Reviewer: lilly sara black
Date: 10/01/07 8:47
Chapter: A Mother's Heartbreak

I love how it shows so much sadness and how it is so Dark. I've got little teardrops coming from my eyes it is so sad

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 05/15/07 15:40
Chapter: A Mother's Heartbreak

Aaaaawwwwwwww thats soo sweet, once again you manage to reduce me to tears, you have talent!

Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^

Reviewer: _Levicorpus_
Date: 04/24/07 22:39
Chapter: A Mother's Heartbreak

I saw the link to this on the forums, and I clicked.
This is perhaps one of the most poignant (sp?) fan fictions I have had the chance to read. The sensory desciptions in addition to your incredible feeling for the depth of the human heart just...... wow. Keep up the beautiful work!

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review, Levicorpus. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Take care. :)

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 10/22/06 5:17
Chapter: A Mother's Heartbreak

That was so sad. It made me cry. It was beautifully written, as well. Honestly, I don't even know what to say, it was just such an amazing story! Please keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. *will keep writing* :)

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 10/21/06 14:36
Chapter: A Mother's Heartbreak

This was powerful! Wow! I love it! Thank you so much for writting it! It almost made me cry! I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Reviews like these make my day. :)

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 09/23/06 15:22
Chapter: A Mother's Heartbreak

Sad. I don't think I've cried because of such a short story ever before. But your fic has a very powerful message about loss and about mothership and love. I like how you don't identify the actual characters in the story - it gives it more of a general feeling, showing the universal truths in what you've written. A powerful, tragic piece.

Author's Response: When I first started writing this, I had no idea that it was going to turn out to be this short. But it didn't need to be any longer, because I'd written the message I needed to deliver. Thanks so much for reading and taking time to review. :) It means a lot to me. -Debbie

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/10/06 10:58
Chapter: A Mother's Heartbreak

that was so sad and powerful. wow!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. :)

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