Stone it surprised me cuz i'm in America and have the Sorcer's Stone version... but i knew what you were talkin bout. Keep Writing! you are so good at this!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm having alot of fun writing this. I will most certainly continue updating this story. I'm an American as well, and I have the Sorcer's stone verison as well. I did send about 6 months in England though, with the Military. Anyhow, thank you for your review and I hope you continue to check for updates.

Reviewer: BVBandGirl
Date: 01/21/05 16:56
Chapter: The Wedding

I'm not much of a Harry/hermione girl but this is great!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writting!!!

Author's Response: I will I promise

Reviewer: Aidayla
Date: 01/21/05 15:21
Chapter: The Wedding

YES!!!! Long live Harmony!!! Wahoo!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed. The next chapter is where all the fun begins.*smiles michieviously*

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 01/19/05 18:02
Chapter: The Wedding

One word WOW that was great. I don't think anyone could write that any better.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: youngwriter16
Date: 01/19/05 16:21
Chapter: The Wedding

wow i love this chapter cant wait til u update

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: MissAmanda
Date: 01/18/05 18:22
Chapter: The Quidditch Tryouts

Th practices remind me of the movie Rudy. Did you get them from it? Anyway, abso-fabulistic story!

Author's Response: yeah, that where I did get the idea for the practices, anyhow, you'll find out why in later chapters. It seems to me, that harry is going to need the heart to not give up.

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 01/18/05 15:40
Chapter: The Border War

Really sorry I live in America and thought Harry was from it. Sorry you nailed it.

Author's Response: yeah he does seem to become more of an british-American.

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