Reviewer: pottergurl
Date: 08/28/06 16:20
Chapter: The End of the Begining

WOW! this is really good i cant wait for the next chapter! update a.s.a.p

Author's Response: Thank you! The second chapter is with my beta at the moment but she and I both work fast so my updates will be as quick as I can make them.

Reviewer: niall 2492
Date: 08/28/06 11:35
Chapter: The End of the Begining

awwwwwwwww true love but what about remus what will tonks do now well really good chapther 1 keep it up

Author's Response: I was so upset that Remus died, but it didnt make any since to have everyone make it through the battle safe and with big smiles on their faces. Oh, and just to warn you there is at least one more big death that you havent found out about yet.

Reviewer: jennvellcs
Date: 08/28/06 10:12
Chapter: The End of the Begining

Oh what a wonderful first chapter! I really like this story so far and I hope you continue with the same flow you have here.

Author's Response: Thank you! The chapters do get progressivly happier as we go. There will be dark points where everyone is dealing with loss and stuff but for the most parts it goes up from here.

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 08/28/06 9:44
Chapter: The End of the Begining

Good first chapter. I'm intrigued to read more. I liked how Harry searched and searched until he found Ginny and his first concern upon waking up was seeing her. What devotion. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yeah, the Harry/Ginny ship is big for the first two chapters and then we start to see more Ron/Hermione and Neville/Luna. It get pretty interesting with Neville and Luna having the baby and Ron and Hermione....Oh wait, i cant tell you that. lol.

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