Reviews For Alone
Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 09/01/06 4:14
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

Wow. Amazing first chapter! You write really well, even I was scared at the image of her walking alone at night! This looks like being a great story. I'll definately read the next chapter! In fact, I'm adding it to my favourites.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so happy you like it. Yay! Added to favourites. Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: peacock_girl15
Date: 08/31/06 23:47
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

ok, so what I get from this so far is the boy is definitely snape and for some reason I'm thinking he's about 16? But the description of the boy fits snape so well. Poor Nell though! How awful! Does her name stand for some longer name by the way? And if the boy is snape, who thought he could be strong? I'm interested to see what happens! I don't usually venture into the dark/angsty fics. I tend to stay with the lighter hearted romance ones or a humor. But good job on getting me to read this! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, it's Snape alright! He's a seventh year, Nell is a fifth. Nell doesn't stand for anything longer, I don't even know where I came up with it. I'm glad you decided to venture into dark/angsty fics and I am sooo glad it was my fic to get you to do it! Thanks so much for the review!!

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 08/31/06 23:41
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

Great start. I like how you described Nell, and her encounter with the greasy haired git. I mean, the greasy haired boy. I am looking forward to see where you go with this.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the review! I had four reviews before I even knew it was accepted!!!!! I already have chapter two written, so it shouldn't be TOO long before it's up.

Reviewer: Slytherin101
Date: 08/31/06 23:18
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

tom riddle!!! omg! poor nell. it kinda got confusing at the end but oh well. very good! i'd like to read on!

Author's Response: First review!!! Yay!!! Tom Riddle? No... *smirk* It's Marauder Era... Any guesses as to who it is now? Thanks so much for reviewing!!!

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