Reviewer: ms_ski
Date: 11/27/06 14:03
Chapter: My Lover's Box

ahh... such a sad chapter. i think this is the last chapter that i read over at so here is how i want it to end- ginny defeats voldy, buys a cute little house somewhere with lots of sunshine and flowers and her and her son live happily ever after. i know this is a long shot, but it is what i am hoping for. can't wait to see what you actually have in store for us, though. I know it is going to be great!

Author's Response: It really is, isn't it?? I never thought about it, but it's just somewhat bitter throughout the entire thing. *sigh*
SO that's how you want your ending, huh?? Hmm... well, so far, I'm sorry to say, I've horribly disappointed EVERY single one of my readers when it comes to my endings. ONe person went as far as to say "can't you write a HAPPY ending?!? *read: Harry lives*" But the ending is written, and thus it shall remain, but I won't go any further or I'll give it all away right here.... I will say that I don't think you'll be... 'disappointed'. :-)

Reviewer: Watso295
Date: 11/27/06 6:12
Chapter: My Lover's Box

nice chapter, i guess its leading to a big battle, ginny seems to be sorting out all loose ends and getting ready to take him out.... cant wait....!!!! Watso295

Author's Response: You guessed right... the next chapter has the whole plot coming to what I think is a fantastic finish... although others might think it brings it to a crashing halt. :-)

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 11/26/06 1:43
Chapter: Vow

Oh gosh, it's so so good to know that even though the Weasleys are gone, there are still people like the McClouds that make you believe in the human heart again. ...Good lord, I sound like a Hallmark card...ah well....

I can't belive Voldemort did that!!!! What am I saying? Yes I can, but even so! I wanted to cry when I read about Bill's and George's heads. That was a sick, sick, horrible thing to do. God, I hope Ginny gets Voldy good, because he's a sick bast*** who deserves to feel as much pain as he's caused! *screams in frustration*

Author's Response: Hahaha- and now we all know why Hallmark makes so much money. And you can say it--- because Voldemort relaly IS a bastard.

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 11/26/06 1:08
Chapter: A Stroke of Luck

Didn't it say that Exavier had a small tuft of red hair when he was born, or am I confusing this story with something else? Anyway, great chapter. Gosh, I miss Harry. It's hard having a Harry Potter story without him....haha.

Author's Response: Yes- I did write that. But, like most babies, Exavier hair will change color, and Ginny is wondering what it will end up like. If you're curious-- it will end up like the other twins' hair in my series: black, but with natural red chunky streaks. (hey, they're wizards- it could happen!)

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 11/26/06 0:48
Chapter: Not My Idea

Man, she's good!

Author's Response: She sure it. :-)

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/25/06 14:55
Chapter: Vow


I can just imagine that :D My friend almost ouked when watching House of Wax. I thought it was allright, nothing bad...

Does that make me sick? XD

Author's Response: NO it doesn't. BUt I've never seen it, so I guess I'm not qualified to answer. If it makes you feel any better, I thought The Exorcist was stupid.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 11/25/06 1:14
Chapter: My Lover's Box

I hope the story ends well for her. The new outfit sounds really cool!

Author's Response: Me too. I want one.

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 11/24/06 21:04
Chapter: As Heaven is Wide

Hermione is a Gryffindor. What happened? Ron's death should have hardend her resolve even more to fight Voldemort with every last bit of energy she could muster, rather than run off to become a sodding politician who cares more about her career than her friends. What happened to her??

Oh, and if Melinda was a real person, I'd track her down just to punch her in the face. Just thought I'd say that.

Author's Response: What happened?? I'm going to say that Hermione had a mid-life crisis. It was like she was all set to bungee jump and at the last second, she got cold feet. Or you could use the marriage analogy, whatever works for you. I personally favor the Braveheart depiction: Mel Gibson (as William Wallace) refused to take the sedative from the french queen, saying that he would need all his wits about him if he were to face the evil and win. Hermione, on the other hand, took the sedative, and then hung herself, rather than go down with honor. If you ever do meet Melinda-- PLEASE DO!

