cool chapter....
love sirius and james..
keep updating
When are you going to skip ahead to Seventh year? You really can't stay in first year forever. But I wonder why James isn't completly drooling over Lily. I wonder when he fall head over heels for her in thsi story.
Author's Response: Right now im just building for the seventh year, the first year is only a few chapters and then i spend like a chapter on each year until i get 2 5\th, ive written a lot already, im already finished with seventh year, just havent posted it yet
Crap, that's seriously based on Harry's first night. And everything else.
I mean, it's written well, and all.
Excellent!! Love love love this story!! I wish there were more stories like this one! Wonderful!
~JJ
really nice chapter........
plz don't take long to update.....
llol thats madd like almost every chapter the stuffs exactly the same as what happened to harry....llol thats kool
llol thats madd like almost every chapter the stuffs exactly the same as what happened to harry....llol thats kool
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This Is Really Good
I Can't Wait For More
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This Is Really Good
I Can't Wait For More
Great beginning, I'll read more later. I love the way you had the letter come to Lily's house. Thanks for reviewing story! :-)
its really nice....
plz update soon
Author's Response: im updating as soon as my beta reader gets bak to me. Thanx for the review
perfectly written! I exault you.
Author's Response: THanx so much!
This is a great story. I generally don't like stories that begin in Lily and James' first year, but this one is really good. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I don't really like ones that begin in the first year as well, but I'm not spending much time in those years. I plan on briefing through it to the mroe important parts. THe first year is just a founding for later on. Thanks 4 reviewing!
ooo! great story
when is chapter 4 coming?
Author's Response: as soon as my beta reader gets bak 2 me
ooo! great story
when is chapter 4 coming?
i like this story.. keep it up =-]
Author's Response: Thanx for reviewing. Hope you read more!
Good story so far! I like it, please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm updating as soon as my beta reader gets back to me on chap 4!
Keep going.........you're buiding something here. I want to know how it turns out.