Good. I had to skip over the first part because it was a bit dull. (Not the writing, not at all). It was only because it was kinda depressing... :/
I really liked this. It was powerful and somehow, for a one-shot, had quite a believable demi-plot. The poetry was fabulous too; you have quite a gift.
Great job.
This...this...was...a...ONE SHOT?!!! * sob,sob, sniff,sniff* WHY ARE U ALL SO CRUEL? A few other stories I loved have been one-shots.....now this one....hemm. Well, anway-great story!!! What's 'Temporary?' anybody mind explaining? another story on dramionie? if it is, what page is it on? what's the site address? i wanna read it! KEEP WRITING- you have talent, misssy!
I really like it.I was wondering if you could write a story(WHEN YOU HAVE TIME) about:
Hermione/Draco ship
Affairs with Ron
Ginny/Harry
Sexual Sensations
Thanks
BYE! **waves**
Jenna Emily MacDonald
that was wonderful!! a lil' freaky when they just sat in a field of dead bodies (euh!!) but very well written
this was very sad but it was a true fic. it seemed as though if draco and hermione were really together it seems like it would be like this. It was really good! :)
where do you find the time to write all these great fics? another fantasic one i love your work
O & I FORGOT TO MENTION... the poetry in the story was sooo captivating n i like the way it tied the story together... WONDERFUL JOB!!! u going on my favs!
Incredible!!!! ladies and gentlemen i think we have a winner!
Lady K
That was pretty good. I hated the part where everyone died, though. People should live!
hello? could it have been anymore vague. it was ok, but i don't get it. war, lots of death and draco and hermione sleep together, right. there needs to be more, does she ever kill him, do they sleep together again? but it was ok
6 out of 10
oh what a fantastic story!!!
you ever think about a sequel for temporary????!!!!!!
keep up the good work!!!
i actually like it, you are the best writer i have ever seen, i would love to see something that isn't about harry potter being published. Keep that in mind
i actually like it, keep going, I'm exited to see how you could possibly end this wonderful fic.
you are the best writer i have ever seen, i would love to see something that isn't about harry potter being published. Keep that in mind
I like this story, what happens next?
You are evil!!!!! I thought that this was the sequel for 'temporary' !!:( when is it coming? But anyway, this was really good.
