Reviews For Never Forget
Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 08/02/07 0:22
Chapter: Never Forget

Once again, I'm truly floored by your wonderful story. This was such a beautiful, deeply personal piece. From beginning to end [and especially the first and last paragraphs] you've created such a beautiful story and beautiful character... it's amazing.


One thing I truly love about this story--besides the remarkable writing, of course--is that you managed to convey a message in such a natural way.... simple but not forced, beautiful but not over-the-top.


On a personal note, although I've [fortunately] never been bullied, your story really makes me realize how much one person can do to help another out. I've been known to defend people who are teased... Defend them, I guess, I've never really befriended them. *nods* But your story shows how much good a kind word can do. It's inspiring, really, and just plain beautiful.


I love seeing how far you have gone into really exploring Luna's character. Even her brief little speech ["They don't think I feel like others do..."] was so poingant and beautiful, and truly shows great insight into her persona. And the first paragraph! I can't even begin to say how wonderful your yoyo metaphor is.


Hm. I seem to be saying this a lot today, but you're amazing. Great job. I can't stress that enough.

Author's Response: Thank you so much wonderful reviewer! I got the idea for this fic after thinking about all the muggle-borns tormented by bullies like Malfoy, and I wanted to explore that more with my own character. Thanks again!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/24/06 12:25
Chapter: Never Forget

That's why I count when I'm waiting for sleep. I have what you call, a mild case of Insomnia. Not fun.

Luna is so brave and she's so smart; she's like Hermione but different. Poor Sara. I'm glad I don't get teased; I just don't have friends.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Snapes_secret
Date: 10/25/06 7:03
Chapter: Never Forget

The first paragraph is wonderful. The analogy between the yo-yo and spiraling down into hateful thoughts was very well conceived and written. You nailed Luna perfectly. Dreamy, strangely odd and yet comforting.

Overall this is a lovely story that speaks eloquently of learning to deal with bullies, being teased and helping others.

(Snapes_secret here/Snape's Talon elsewhere)

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, I do love Luna. I have a Luna one-shot in queue actually...

Reviewer: h3art0f1nk
Date: 09/27/06 21:01
Chapter: Never Forget

Ooh! I liked that! I love how you wrote it. My favorite part was the first paragraph; it was capturing. Write more! You're talented!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! The beginning is my favorite part too. PS: Watch out for some reviews of your own.

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 09/08/06 13:34
Chapter: Never Forget

hi!! I found the time to read and reveiw you absolutely amazing fic! It was wonderful, and I really have to agree with everyone below!!!

Author's Response: WHOHOO!

Author's Response: I'm so silly..I meant whoohooo.... :-)

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/04/06 23:18
Chapter: Never Forget

Wow wow wow...
This is so easy to relate to. You are SO TALENTED!!!
Keep up the amazing work : )

Author's Response: *happy dance*

Reviewer: BeautyInTheBreakdown
Date: 08/31/06 17:05
Chapter: Never Forget

Awww! It's so good! I am in love with the first section! It's so good! I love this story! It's amazing. Keep writing!! Because you rock at it!

Author's Response: Yippee! The beginning is my favorite part too! I will keep writing! Check your reviews!

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