Reviewer: LunaforGryffindor
Date: 07/23/08 6:04
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Beautiful story, incredibly well written. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: cararook
Date: 05/28/08 12:08
Chapter: Prologue: The Goblet of Choice

amazing story; your a spectacular writer. the only thing I wished u'd done was elaborate on the *cough* sex scenes though it prolly isn't your style.

Author's Response: Funny! I used to be completely allergic to writing romance let alone sex scenes! the minute my main characters seemed to want to kiss, they were eaten by ravening tigers or deluged by tidal waves or stung by bees...anything not to have to write the slushy bits. So I am getting better....maybe in another hundred years I'll have geared up to write sex scenes! rnrnGlad you liked the story though cararook!rnrn

Reviewer: whiterose
Date: 04/29/08 10:30
Chapter: Prologue: The Goblet of Choice

awsome....enjoyed every bit of the story....good no-excellent work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much whiterose.

Reviewer: camoalltheway
Date: 02/22/08 23:49
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

I think you are an excellent writer and (if you haven't already) should consider writing some original work. I think you would be great and it isn't farfetched to think that we will see you in the best selling authors list. I commend you're acomplishments in writing and, from just reading this one story, believe great writings will be seen from you. Thank you for the thouroughly enjoyable read.

Author's Response: What a lovely review! Thank you so much. It feels wonderful to know that readers of my work can feel so positive about it!

Reviewer: Mikan
Date: 01/09/08 19:58
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Wow, wonderful!!! Sad to see it end, though.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: snapefan2007
Date: 09/24/07 18:20
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

cute story!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: yaoichan7
Date: 09/21/07 16:40
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

wonderful story. i loved the emotions, they seemed so real that i found myself making the faces during their conversations! wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you yaoichan7. You have paid me such a compliment. I do like watching peoples' expressions when they read something they like, and can imagine yours!

Reviewer: tallblondie11
Date: 08/20/07 5:52
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

FANTASTIC!!! Just the right amount of suspense, intrigue, character development, and conflict plus a truly original plot. Very nicely sustained over the whole story, believable character traits and a superbly paced style. Congratulations, for a first attempt at slash you are an obvious natural - please write more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for a lovely review. I am glad you think the various aspects in the story meshed so well. I truly enjoyed writing it, and will write another, although Percy/Draco is my next pairing!

Reviewer: BlackMagic
Date: 08/10/07 12:30
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Cuuute! Have loved following this story over the past couple of days. I love the way you wrote Draco and Harry. Especially when Harry kisses Draco for the first time. Really really great stuff. Well done!! XD

Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed this. It was a blast to write, even though I admit I get embarrassed about romantic bits, and have to really work at them to make them sound convincing. I used to have my heroes/heroines fall into water or get eaten by wolves at the crucial moment so I wouldn't have to write the love interest! So I am glad I pulled it off. Thank you for your review, BlackMagic.

Reviewer: GabriellalovesHP
Date: 08/08/07 23:00
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

I loved the whole story. There were a few minor errors here & there, but overall it was great. As believable as any fic concerning this pairing could be. Kept me reading through the end. =]

Author's Response: I know. I will have to go and root out the errors sometime, but it does take a long time to edit stuff, so I am lazy. I am so glad you found it almost believable as that was my main problem! I am doing a Percy/Draco next, which seems more likely, to me at least! Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: liquidraver102
Date: 07/29/07 13:50
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Fantastically written! I honestly WOULDN'T put it passed the ministry to take away someones magic if they had the means, for some reason that Umbridge woman keeps coming to mind. I'm really quite jealous of Harry though, Draco is adorable. Despite his pissyness ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! I am finally getting around to answering my reviews. How is the writing coming along? I hope you are having fun with it.

Reviewer: orian
Date: 07/19/07 0:01
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

I managed to discover your marvelous story a day and a half ago and have been reading it NO-STOP.
it was fantastic and i wanted you to know that the story was really good and Very entertaining!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me so. I am really glad you enjoyed it. Buckbeak22

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 06/28/07 17:55
Chapter: Chapter 1: Draco Arrives

Pretty good!
~ Hannah Abbot

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: imnotokayipromise
Date: 06/12/07 8:53
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

abosolutely amazing story, never read anything like it. Best story i've had the pleasure of reading =]

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! Thank you for the glowing review.

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! Thank you for the glowing review.

Reviewer: Birdman315
Date: 05/31/07 23:50
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

This is by far one of the best-written fan fictions I have had the pleasure to read!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: AngelLuva
Date: 05/22/07 8:44
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

awww... i loved this fic... initially i was a little wierded out by the draco/ron, harry/ron but it worked out well. it was nice to read a fic for a change where ron is ok with draco and harry is the one with the prob.. and it still is a harry/draco!! :D:D:D

Author's Response: I am glad you thought it worked. It was my first try at slash. I'm pleased you were able to enjoy it even after being wierded out! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Accio_HP_and_DH
Date: 04/30/07 2:12
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Amazing piece of work. I had a truly wonderful time reading it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: boyy its joey
Date: 04/14/07 15:52
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

I know, I know.
I've already reviewed this story.
but it simply is wonderful.
I've reread it again today and wow.

It still is amazing, simply incredible.

I don't even know how to say thank you for writing it.
Definately on my favorite stories/authors.
and - you inspire me to write Draco/Harry
I've always believed they would end up together in the end; and this story sure as hell proves it.


Author's Response: I was blown away to get this review today. It is just the nicest I have ever had. I am glad I have inspired you to write, I love writing myself. Even stories that I know suck badly are fun to write down for myself. I am actually writing another slash fic for my friend's boyfriend right now, but it won't be posted for a while, as I have to get another fiction up first. Thank you so much for your review. It made my week, which was pretty bad up until now!

Reviewer: Forbidden_Lovers
Date: 04/08/07 5:43
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Great Story loved it!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: boyy its joey
Date: 04/08/07 2:38
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

that was reaaally good.
not entirely in character, but I didn't really mind, the story was still quite enjoyable :]

Author's Response: I think it is difficult to know what kind of characters they will have eight years later after they have matured and been though a war. I tried to think about what they could be like rather than what they are like in the books. Thank you very much for your review.

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