Reviewer: thenewriddle
Date: 07/21/09 10:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

it is a finely written paece

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 01/16/08 8:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hey this is really nice. I, personally, find it hard to believe that Hermione and Snape should ever get together, but this fic was so subtle and dignified, that it was not hard at all to believe that this conversation might really have taken place. It's sooo like Hermione to mourn while others rejoice. And sooo like Snape to say that he insults people he does not like because he sees no point in continuing false politeness. You have captured the essence of their characters and cultivated it into an interesting one shot. Great!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! x

Reviewer: mrs_weasley
Date: 02/03/07 8:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

I want more lol!
xxxx

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: mrs_weasley
Date: 02/03/07 8:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

I want more lol!
xxxx

Author's Response: Hehe, sorry, 'tis only a one-shot. Thanks for the review though

Reviewer: sregner
Date: 12/29/06 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wonderful

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sregner
Date: 12/12/06 14:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely, thank you

Author's Response: You're very welcome!

Reviewer: james and lily fan
Date: 12/07/06 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow! that was really jsut fantastic! you're writing style is absolutely one of the best ive seen, and everything jsut fit so smoothly! and it wasnt infested with unnecessary fluff and 'lovey-dovey' stuff that simply does not beling in a hermione/snape story! i loved it! keep up the good work

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much for the lovely comments! So glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: writing_angel
Date: 12/05/06 18:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

this is a cute story. I like the problem solved between hermione and snape. a little brisk, yet, it held it's own two feet. great job writing this. keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks very much - I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: RedheadedWeasley
Date: 10/31/06 8:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

oops ... I meant MoonFang not MoonCat. *sheepish grin*

Author's Response: Lol! *hugs* xx

Reviewer: RedheadedWeasley
Date: 10/31/06 8:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Just had to make a correction to MoonCat's review. Hermione would not graduate Hogwarts when she is 17 because they don't go back for their seventh year, therefore she would graduate when she is older.

I do love this story darling. It is wonderful as always.

Author's Response: Lol, Amy! Thanks very much darling - you just made me feel lots better. Can't believe you came back to read this story again! xx

Reviewer: Mystical Words
Date: 10/18/06 12:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

I do believe that your story is quite developed for its first and only chapter. Not that this is a bad thing mind you- but its not generally common. Please keep writing this story, its not nice to leave us (the readers) hanging like this. lol ::pout:: Thank you,
Rian Antoinette
Mystical Words

Author's Response: This was actually a one-shot, so it's well developed because I won't be adding anything else to it. I'm glad you liked it though, and thanks very much for your review!

Reviewer: Mooncat
Date: 10/05/06 19:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like this piece! It's very in-character, and at the same time, very insightful. You have a nice balance between dialogue and action and I like the way that you use dialogue and actions to show, rather than tell, what the characters are feeling. Thank you for this enjoyable read. M

Author's Response: You're very welcome! Thanks for the lovely review - I'm really glad you enjoyed the fic.

Reviewer: Mooncat
Date: 10/05/06 19:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like this piece! It's very in-character, and at the same time, very insightful. You have a nice balance between dialogue and action and I like the way that you use dialogue and actions to show, rather than tell, what the characters are feeling. Thank you for this enjoyable read. M

Author's Response: You're very welcome! Thanks for the lovely review - I'm really glad you enjoyed the fic.

Reviewer: feather
Date: 10/01/06 23:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

very nice. well-written and with just the right amount of a promised romance and snape-ish retorts. i enjoyed reading it and i hope i will be able to read more of your work. thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Hehe, you're welcome! I'm really glad you liked it - thanks for such a lovely review!

Reviewer: snapesgirl18
Date: 09/20/06 8:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

I am liking this story...Please update the story soon..:)

Author's Response: I'm sorry, but at the moment this story is only a one-shot. It was meant to provide a hint of romance so you readers could imagine what would happen next. I'm glad you liked it though, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fading
Date: 09/18/06 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good! I like how it's kind of a friendship thing rather than a romance- I know this is a romance category, but I like reading one that isn't passion and all.

Author's Response: Thank you! That was my intention with this fic - to sort of set the scene for the promise of romance, and leave you guys to imagine the rest. I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: futureMRSpadfoot
Date: 09/11/06 19:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow..i really like this fic. Would you please write a sequal or something..cause you are really on a roll with this one..very very well written. Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it! At the moment however I have no plans for a sequel. Maybe if the inspiration strikes... but not right now I'm afraid.

Reviewer: Molly_Wobbles
Date: 09/11/06 6:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was a gorgeous chapter, not to fluffy, but still had a tad of romance, i loved it was written beautifully and love the way you described the scene

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Molly_Wobbles
Date: 09/11/06 6:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was a gorgeous chapter, not to fluffy, but still had a tad of romance, i loved it was written beautifully and love the way you described the scene

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you for a lovely review!

Reviewer: Songbird
Date: 09/09/06 9:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is the first Hemione/ Snape fan fic I've read, usually I like Her/R. After this I mght start reading more. The imagery was absolutely beautiful. The way you set the scene was amazing, from the calm outside,contrasting with the loud party inside. It was subtle and beautifully written. Congratulations on such a great story! You have a real gift :) All the best

Author's Response: Thank you very much! What a compliment that this was the first S/Hr you'd read and liked it! It's always nice to introduce people to a new genre. Thanks for a beautiful review!

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