Reviews For Alone
Reviewer: muggler180
Date: 02/20/07 22:00
Chapter: The Truth Comes Out

i am going to go crazy update soon

Author's Response: I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry. I'm working on it, I swear.

Reviewer: RichNerdy
Date: 02/11/07 4:17
Chapter: The Truth Comes Out

i love u (only if ur a female though) and i love leahface (only if shes a female though.

i no ive written silly/idiotic things *i hope sniviles kills nell* but i would like to say that u are a very talented young lady and as is ur frend leahface

Author's Response: Yesh, LeahFace and I are both female and appreciate the love. I appreciate the comments and the reviews. Thanks.

Reviewer: RichNerdy
Date: 02/11/07 4:07
Chapter: Meaning in the Meetings

god snape is cool with a k

Author's Response: In Grammar school where I live, that used to mean you smoked. :P

Reviewer: RichNerdy
Date: 02/11/07 3:59
Chapter: Stand By Me

i hope snape murders nell,

just thought id add a random comment

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you're so concerned for Nell's well-being. She appreciates it. :P

Reviewer: RichNerdy
Date: 02/11/07 2:59
Chapter: Déja-vu

i love u

Author's Response: Good to know I'm not unloved in the world.

Reviewer: RichNerdy
Date: 02/11/07 2:52
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

lol i was readining it absentmindedly and i finaally relised it was set in James P. times, normally i hate such things but this is pretty tops!

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: RichNerdy
Date: 02/11/07 2:43
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

if the girl didnt have the name nell and she had black hair i would give 10/10

Author's Response: A depressed girl with black hair is too cliché... not to mention that all of the other main characters have black hair... But I'm going to take this as a compliment since it was ALMOST a 10/10. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 02/07/07 18:03
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

I love your characterization of your OCs. OCs always amaze me because authors have to build them from scratch.

Nell had begun to notice just how much she had changed when she watched Addie. She was so outgoing, practically the whole school knew her. There was nothing about Addie you wouldn’t love. She had a killer smile, loved to watch Quidditch (though you wouldn’t catch her playing it); she always knew exactly what to say to make any situation funny. Addie was nearly perfect. Nell used to be just like her; used to be.

I love how you portray emotions in this story. The way Nell feels isolated from the rest of her peers is really accurate for anyone who is grieving or who has suffered from a trauma.

You really make us feel for Nell, and she's one of the most realistic D/A characters I've read. Moreover, you deal with the topic of rape with great grace and care, and I'm sure all readers appreciate that.

I truly think you have a winner here, Gabby. From the stunning characterization to the lovely characters, I think it's got huge amounts of potential.

I'm still waiting for the plot, but I enjoy the slow build-up. :) I'll keep reading, if not reviewing, and I'm glad I got the chance to check this out!

Great work!


Author's Response: You have no idea how nice it is to get a new review and then you look at it to find that it's a nice and constructive review. It's good to get a review that doesn't have any form of squee in it every once in a while. I'm glad you like the story and I am so happy to hear that you think that the characters are realistic. *hugs* Thank you for the nice review Kums. Oh, and the plot shows a bit more in later chapters. *hugs again*

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 02/04/07 18:35
Chapter: The Truth Comes Out

forgot to add this to my favorites.

Author's Response: *smiles* You've made my night better :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Demon Hunter
Date: 02/04/07 9:52
Chapter: The Truth Comes Out

I think this chapter is AWESOME! just like the rest of the story! I like the way you portray Nell and the others and convey their feelings! Wonderful! Full of brilliant ideas! Keep on writng and take care!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 02/04/07 9:08
Chapter: The Truth Comes Out

I really like this. Please don't take long to update. I can't wait until Remus beats Severus up. Or at least that's just what I hope, lol, wonderful job!

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that you like it. Makes my insides smile to know that people enjoy my story. Thanks so much for your reviews, and I'll try not to take TOO long writing chapter eight.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 02/04/07 8:53
Chapter: Meaning in the Meetings

What is Severus playing at...ohh, how I hate him. I hope Nell and Remus will be together.

Author's Response: *ahem* No comment *smirk* Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 02/04/07 8:27
Chapter: Stand By Me

ohh...I love Remus. He is too sweet. And what is Addie thiking!!!Poor Nell when she finds out.

Author's Response: I love Remus too :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: muggler180
Date: 02/03/07 20:42
Chapter: The Truth Comes Out

omg this chapter was worth the wait i hope you update soon

Author's Response: It may be a bit before the next chapter. I've hit a bit of a roadblock, but no worries, it'll be up soon enough. I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 02/03/07 20:39
Chapter: Déja-vu

Ohh...that's freaky! Very good job, it's well-written. Poor Nell. And you really had got me there thiking it was Sirius.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the compliments!

Reviewer: Lily Roxy
Date: 02/03/07 19:13
Chapter: The Truth Comes Out

Loved it:). This chapter was very clever, you're very good at keeping Nell curious while still cautious.

That truth or dare game was very revealing, a little intense even. I got a few laughs too, which balanced the chapter out nicely.

Can't wait for next chapter!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sophie_McKinsley
Date: 02/01/07 21:32
Chapter: Hidden Scars

I really am enjoying this story. Nell's paranoia seams only natural in this. I know personally I hate to give characters flaws and feel like I'm doing them an injustice, but I think that her actions are only natural. To not be traumatized after something like that would be unnatural. I really like your characterization.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the compliment! Yes, it would be unnatural for her not to be paranoid. And for a little tip, all of the best characters have at least one flaw. Look at Harry! He's Angsty as heck!

Reviewer: muggler180
Date: 01/12/07 7:43
Chapter: Meaning in the Meetings

omg this is getting really good i hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll probably put it in queue by Sunday.

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 01/10/07 18:51
Chapter: Meaning in the Meetings

The emotions in the story...its so touching. Again, your writing style is lovely. The only problem I have is with that friend of Nell's...well, first I thought it all moved a bit too quickly after Nell told Addie what happened, Addie moved on too quickly and ignored Nell for Sirius.

And Addie seems like a good friend at times, and a bad friend at others...kind of an odd complaint, but...

Still love it,


Author's Response: Addie is like a friend I have. She's one of my best, yet sometimes a bit clueless and all that Jazz. I guess maybe she seems a bit unrealistic, but I've based her off a real person, so I guess I did the best I could. In any case... I'm glad you like my story. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 01/10/07 18:38
Chapter: Stand By Me

Your writing is so eloquent, so flows so nicely...ah! Bliss. :-)

*runs off to read next chappie*

Don't worry, I'll leave a more concrit review next chapter!

Author's Response: Thankee!

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