Reviews For Murder By Wand
Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 04/26/07 14:49
Chapter: One-shot

Ok im sorry im not trying to be totally rude but i thought that was terrible accept the end sentence it was just so unreal if a student died people would be so much more emotinal and the writing style just didn't fit what i thought you were trying to put across
Snape wouldn't have just closed his eyes and moved away and i am sure no-one else in the real or book world would
But like i said the lastsentence was ominous and foreboding

Author's Response: To each their own, I suppose. =] Thanks for the feed back, though. I'd have to agree that the writing style was a tad off. However, I did try to portray everyone in a calm, non-judging light, so that's probaley why it didn't seem realistic.

Reviewer: Malika Potter
Date: 11/13/06 16:56
Chapter: One-shot

This is a really good story! I like it a lot.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 10/29/06 22:41
Chapter: One-shot

How horrible. That was my worst fear. I loathe Malfoy, btu when Harry did that. I swear the air I was breathing got caugt in throat.

Author's Response: That's exactly what I was thinking when I read that chapter. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 08/27/06 3:08
Chapter: One-shot

Wow! This was really different. I never thought of Harry killing Draco, well at least not at this stage of the game. It was a really interesting twist. I absolutly loved your closing paragraph. Good Job!

Author's Response: It was fun to write something a little different. I've never written anything AU (on purpose) so it was definantly a change. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 08/25/06 15:41
Chapter: One-shot

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
wow!!!
i loved this one very good of course very sad for draco but i think thats the most interesting p.o.v. so far never heave i read anything from myrtle!!! very good kepp up the good work!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I thought it might be more emotional coming from Myrtle than third person. I've never really written anything on Myrtle, so hopefully I didn't kill her characterisation too terribly much. Thanks for the review!

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