Reviewer: Giossel
Date: 06/24/13 18:58
Chapter: Prologue: The Goblet of Choice

Hello, it is a pleasure to write, I love your story, few fics that are worth a read, yours is one of them. for that reason I wanted to know if I can make a translation of the fic, the Spanish. As a writer frustrating encounter plagiarism because the writers spent hours thinking and polishing our writing to another simply come and steal it. For that reason I ask for your permission, that though I might be denied. If you do not want me to be understandable. But if you access the fic obviously be in your name and I, as a mere translator.

I hope you showers.


Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 08/05/11 8:13
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Awww! I honestly heart this story.

Reviewer: Skipper2721
Date: 02/06/11 17:43
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

I loved your story! It was well put together.

Reviewer: thechosengirl1567
Date: 11/17/10 18:19
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

well, the story was a depressing outlook on wat will happen after the 7th book, and the ending was happy though, but i luved the "shagging parts" watching them fall for each other was fun but i didnt really like it. it was too sad. harry is not a drunk!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing thechosengir1567. Actually I wrote this after the sixth book, so the seventh hadn't come out yet. I was trying to draw a picture of what would have happened if there had been a war (as I didn't know what would happen in the seventh book). I imagined Voldemort to have a lot more impact than he actually did in the last book! So in my story Harry was affected by the loss of people he knew and the horror of what had happened. He was also older in my story than he was at the end of the war in the actual series. That is the problem with writing before you know what is going to happen! Buckbeak22

Reviewer: Marybeth
Date: 04/01/10 19:18
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

I really enjoyed this story. I wish it wasnt over! Are there more chapters?

Author's Response: Sorry! No more chapters Marybeth. I am glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: pictoluna
Date: 12/13/09 3:59
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

awsome story, loved the name picked for the baby.

Author's Response: Thank-you pictoluna! I am glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: KiMoThY_DaRk_AnGeL
Date: 11/22/09 5:53
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

i would just like to say congrats on the story and i enjoyed it all the w ay. . . the story was sweet and funny and it had great ideas through out it . . . .thanks for sharing it

Author's Response: Thank you KiMoThY_DaRk_AnGel. Both for reading the story and leaving your review. I appreciate both.

Reviewer: Dezra
Date: 08/13/09 14:15
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

I had doubts when I firt read the summary, ron/draco, ick. But I'm glad I read it. Beautiful story. Well written and emotive. Great job.

Author's Response: Actually when my friend George asked for this pairing that was my initial reaction! However, I worked through it until I came up with something I was happy with, and believed in, and I am glad you liked the end result!

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/28/09 1:21
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

Aww cute ending, loved it =)

Author's Response: Thank-you IchigoPudding for reading through to the end, and I am so glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/28/09 1:00
Chapter: Braving the Muggle World

And everythings semi-right again. I like the house-elf bit :P


Author's Response: I loved writing this chapter. And I got to bring Neville into it, and I like Neville! Thanks for the review IP.

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/28/09 0:11
Chapter: Prologue: The Goblet of Choice

-Sigh- Draco, Draco, Draco…


Author's Response: What can you do with him, right? Just the reaction I wanted. Thanks.

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/27/09 23:45
Chapter: Chapter 6: Sentiment and Sensitivity

yay, they're finally together. Now to save 'Moine...


Author's Response: Um. Together only happens at the end of a romance. Got to have a bit of misunderstandings here and there to liven it up! Thanks for reviewing every chapter!

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/27/09 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 6: Flying

I thought it was cute how he messed up Draco’s hair and shirt It was awesome when they were flying and then Draco kissed him and… YAY!
Did Hermoine die!?!


Author's Response: I liked this chapter, but it was a pig to write! I am so glad you enjoyed it IP!

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/27/09 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 4: Watching Harry

Harry - two words: Anger. Management. XD


Author's Response: Interesting concept - I don't know if they have anger management for overworked and underpaid Aurors! Do you suppose they get a medical plan?

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/27/09 21:45
Chapter: Chapter 3: Harry Arrives

-sigh- Ron can be a real idiot sometimes.


Author's Response: I know... I tried to be as much like the books as possible! Ron was possibly my favorite character. Thanks for all the reviews.

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/27/09 21:09
Chapter: Chapter 2 Draco Settles In

Awesomeness. Can't wait until Harry comes!


Author's Response: I am so pleased you like it so far. I worked quite hard on this one, so it is really nice to get positive feedback.

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/27/09 20:48
Chapter: Chapter 1: Draco Arrives

Good idea, I like it =)
Yay for frying pans!


Author's Response: Thank-you IchigoPudding! I quite liked the frying pan myself.

Reviewer: Nerissa_vampirechick
Date: 01/14/09 9:25
Chapter: Prologue: The Goblet of Choice

Brilliant story and really well written :)
Well done


Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review, and thank you for your nice comments!

Reviewer: xxSHEZxx
Date: 11/29/08 7:01
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

That was a great fanfic althogh i think there was a bit too much sex going on but yeah it was AWSOME!!!

Author's Response: I wrote this for a friend, and he wanted far more sex than I put in! However, I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ebonpinion
Date: 08/16/08 1:28
Chapter: Keep Your Enemies Close

very interesting

Author's Response: Thanks...I think.

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