Reviews For Gone For Good
Reviewer: SIRIUS WILL NOT DIE
Date: 08/28/06 18:07
Chapter: n/a

I'm sorry, I know this probably sounds really stupid, but what happened? I don't get it.

Author's Response: There are no stupid questions, only dumb answers ;-) Basically what happened is that Quinten indirectly killed Harry, and thinks it's the best for him to leave. He has a deep desire to go to the moon, so that's where he goes. How things end, well, use your imagination, it's an open ending after all...

Reviewer: Bumblebee224
Date: 08/28/06 4:00
Chapter: n/a

I'm curious ... how is it that Quinten transformed to werewolf form, and Remus did not?

Author's Response: Like Icarus, Quinten got too high, while Remus wasn't high enough to see the full moon yet.

Reviewer: hpfreakdk
Date: 08/28/06 2:06
Chapter: n/a

Oh! Alright, se Remus' son Quinten killed Harry Potter because he was mad at him?

Alright, I have to admit it. I would never myself have thought of it.

You have a fantastic sentenceflow. It doesn't seem rushed to me, but you give your reader just enough input, or so to speak, so they want to read on.

Great chapter, and good luck with the rest of your story!!!

Author's Response: Because Harry said the wrong words, and remembering the incident Harry had in the summer after his second year... Thank you for reviewing, but I will have to say that this story is a one-shot --otherwise I think I would've excluded the open ending. (Or not...)

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