Reviews For Alone
Reviewer: blackpaw93
Date: 09/07/06 4:12
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

OMG, Gabby, I saw the next button, and I was saying to myself, oh come on, please, please, PLEASE! be there! But it wasn't. Poop :p

I love the way you told Nell's difference from before the incident. How she was clingy to her mum but just had to stick around Addie.

Plus, Sirius is, once again, hot. And I like it. :D

Author's Response: Hopefully it'll be there soon! *crosses fingers* I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 09/07/06 1:56
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

Another fantastic chapter! It was so sad, how it had affected her like that, but at the same time very realistic and believeable. It makes me want to cry, that poor girl. Well done! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you feel like it's realistic. it's always a relief to hear that about a story. I'm glad you liked it.! Chapter three is in queue!!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FrankieHart13
Date: 09/06/06 21:36
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

yup its offical this is my favorite story on here!

Author's Response: You have no idea how much that means to me. Thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad you like my story so much. Your review just made my night.

Reviewer: FrankieHart13
Date: 09/06/06 19:04
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

woah this is really good! hope you update pretty soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm working on updating it :)

Reviewer: Phoenix5225
Date: 09/06/06 18:05
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

Gabby -

I read it, I modded it, I can't wait to read more of it. Though I am hurt at the thought of my favourite character being capable of rape, I am sure you know where you're going with this.

Normally, I dislike modding dark/angsty but today it was worth my while! :-)


Author's Response: Oh! I'm so glad you like it. It means a lot to me to get such nice reviews. Yes, I do know where I'm going with this. The only obstacle is finding time to write it all.

Reviewer: Shia
Date: 09/06/06 17:31
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

wow i like your story! hurry with some more chapters!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!! I have chapter three written, but I think I'm going to make you guys wait a bit in order to see it *evil smirk* Maybe I'll submit it once I have chapter four written. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: whittyleah
Date: 09/06/06 14:58
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

*chills* As you already know, I love it! You wrote the emotions well and the storyline is fantastic! *knows what happens next* hehehehe! I can't wait to read more of this story and what you have planned next!


Author's Response: As you already know... It would have stunk with out you!!!

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 09/06/06 14:32
Chapter: Alone in a Crowd

I love the interactions between Nell and Addie. This story is coming along well. I can't wait to read more

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Seeing as chapter three is already written, I will be submitting it ... in about ten minutes...Thanks so much for the review!!

Reviewer: Zacko Borni
Date: 09/06/06 14:20
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

Great story! Laughed the whole time.

Author's Response: *no further comment*

Reviewer: Zacko Borni
Date: 09/06/06 14:20
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

Great story! Laughed the whole time.

Author's Response: Laughed?!!!?!?!!??!!! *holds back horrible comment that is likely to get me suspended from the site* The storyis about a girl who got raped... you shouldn't be laughing...

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 09/05/06 12:01
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

Like some others have said, it is a bit dark for you. But, you answered those questions like a sane sane as you can be when you write Harry Potter Fanfiction.... * *

Author's Response: I know it's a bit dark/scary/depressing... but I assure you. I am sane and happy and.... all that other jazz. : )

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 09/05/06 11:58
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

hola! It's me! I have to say, this is one of my favorite favorite favorite fics. It has verything I my favorite author
and friend!!!


Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I should have two up within a few days, unless it's not approved... then it may take a bit longer.

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 09/02/06 23:58
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

By the way, I would read Speak if I were you. I bet you could get inspiration for your story from it, and it's really good.

Author's Response: I will if I get the chance : )

Reviewer: Mrs Jim McGuffin
Date: 09/02/06 10:47
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

Snape Rape! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!

No really, its a good story.

But it's a bit dark for you. I'm worried about your psychological well-being. Are you sad? How does that make you feel? Do you ever contemplate suicide? How do you get along with your parents? Your friends?

No really, I like it. Not one of your best stories, but very good.

Author's Response: No. I feel happy. No again. Fine. Brilliantly. *not one of my best stories, eh?!* That's just because you'd rather read a cliché and fluffy story where, before Snae gets her, Sirius randomly pops up and saves the day then makes out with Nell, and NO! That was absolutely NOT the original plotline!

Author's Response: Oh yes, thanks for the review... *smiles*

Reviewer: vampirebabe
Date: 09/01/06 20:46
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

ooh snapples now theres a mystery on who this boy who i thought was tom riddle is....hmmmm...
well then i am guessing either snape or sirius...but as i believe snape was poor, he wouldn't be living in a huge mansion so...sirius you bastad!

Author's Response: *smirk* That's all I have to say. Don't you wish you had that second chapter?

Reviewer: vampirebabe
Date: 09/01/06 20:43
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

whoa this is deff the best-written story ive ever read on fanfic, and the storys rly interesting as well. CAPTIVATING:]

now wheres my second chapter, eh????

Author's Response: "whoa this is deff the best-written story ive ever read on fanfic" Holy Moly. That's big. I'm like speechless! The second chapter is being reworked to fit more of Nell's thoughts in. Thank you so much for the review. You've made my night.

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 09/01/06 20:00
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

By the way, from the summary, this kind of sounds like a good book I read, called Speak.

Author's Response: I've never read that, but I've heard of it.

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 09/01/06 19:59
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

Oh nice. Very lovely. Well not lovely, what happened to Nell is awful, but you know what I mean :-)
My only complaint is that you could showed a bit more emotion from Nell. True, you did have some dialogue that expressed her feelings, but what's really going on inside her head?

What I liked: I really thought you did a great job capturing how vile the boy was.

Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I either show a lot of emotion or not enough. With me, there's no happy medium. I have to work on showing more emotion in the second chapter. I have it written, but my sources tell me it's lacking *goes to fix* Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: whittyleah
Date: 09/01/06 15:44
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper you know I love this! I know what is going to happen, but I can't wait to read more! This a great story and great OC's!


Author's Response: You know what I love?? I love your face... what now? lol... J/K J/K ... Thanks for the review and for listening to my plot bunny!!!

Reviewer: blackpaw93
Date: 09/01/06 5:10
Chapter: The Wind's Whisper

Brilliant story! I love the description of her feelings! I'm so happy you got in vaildated!

I'm guessing Snape, right? I could be wrong...

Author's Response: Abso-posi-lutely! It's Snape! Thanks so much for the review!!

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