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 11/24/06 20:38
Chapter: Only Happy When it Rains

I once heard that Charlie Chaplin won third place in a Charlie Chaplin look-alike contest. Has the world gone completely mad? Honestly....

Anyway, I really liked this chapter. I'm glad Ginny hasn't lost her sense of humor through all of this. So, did someone win the contest, or was it called off on account of the Death Eaters? =]

Author's Response: Hahahhaa- that's what I wrote to another reviewer. Im glad I'm not the only one that heard that. The contest was called off, but had it continued, it would ahve been between Melinda and Shamra... I'll let you decide who would have won.

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/24/06 15:46
Chapter: My Lover's Box

Crap, something's wrong with my reviewing. Keeps on repeating itself.

Author's Response: LOL!!

Reviewer: Lufgif
Date: 11/24/06 12:14
Chapter: My Lover's Box

Your writing never fails to impress me. I loved how you coveyed the emotion, you're really good at that. Keep writing. We can all tell you love it.

Author's Response: *wipes away a tear* Thank you. I really do love it, and *WHEN* I finally get published, you can be sure that there will be an announcement on here.

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/24/06 0:55
Chapter: My Lover's Box

Yay! Update!

*goes to read*

Author's Response: Welcome!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/24/06 0:35
Chapter: My Lover's Box

Oh, and I was right. There was a box!

Author's Response: yes. there was a box. :-)

Author's Response: yes. there was a box. :-) did u ever get the chance to look at the lyrics??

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/24/06 0:35
Chapter: My Lover's Box

NIce. She's gonna keel him!

So, there's 2 chapters left?

Author's Response: Yup- 2 chapters. But I still want to know who you were talking about when you said you thought I named Exavier after a "creepy old bald guy"!!!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/24/06 0:20
Chapter: My Lover's Box

Yay! Update!

*goes to read*

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/23/06 21:40
Chapter: My Lover's Box

My Lover's Box?

I'm guessing Harry. So...Harry had a box. Probably a special box, because no one would want a random box. So what's in the box? And how many times in a paragraph can you say box? BOX!

I just realised that box is a funny word.

Author's Response: hehehe.... well, if you want a better hint (yes, it is Harry's box) you could always download the song or look up the lyrics.... :-) Hehehe--- box IS a funny word!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/23/06 21:36
Chapter: Vow

Oh, LOL, that comment wasn't directed at you. I have no problem with the graphic scenes. I was talking to the person below me, who had a problem with the scenes.

Good luck writing and update soon!

Author's Response: oh LMAO!!! Now that I re-read it, I totally should have realized that. Thanks for sticking up for me. I appreciate it.... I wonder if she read the comment I put under yours (b/c I got that review first).... she might throw up when she reads Fix Me Now if she really does have issues with it.... but at least I TRIED to warn her, right??? :-)

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/22/06 22:22
Chapter: Dog New Tricks

Oh damn. Letting slip she has a son named Exavier really seems a bit stupid now.

But I hope it gets validated soon!

Author's Response: I'm surprised, really, how many people feel the same way. Doesn't anyone find Shamra and Beth trustworthy??? or does everyone just think that V is that manipulative and evil??? SHould be up soon, I hope!!!

Reviewer: ViperGryffindor
Date: 11/21/06 12:54
Chapter: Dog New Tricks

come on up date all ready!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol. well all right then! :-)

Reviewer: Watso295
Date: 11/20/06 6:34
Chapter: Dog New Tricks

a good chapter, i think voldemort would have killed some people in the ministry rather than just freeze them but its your call.
i think that Ginny letting slip that she has a son is a BIG mistake...someone will find out some how. voldemort knows now who is close to Ginny and will surly target them as he has done before... looking forward to seeing what happens next Watso295 x

Author's Response: I won't pretent to understand Voldemort's train of thought... which is sad, since I'm trying to write him, but meh.... :-) As for Ginny's slip.... well, you'll see where it takes her. :-)

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