Interesting... that threw me off. I don't know where you come up with your ideas, but I definitely like them. Keep writing.
Another question: About how many chapters do youy have planned for the series?
Author's Response: Hsahhaa- What part exactly threw you off? But I'm glad either way to keep you guessing. ANd as for this, it won't be a series- I have 12 chapters, plus the prologue, and that will be the end of it.
i like the first banner.
I think it shows the pain inside Ginny the best. The pain she feels over Harry's death, Hermione's betrayl, and having to send away her baby.
Author's Response: Cool- I'll log your vote, and I hope you'll keep r/r-ing!
I love your story. As for my vote on the new banner, I like the second one with the lightening. It fits Ginny's personality better. How do put graphics on your account info anyway?
Author's Response: Allrighty- I'll tally in your vote. :-) I use photobucket, and then paste the link they give me. It's brilliant and easy.
“I have my ways, which, dishonest as they are, still happen to be more forthright than yours.”
I was crying with laughter when I read that. Hermione is such a b****, and Ginny had every right to hate her. That line, though... that line sums it all up beautifuly. Hermione the crooked polotician, who saved her own skin versus doing the right thing. I just had to comment about how great that line was. Simply fantastic.
Author's Response: Hahhaa- you know, when I went back and proofread before I submitted, that line stood out to me, too--- I'm glad someone else liked it!!! THanks so much, and I hope to hear form you again!
woops, typo, and it won't let me delete it so I can retype it. Odd.
Author's Response: no problem. I think I can figure it out. :-)
Impressive writing. If i hadn't been hooked before, I am now.
One question: How's the tracking device work? Is it magical? It would hsve to be, wouldn't it?
Author's Response: And I'm so glad!!! THe tracking device is definately magical. A sort of like an automatic summoning charm- wherever the person goes, the tracker will send out an unidentifiable pulse that will enable you to apparate to where they just did, almost like a no-touch-necessary portkey. It's risky, obviously, since Ginny is dealing with Death Eaters, but that's why she has hte invisibility cloak and waited a bit before she left. :-)
AAAHHH!!! I hate Hermione! Ok, that is out of my system! I can't believe that she is finding out this information from Voldy himself. And what kind of psycosis does Melinda have? She seems like she has convinced herself that she really is Ginny. Oh, ya, and the tracking device was a really good idea.
Author's Response: I hate her too. BUt she gets it in the end-- as we both know. :-) As for Melinda, she's just pretending she's a 'really' good actress and stays in character ALL the time. P.S. did u get that message I sent you?
Wow, Ginny's awesome!! I love the idea of a lookalike contest. wouldn't you just love to be the real thing and have everyone telling you how wrong you are. Tee, hee lovely. Ta!
Author's Response: Hahhaa- it WOULD be funny, although I think I would be more frightened than amused.... that, and a little bit disgusted- kind of like Ginny. :-) Ta ta!
I started reading this on fanfiction.net ages ago. I love it. I love your work. I changed my pen name recently it was 'prettyinpotions' im the one who left you that 'best bartender since Aberforth' comment on btp. I was flatered that you said it was your best compliment. Cant wait for chapter 11 (im still reading it on fanfiction.net but i like reviewing on here better..i guess im just wiered)
Author's Response: Lol-- not a problem, and I'm glad you're still reading my stuff! I also like reviewing (and receiving reviews) on here better, b/c it's easier to respond. Chapter 11 is in the works, and should be written within a week. :-) THANK YOU!!!!
May I have the privelage of again commenting on this masterpiece? Oh, good. This has just so many great lines in it. Favorites:
I couldn’t help but think that if I didn’t win my own impersonation contest, there was something seriously wrong with the world.
And this one-- pure brilliance:
This girl, on the other hand, was trying to make a profit off of my hard earned life.
A life that was complete shite, mind you, and yet she was still trying to steal it from me.
I love the insight into Ginny's character. I can honestly say that this is the best characterization I have ever read, and that's saying something as my faves list on this site alone is over a hundred and something stories. You are just a brilliant writer, plain and simple. I've read up to 9 and the prologue on the other site, and nothing classifies your story better than masteripece.
