Reviewer: Remmy
Date: 01/20/07 16:24
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Ok, I've just started readingt his story and it's brilliant! Really funny the Harry/Draco ting going on..It wud be cool if Harry and Draco were my parents! :P Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I am so glad you are enjoying this. Not sure I would like Harry and Draco as my parents though, Draco especially strikes me as maybe being too strict. His role model was Lucius Malfoy after all!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 01/20/07 0:16
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Beatifull story! I'm glad I took the time to read it and I look foward to read more of your works. I never seen so much thought put into Draco's character and i like that. Good job.

I think it is more to do with the way you ride my broom.”

That made perfect sense to Draco.

This really didn't make all that much sense to me, But I digress.


Author's Response: Thanks for your review. The broom comment is supposed to be that both Harry and Draco think the same way about flying and have the same sort of reckless abandon in the air which is a big connection. I guess it wasn't too clear.

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/19/07 19:08
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

that was the end wasnt it??
i dont want it to be over
it was such an amazing story
and it was all so happy even when it was all depressing
i love it so much
i have to say that this story has convinced me that draco and harry would make the perfect couple, screw Ginny, this makes much more sense...
but i love ginny, so dont ruin it for her.
oh i love this so much
its hard to be depressed that its the end when it ended all so happily
i could go on like this forever so i will stop now
oh i love it so much
x x x

Author's Response: Oh Emma! Sorry. I like Harry/Ginny too. But you aren't squat as a writer unless you can make people believe in your pairing, at least for the duration of the story. I am glad you were convinced, as it took a lot of work on my part. A friend asked me to write this as a birthday present for him, and I had never written slash before, and I really didn't think Draco/Harry worked. It took a lot of hard work to make myself believe enough to write this, and I grew quite fond of them. So you have paid me one of the greatest compliments ever by enjoying them together in this story. And you have to quit while you are ahead. Thank you so much for reviewing everything for me. It is very rewarding to know people read every chapter. I will miss your reviews!

Reviewer: ghostwriter920
Date: 01/19/07 16:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: Draco Arrives

Well...the house is still standing, but good grief...Draco and his temper...I can't help but feel sorry for Ron, even though it would seem he can take care of himself now.

Author's Response: No need to feel sorry for Ron. He's actually doing quite well in this story. I always loved his sense of humour in the books, so I thought he would do very well as a writer. Thanks for leaving a review for this chapter as well. I really appreciate people taking the time to review chapter by chapter.

Reviewer: ghostwriter920
Date: 01/19/07 16:04
Chapter: Prologue: The Goblet of Choice

Ron and Draco, alone in a house? If the house is still standing by the end of the next chapter, I'll be impressed...honestly...those never know what to expect of them...:P

Author's Response: Far more evenly matched now Ron has his magic and Draco doesn't... I always thought that Ron might be able to accomplish more on his own if he had to, rather than have Harry and Hermione look after him. But there will be fights! Thank you for your review

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 01/19/07 14:50
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Is that the end?! But.... I don't want it to be over! I loved this story! It was fantastic; it was humorous, the struggles were real, and the emotions were raw. It was perfect.

There really wasn't anything that I didn't like about this story. But, I really don't think that the Ministry would go as far as forcibly taking someone's magic away from them. That's the only thing I can't really see happening,

Other than that though, it was brilliant. I'll miss reading this :[

[[ *sniffle sniffle* XX ~ vicky ]]

Author's Response: Thanks Vicky! I know it was unlikely, but hey, it is fan fiction! I am really glad you liked the story though. I enjoyed writing it. I did consider writing more, but the story was really over, and there is no sense in flogging a dead horse! Thank you for your review. It is one of the nicest I could have asked for.

Reviewer: jjfan21
Date: 01/15/07 19:17
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

what a great chapter. my favorite so far

Author's Response: I am glad it is your favourite - it took me the longest to write. I hope you like the next one too. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: broken memories
Date: 01/14/07 18:54
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

Amazing! I'm so glad that you've updated..I truly love following this story :]

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you like the story. I love your reviews!

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 01/13/07 16:36
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

AWWWW!! That ending was so cute! I was so happy when Draco went to find Harry. I loved the parts with the house elves. That was pretty funny. And I'm glad that Draco and Neville made up. That was too cute. It must've taken alot for them, but I loved it.

