Reviewer: genie_girl90
Date: 05/31/08 22:29
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

=o i luv this story ^^

Author's Response: thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: chief laser cleaner
Date: 05/27/08 0:00
Chapter: Like no Place on Earth

good story

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it

Reviewer: wolfgirl78
Date: 03/06/08 22:53
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

i thought it was agreat storie i put it in my faves

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to know that people still read this story.

Reviewer: catheaven
Date: 09/28/07 19:08
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

wow! i loved the story!

Author's Response: wow! I didn't know that people were still reading this. Thank you for your kind review.

Reviewer: darmy
Date: 04/12/07 5:29
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

that was a great story write some more

Author's Response: I think I will work on some more stories.

Reviewer: Zlaker1001
Date: 03/11/07 20:14
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

Hey i got tingles reading this story it was great!!
It is almost as tingely as I have for waiting for my B-day!!!
Write more pwetty pwease!!!!

if i could rate it i'd gave you 11/10!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I'm planning on writing more. I have another story that I'm working on titled, "The Second War," I'd sure like it if you read that one.

Reviewer: kirwil
Date: 02/02/07 15:29
Chapter: Harry’s Confession

hi your story was really good but can you carry it on plz

Author's Response: I'm actually working on a different story now, I did start writing the Prequel for this one, however, book 6 was released and I had a stronger urge to write that one instead.

Reviewer: roxychick
Date: 01/29/07 22:16
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

i really loved this story. please do right another one. tanks for your story

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time out and reading it.

Reviewer: roxychick
Date: 01/29/07 22:16
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

i really loved this story. please do right another one. tanks for your story

Author's Response: thanks for reading

Reviewer: roxychick
Date: 01/29/07 22:15
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

i really loved this story. please do right another one. tanks for your story

Author's Response: thanks for reading

Reviewer: fergyfrog101
Date: 01/19/07 21:48
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

I really hope that you decide to write a sicual (or however you spell it). This was amazing and I really would love to hear more about the twins and the next little Potter. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS GREAT FICTION!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm still happy to hear that people review this story even almost two years later. Now as far as a Sequeal goes, well see. I'm currently writing another fan Fiction, contained with some orginal characters that I've created through the years. Hope you read it.

Reviewer: Morgana_XoXo
Date: 01/19/07 15:29
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

sorry i didn't review your other chapters, but this one is by far my favorite! I think the love between harry and hermione is just so wonderful. I have always dreamed of finding love like that. I also like how you named the twins ron and ginny. That made me cry. I really hope you write a sequel and a good name for the new baby would be Jane or lily if its a girl and James or bill or charlie.

Author's Response: It's alright for not reviewing my other chapters. I'm just thrilled to see that after so long since this story was finished, that people are still reviewing it. Thank YOU for your review

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 01/09/07 0:00
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

The only problem I saw with this story is Ginny's name. It is Ginevra. lol. Other than that I liked it alot. I'm a southerner. from TX. so yeah. I'm a Johnny Reb. But I don't like country lol. But yeah. It was good.

Author's Response: It's so good to know that people still read this story, almost two years later. Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed my story, and I invite you to read another story I'm working on, it's based on two orginal characters that I've created and really enjoy writing about. Plus hey, Ernie and Darryl will make a return in this story as well. I loved writing those two guys they are so much fun.

Reviewer: Zephyrius Braveheart
Date: 01/08/07 10:36
Chapter: Out with the old in with the new

Very nice. July 16th just happens to be my birthday :D

Author's Response: I hope to hear that you've continued on with this story, as I'm intrested in hearing what you have to say about it.

Reviewer: catheaven
Date: 12/08/06 19:46
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

i liked it ..but what happened after hermione told harry shes pregnet again? was it a girl boy did they accept their childrens acceptance form to hogworts ?

Author's Response: Ron and Ginny did indeed go to Hogwarts, and 9 months later Hermione had a baby Girl, named Kali.

Reviewer: Cleo316
Date: 11/09/06 22:08
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

Love it !
You seem like a very good person.
How do I figure this ?
I saw few profanitys that didn't add to the story or character , noticed a lot of Christian veiws of stuff and what-not, and you didn't let evil win.
You have my seal of aproval.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I'm currently working on another one, if you care to read it. It in the General Fic section. It's called Harry Potter and the Army of Merlin.

Reviewer: Cleo316
Date: 11/09/06 20:31
Chapter: A Gift, and a Terrible Twist of events

I very much like this story and how you intertwine the real world with the magical one.
Very cool.
My birthday is Feb 12. Just thought I'd point that out ,seeing as it's a key date in this chapter.
I also like the Christian themes that I see in the story ( Such as Hermione not losing her virginity until marrige ) , Very well done.

Author's Response: I'm glad you really enjoy this story. About the Date mention in this chapter, well it's my nephew's birthday as well, but that's not the reason I picked it to be honest. That day was also Abe Lincoln's Birthday as well.

Reviewer: big_bookie15
Date: 09/07/06 12:24
Chapter: The Great Homecoming


Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, I'm currently working on a second FanFic that is totally unrelated to this one. Its call Harry Potter and the Army of Merlin.

Reviewer: big_bookie15
Date: 09/07/06 11:08
Chapter: The Quidditch Tryouts

Good chapter, and you obviously love the movie Rudy a lot. Might want to get a spell-check program though.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and yes Rudy is one of my all time favorite movies.

Reviewer: AmericanMerlin
Date: 07/31/06 8:02
Chapter: The Great Homecoming

I liked it a lot - there were certain cannon "flaws" but nothing too outside of reality. Militarily - I had to laugh. No one I know calls it a "gun." That made me laugh. It was very imaginative too - the battle scene was well constructed without too much gore. The use of patriotic music was warming. It was a good attempt at understanding the characters - H and H were a little 2 dimensional - Molly was one dimensional. I think you could have expanded on the school and training a bit. Life is about living – so show me their lives.
All in all, I think you did a good job. You have potential to be a great writer. Keep writing.

Author's Response: I know the M-16 is known (atleast in the army) as a "poodle killer" because that all those pieces of **** are good for.LOL but seriously, thank you for you review, I had alot of fun writing this and I'll work harder on the next story to show you there lives. As long as people keep reading, I'll keep writing.

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