Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 09/03/06 3:57
Chapter: The Chosen One and the Dark Lord

Very, very nice. I really wish I could write meaningful poetry. (My last major work involved a blue trashcan...ugh.)

One suggestion, though...generally the first letter of each line of a poem is capitalized, right?

Very good...high praise...and other stuff...

TOMROHT

Author's Response: Not always (the capital letters). It doesn't have to be. A blue trash can??? o.O

Reviewer: hpfreakdk
Date: 08/30/06 1:32
Chapter: The Chosen One and the Dark Lord

OH!!! This is good...

Harry died? Oh, I hate the thought of Harry dying, but this way could do it justice.

How does Ginny sit and watch the battle? Didn't quite get that...

Oh well...

And now for the fantastic part: The Grade!!!

10/10!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! A perfect score. And Ginny is (probably) either injured or forced to stay back. I left that open for people to decide as they read.

Reviewer: Accio_Rose
Date: 08/29/06 17:35
Chapter: The Chosen One and the Dark Lord

Well it's kinda sad that harry died....but it speaks to me...love Sux...but it's the greatest thing in life...other than death....lol........but i like it!!! NICE JOB!

Author's Response: Thank you! =P

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 08/28/06 18:43
Chapter: The Chosen One and the Dark Lord

Very good and very sad. I don't think Harry will survive either. Although, I am depressed by that conclusion and hope that I am wrong.
~KitKat

Author's Response: Yeah...

Reviewer: Hip_Hop_Muggle
Date: 08/24/06 11:24
Chapter: The Chosen One and the Dark Lord

Wow, that was powreful! Good job! I think the best stories come to you from out of the blue!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. And, yes, most of my good ideas are out-of-the-blue type ones. Tjough they usually turn green in the end... o.O J/K

Reviewer: two_magic_charms
Date: 08/24/06 9:20
Chapter: The Chosen One and the Dark Lord

That was so sad!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes, I know. =( I just figures that everyone is always writing about Harry surviving the Second War, and I just don't think he's going to. -shrug- Everyone's entitled to their own opinion, right?

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