Reviewer: AmericanMerlin
Date: 07/31/06 5:51
Chapter: The Quidditch Tryouts

Okay - Question:
What did 258 mean? I missed it?
Harry was back out on the practice field once again, doing his warm-ups with the rest of the hopeful team. Starting with jumping jacks. “1...2...3” yelled Coach Windall.

“258” yelled the team.

Author's Response: Answer: You know how in military, when your doing Jumping jacks, and you have an accadance, "1...2...3...ONE!" ect. so the number 258, is the number of jumping jacks the team was on. However, thank you for pointing out that particular typographical error.

Reviewer: AngelinaJohnsonII
Date: 07/27/06 1:30
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

It was good but u shuld hsv left the song by kenny rogers out,seriously,...somehow it was amusing and it ruined the ending....

Author's Response: I personally really like the song at the ending, and I felt at the time (and still do) that it really captured the moment. However, Thank you for letting me know how you felt about the ending. As a writer, it's always good to know what part the reader didn't like, so in the future I can readjust and make it that much better for the next story. Thank you for your reviews and I hope to see you as another reviewer for my new story that I have up, titled, "Harry Potter and the Army of Merlin."

Reviewer: hermioneharry
Date: 07/17/06 18:40
Chapter: Out with the old in with the new

Uhh. I believe that this is just me, but your story made an enormous leap there from being a cute relationship to marriage. They are still in school, and I guess it's just a bit sudden. I'll try to read on, but you skipped those 6 months that they were together.

Chapter 1 was beautiful though...

Author's Response: I hope you enjoyed at least. Thank you for your critical review.

Reviewer: caspa4harry
Date: 06/17/06 5:12
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

Fantastic keep on writing that was amazing!


Author's Response: thank you for reading

Reviewer: doodle
Date: 05/26/06 17:26
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

good job

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: annependragon
Date: 03/21/06 13:28
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

Loved the story from beginning to end. Excellant work, cried at the end it was that perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed my story.

Reviewer: fanofastar
Date: 03/11/06 12:47
Chapter: Harry’s Confession

n 'course i loved it. n i wud luv 2 read another story of yours (h/hr obviously - i m totally n only in favour of H/HR).

Author's Response: I think I might try putting together another H/Hr One Shot, just for the heck of it

Reviewer: fanofastar
Date: 03/11/06 11:57
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

brilliant efforts. i really do not have enough words 2 xpress or story, esp. that final war. BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!! i was crystal clear that u'd put all your efforts in writing that chapter, n not only that but the whole story. i wud've given it 1-2-the-power-infinity / 10 if i could. 1ce again, well done n keep up your good work always. good luck 4 next time.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: hawkeye555
Date: 02/01/06 1:34
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

Without a doubt, simply one of the HP fanfics ive EVER read, contratulations. The themes in this story must mean a lot to you and have a lot of personal significance as they are brought through in you emotive text. Thank you for writing it, it was touching and i LOVED it.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: hawkeye555
Date: 02/01/06 1:34
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

Without a doubt, simply one of the HP fanfics ive EVER read, contratulations. The themes in this story must mean a lot to you and have a lot of personal significance as they are brought through in you emotive text. Thank you for writing it, it was touching and i LOVED it.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time out and reading it. It's nice to know that people still read this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time out and reading it. It's nice to know that people still read this story.

Reviewer: muGGl3 b0rn
Date: 10/08/05 2:34
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

This is quite cute, I was definately surprised with the depth of this story [in terms of the 9-11]. The chapters were a bit long though, made it harder to read. But overall nice story!

Author's Response: Wow, I didn't even know that people were still reading this. lol thank you for your review.

Author's Response: Wow, I didn't even know that people were still reading this. lol thank you for your review.

Reviewer: Stelixus
Date: 07/22/05 23:56
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

Best story yet. Hope to see more Harry/Hermione stories soon.

Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 06/10/05 14:45
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

thanks for the spoilers, i'll check out ur books!

Author's Response: Not a problem at all, I hope you enjoy.:)

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 06/01/05 11:53
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

ooh is the prequel out now? will it be a Harry Hermione fic? will you write the stories as there old or? oh im sorry i have a million questions! Spoilers please!

Author's Response: The title of the newest fan fict that I have out is called "A Friends Betrayal?" You can view it here: http://www.fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=23182 It takes place back in Harry's sixth year at hogwarts. Harry and Hermione will be together in this story, but only at the end. I've designed it to be the story that lead up to this one. Updates will be rather slow for this story, simply because I'm extremely busy with other writing projects at the moment. The main one I need to worry about right now, is my second book, Titled "Courage in the Darkness." I need to that ready for publication. Since it is the sequel to my first book, "The Devils Little girl" which can be bought at the following website: www.publishamerica.com/books/8009. I'm also writing two other stories on top of all this. The first one is called a Summer of Adventure. It's going to be a comedy, about three guys who go to Woodstock back in 1969. Then my final project in which I'm bringing in a Co-author in this site, named binks. Her and I are going to combine a couple characters, in a romance/suspense story. The three that I just mention, I will not release too much information about, until they are ready for publication.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 05/31/05 16:35
Chapter: A Gift, and a Terrible Twist of events

wow you really had that dream that morning? thats scary

Author's Response: It was certainly intresting.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 05/29/05 19:27
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

wow. one of the best stories i've ever read!you write like a pro! this story has been delightful to read. Please continue to write. i really got the feeling of everything you wrote. amazing.... i loved this story so much and i can't wait to read your next stories. God Bless -IluvDanRad4ever

Author's Response: Let the Fun begin, The next story, (the Prequel) has just been approved. I'm talking It was just approved right when I started writing this reply. It's called A Friends Betrayal. Hope you enjoy that one as much as you did this one.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 05/29/05 18:52
Chapter: The World’s Most Desperate Hour

oh my gosh. oh my gosh. oh my oh my oh my.amazing, truly amazing. wowyou are a terrific writer. im at loss for words. * I am praying for you, and i hope you are safe when you go to war. God bless

Author's Response: If you can call that part of the world safe, I'll be in a safe spot. I'll be in Egypt.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 05/29/05 18:33
Chapter: Queer Lands

you are so talented and your making me cry! you really make me feel as if im there! excellent job!

Author's Response: A lot of people tell me that I make the feeling of being in the desert with the military, almost realistic. To be quite honest I really enjoyed my last trip over seas, it was trully and enlighting eye opening event.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 05/29/05 18:17
Chapter: A Gift, and a Terrible Twist of events

Wow, this story is so great. It's not just "fluff" its REAL! That really made me think and you put it well ( how you wrote it i mean) you are a talented writer and i am so glad to be reading this story.

Author's Response: This was once again, another chapter that I was extremely nervous about. Simply because I know to alot of people it is a sensitive subject. It definately was a tough one for me to write. I'd like to point to an intresting fact about this chapter. You know the dream sequence that Harry has? I had that same exact dream the morning of 9/11. It was truly a terrifying experience.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 05/28/05 21:27
Chapter: The Wedding

awww how cute! i love this story so much! I really hope they end up together in the real HP book! Loved it!

Author's Response: With the exception of the final chapter, I do believe that the wedding scene is my favorite chapter out of this entire story. I would love to see Harry and Hermione end up together in the books. That would make my day. Let me know what you think of the Great War that coming up. I know it's a sad time during the story, but I had a lack of reviews, so I'm not sure what people think of it over all.BTW be on the look out for the first chapter for the prequel. I just submitted the first chapter.

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