that was really good. I love how you made Percy come back in a way. However, I never actually saw the pairing....
Wow, that was realy amazing. I klove how you gave Percy a new charecter by buiding on teh old one. Truly amazing. I cant wait to hear more from you.
Cool! I like the idea that Percy is on the right side after all, and the writing in this story is really good, too! I hope to see an update soon! Poor Percy!
hey great story i like the premise and can't wait for the next chapter! you are going to continue, right?!?!?!? you better. but if you don't i'll just e-mail at college you ask for the rest!! and i'm a little hurt that you didn't tell me and mom about your third fic!!
P.S.: i'll give you three guesses at who wrote this review