Reviewer: amzing
Date: 05/21/07 14:18
Chapter: The Waves Will Wash it Away

amzing ..specially the last part

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 04/06/07 13:43
Chapter: The Waves Will Wash it Away

Very good. I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 08/26/06 16:53
Chapter: The Waves Will Wash it Away

Such a loverly poem! :) I liked that the wording was simple, not pretentious, and that you kept it pretty consistant style-wise. It was nicely deep, and I'd actually say that it's one of the better poems on MNFF.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 08/25/06 20:54
Chapter: The Waves Will Wash it Away

I'm seeing a lot of Pansy fics lately, and I must say I enjoy them. I really liked this poem. The fact you kept repeating "mask" was interesting; not only did it make me wonder what Pansy is hiding behind her evil exterior, it also reminded me of Phantom of the Opera. Anyway, this was a really great poem. I liked the capitilization of every line, even the one worders. Great poem!

Author's Response: Yeah, the stories kind of make me think of Phantom of the Opera. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Yeah, the stories kind of make me think of Phantom of the Opera. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 08/25/06 17:27
Chapter: The Waves Will Wash it Away

The poem flows very nicely; your descriptions were done very well. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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