Author's Response: lol--- I'm glad that you're liking it, and I hope I'll be able to deliver more quotable quotes to you in the coming chapters!! WOW__ what a compliment, and I thank you so much. I just hope I can live up to your standards! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
I really like this chapter. It makes me laugh that Ginny entered a Ginny look-a-like contest. It is really clever now that I can see how the songs go along with the chapters. I was wondering before about when she says I bet she only smiles in the dark and she likes it when it rains. Kind of like a "Ah! Now I see!" moment.
Author's Response: It works tho, u know? I'm glad you liked it-- and I think the lyrics just go with the chaps better later on! Thanks!
They are just so proper with each other. Draco was so eloquent. It is a far cry from the Draco we know from the books. But not unrealistic, really. :) Like I have said before, if I didn't know that this was written by you, I would never have guessed it. It is so different from your other stories that it doesn't seem to be written by the same author- and that takes talent!
Author's Response: I like eloquent Draco-- and I see what you mean about it not being 'unrealistic'-- because he was born in that sort of society. Hehehe.... and it's not me-- it's my cynical twin sister. ;-)
Really good chapter. Interesting, good plot, but I thought the chase was a little too short-lived.
Author's Response: Rest assured-- there's another chase scene in a few cahpters that's a LOT more elaborate! Let me know what u think when it comes up!
Aww sad!!! and funny... and a lot of other things anyways LOVED it ... MORE PLEASE
Author's Response: more on the way!!!
OMG! Where did you get the idea that Draco grew up to be a pedaret?
Author's Response: Lol---- well, if you go to Garbage's website, you can read the lyrics to the entire song. It's (the pederast part) a little bit stretched, but you might be able to see it!!
What else can I say other than... I love this story?
OK, I can say A LOT more. This is one the most creative stories I've read in a LONG time. I like the way you portray Hermione as a politician/backstabber; most authors just leave her as a sweet, simpering little girl and don't really explore all her (possible) character traits. And Ginny is terrific! I love her bad-girl side and the way you write the storyline, you can identify with her need for revenge.
Now that I got that out of the way... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Author's Response: lol--- I'm glad you love it, and I'm also glad you decided to expand on that thought. I'm excited that you like my version of Hermione-- I think some people stopped reading after she was introduced, but I digress- you can't win them all. After all- Tom Riddle was a popular prefect and look how HE turned out. :-)
As for Ginny- I think EVERY girl has got a hidden side to her, but Ginny is one of the few that acted on it. I'm so thankful you like her- and I can't wait to hear more from you!
Update will be in as soon as the mods can get it through!
Draco's weird. I like this chapter too though!! How long will this story be?
Author's Response: lol-- he's weird all right. :-) the story will be twelve chapters (not including the prologue), and as of right now I don't plan on having an epilogue. I'm glad you like it!
Update. Soon. Or. Else.
What more ca I say?
Author's Response: Chapter 2 is in the queue, and has been for about a week--- take it up w/ the mods *sigh*
I saw that you have added this story to MNFF while checking the replies from BTP. Since you titled this one as 2.0, I had to re-read it. I noticed that you did change at least one thing, and that was the charm Ginny put on Exavier. I need to go back and read FF version, but if I am remembering right that part wasn't there. I wonder though, are you going to edit or add things to the story as you post it here? I don't want to give anything away for those who haven't read it yet, but Hermione deserves what she gets!!! I think I'll stick with reading this story here. At least you can repy to the reviews I leave (if you want). Well I'm off to the next chapter. As usual, great job!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you stopped over here!! Yes, there ARE changes throughout the story, but most are not as major as the charm. There are a lot more details that were put in that will come into effect later, though. And of course I'll reply to your reviews- I love them!! THANK YOU!!!!
oh i forgot, ginny as a badass is completely awsome. and i feel sorry for voldemort.
Author's Response: hhaha- I'm glad you added that in. THANKS!