Once again, you have written a truly amazing chapter, from beginning to end. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I was so excited when I saw that it had been updated. This is an amazing story, and I can't wait until you get the next chapter up! Cheers! Tee Hee ;]

[[ I'll keep reading until you stop writing. *praysthatyouneverstop* XX - - Vicky. ]]

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I must say I adore Neville so I had to have him in it somewhere. I am glad you find the story humorous, because that is one of the things that doesn't always come naturally, and so I have to work not to make it sound contrived. Um... I am afraid I am not going to go on forever, so I will stop at some point, but not quite yet! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Matrixman
Date: 01/13/07 13:29
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

good job, great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: TofuHumanoid
Date: 01/12/07 20:42
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

GAH! You updated! I am so proud! Please keep up the trend!

Author's Response: Preens herself. Yup, I updated, and I am working hard on the next chapter. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/12/07 12:45
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

ok... i didnt realise that was all the chapters you had written
now im depressed
way to ruin such a loving mood
you better write more
x x x

Author's Response: Am writing... Give me a few days though! I am so glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/12/07 12:43
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

oh its so sweet
i love neville too
i love everyone
oh i am in such a loving mood
i love this story
x x x

Author's Response: You have made my day. Life can't get better than having a story appreciated. I have always liked Neville, so of course I wanted to include him. Thank you for your lovely review.

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/12/07 12:00
Chapter: Chapter 7:The Sleeping Beauty Awakens, or Draco Puts His Foot In It

of course he cant find it from oxford street
that place is the most confusing place on earth
one second your on trafalgar square, next your on carnaby street, then oxford street and then suddenly your in covent garden
its maddness
and this is coming from someone who shops in central london every week
i cant help feeling bad for draco
x x x

Author's Response: I went to college there, so I know! (Great Marlborough Street, which is why I mention the Marks and Spencers there - I love that Marks and Spencers.) And you get carried along by the crowds if you don't know where you are going - a bit like getting sucked into a river current. Sometimes you find yourself getting carried along with the crowds even if you want to go in the other direction. I did write a ton more about him being completely bewildered and lost, but it meandered away from the story too much, so I ditched it. I really wanted to put it at Christmas time, so he got sucked into Hamleys, but I thought I had better not. Of course, you have just been there, done the Holiday Rush if you go every week - but hopefully you avoided being sucked anywhere you didn't want to go. All the same, I think it would have been terrifying for him after the old world atmosphere of the wizarding community. Anyway, thanks for your review.

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/12/07 11:30
Chapter: Chapter 6: Sentiment and Sensitivity

oh dracos so clever
i love him...

Author's Response: I do too. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/11/07 17:13
Chapter: Chapter 3: Harry Arrives

so much sexual tension
i still love this story
the conflict between harry and draco seems so real.
its exactly how it should be in that situation
this story is so well written
oh i love it
x x x

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It is nice when it is appreciated, because I did put a lot of hard work into this.

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/11/07 16:41
Chapter: Chapter 2 Draco Settles In

this chapter is so amazing
i like malfoy being nice but still being able to keep up his snide comments withing the compliments
im rather like that...
perhaps thats something i should work on
x x x

Author's Response: Malfoy as a role model? Hmmm.... Thank you for reviewing all the chapters, I know it takes time, and I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/11/07 15:55
Chapter: Chapter 1: Draco Arrives

malfoys comments were really funny
this is such a good story

Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it. I enjoyed writing it! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: becsy
Date: 01/11/07 15:21
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

i loved that chapter can't wait for thenext one please hurry

Author's Response: I will ... as fast as I can. Usually I wait until a story is completed before posting anything, and then I just buff up the chapters before submiting them. It feels very wierd to be writing them as I go now. (My husband is still trying to recover my hard drive from when he crashed my computer.) Thank you very much for your review!

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 01/11/07 14:44
Chapter: Prologue: The Goblet of Choice

this is really good
it was a bit mean what malfoy did to ron with pansy

Author's Response: I know. Has that mean streak in him, exacerbated by being on the run. Not that I mean to excuse him by any means. Azkaban probably did him a lot of favours! Thanks for your review!

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