Reviews For One Day, Bella
Reviewer: blue_eye_blound
Date: 11/03/06 13:45
Chapter: One Day, Bella

That was so good! I would have never thought of Bella haveing a good and loveing side but you gave her one! I can't wait to read more from you!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have always loved Bella. I think that there is more to her than meets the eye. Thnks for the review!! :-)

Reviewer: xKGx
Date: 09/08/06 18:28
Chapter: One Day, Bella

omg this is beautiful. i wanna cry for poor bella. you are an amazing author. i cant wait to hear more from you.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. It makes me feel great to know that my story made you want to cry.

Author's Response: That sounded bad. I did not mean it like that :-)

Reviewer: slicey pete
Date: 08/24/06 3:01
Chapter: One Day, Bella

No way moody could def beat bellatrix, that is so dumb, moody and harry wouldnt do avada kedavra, bella hates harry, she would actually be glad to go and fight. Her and her husband sitting there drinking coffe??? I still cant get over Moody using avada kedavra, wrong wrong wrong

Author's Response: Like I said before, constructive critizim is greatly apprieciated. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 08/23/06 22:26
Chapter: One Day, Bella

Awww...I love Bella. This was really sweet. I loved your title, and the repetition of it throughout the story. Very well done! :D

Author's Response: I love Bella, too. I wanted to show her in a more human light in this story. thanks for the review

Reviewer: ronnyc718
Date: 08/23/06 22:04
Chapter: One Day, Bella

Wow - great job. I especially like the last paragraph and Bella's description of the forest. I can't wait to see more from you! (Yes, I do realize this is a one-shot. I just mean other stories.)

:)

Author's Response: thanks so much! and, yes, you probebly will see more from me.

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