wonderful!
i like the poetry... it adds a nice touch to the story.
Author's Response: Thankiez!
I liked it. What is Schmoop?
Author's Response: thanks! And I have no idea :P
What a great story! I enjoyed reading it immensely. I especially love how you added the poetry to it; I think that added to it so much.
~emoprincess26
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! :D
Haha, no, I meant what a beautiful start. Like, the opening. Also, something I forgot to say before, that's a really good poem. :)
Author's Response: Ohh! Haha thanks a lot. If it weren't for that poem, I'd never be able to write the story (which I wrote about 3-4 days before the deadline...wow that was one crazy week :P)
hi! I love the story already..Great first chap! U are soo talented and u have this unique way of writing. Hope you can respond when ur free..again, amazing chap and keep it up. i always love ur work..
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! But this story is a oneshot. As in, there's no more! :P
Wow, what a beautiful start. Amazing. Bravo!
Author's Response: A beautiful start to what? This fic is finished. It's a one-shot. :P
omg! sooo good!
Author's Response: omg! thank yiou!
This was the request:
Three things you want your fic to include:
1. Golden Trio Seventh Year
2. The Giant Squid
3. Draco/Hermione
Three things you do not want your fic to include:
1. D and H being head boy/girl
2. Harry and ron magically being ok with the relationship
3. any sort of violence
Anything specific that you do not want to write: they cant just *poof* fall for each other. some basis for relationship plz and thnx!!!
Author's Response: Um...What is this?
this was interesting. I like it.
Author's Response: that's nice to know. Thanks.
This was... really good. it was different
Author's Response: :D thanks
This was great! Yeah first to review! Very nice job, this was an overal great story, liking how you brought up the deaths of Hermione's friend. Awesome story! :{ )
Author's Response: Thank you and yes, I figured I should add that Ron died. After all when people share the same pain and sorrow (deaths of loved ones) they are able to connect more. And what better way to connect Draco and Hermione than by death?
