Reviews For I Swear to Protect
Reviewer: Gred_and_Feorge_4eva
Date: 03/23/11 17:27
Chapter: One-shot

This was amazing. it almost made me cry and that NEVER happens.
Beautiful story

Reviewer: bettab911
Date: 10/23/08 12:47
Chapter: One-shot

Excellent! I like how you flicked between past memories and the present particularly.

Author's Response: Thanks. Flashbacks are one of my favorite styles to write in.

Reviewer: Raven582
Date: 03/06/08 21:46
Chapter: One-shot

Its so sad but so good

Author's Response: thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 06/02/07 14:30
Chapter: One-shot

Wow, what a great explaination of what occured that day in Godric Hallow, and I love your portrayal of Sirius! 8)

Author's Response: Thankyou so much!

Reviewer: bettab911
Date: 11/24/06 7:24
Chapter: One-shot

Touching and moving. Excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: maraudermaniac42
Date: 10/11/06 17:21
Chapter: One-shot

Wow, that was deep... I can't imagine what Sirius must have been going through at that time...

Author's Response: Well, me niether but this is just my perspective. You never know exactly I spose

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 09/03/06 13:31
Chapter: One-shot

OMG!! this story was soooo good..and sad but just so amazing...you did a great job with Sirius's character...he can be tricky to write sometimes but you nailed it!! oh, and potions_perfection-that review/poem's awesome.

Author's Response: thankyou very much. I definately have to say that after Ron, Sirius is my favorite character to write. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/02/06 23:45
Chapter: One-shot

I just found your story, and I must say that it was great! You portray Sirius in a much more mature fashion then many people, and I love that! The last lines were the best. I think that Sirius sitting in the pew at the church was great also! Thanks for the great story!


Author's Response: wow, what an awsome review. Thank you so much for your great input. I try as hard as I can to make people act their age...which is kind of hard seeing as I'm only fifteen and don't really know what it's like to be twenty. Anyways, thanks for the review and check out some of my other work!

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 08/29/06 23:48
Chapter: One-shot

Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, Prongs,
Still the legend
Rages on.
Two are dead and one
Turned bad.
One remains,
though four they had.

Author's Response: That kinda made me teary eyed......

Reviewer: wonwon_hermy
Date: 08/29/06 19:54
Chapter: One-shot

aww wow that made me really sad but i cant wait to read more of this story soon hopefully

Author's Response: this one is actually done but you can read some of my other work

Reviewer: guiding ray of sunlight
Date: 08/29/06 14:25
Chapter: One-shot

OMG! such a sad fic! I could feel Sirius's pain. His words to Lily and James are so touching, and the flashbacks *shivvers and sobs* Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. And don't worry I've still got a lot of stories coming.

Reviewer: HJaneWeasley
Date: 08/29/06 13:17
Chapter: One-shot

oh, this is so sweet. it's not really how I imagined it happening, but it's still so...touching. I feel sad now- you have a way with words. =). it's good for a first non-romance fic. the styles are so contrasting with "normal" fics and romance fics, so it's pretty difficult to get used to.

Author's Response: Thankyou sooo much. What a great first review! I'm so happy that this finally got accepted. I had made so many different versions and this is what came out so I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!

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