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Name: MissAbigailWeasley (Signed) · Date: 06/18/11 10:24 · For: Part 1
Next chapter please. I love it!!!

Name: DracoLuva4684 (Signed) · Date: 12/16/06 21:32 · For: Part 1
I can't believe I never reviewed again!
Well, I finnished reading it a looong time ago but I think I was having computer problems that day and it wouldn't let me submit anything.
Oh well, anyway, the story is sooooooo good!
I hope you update soon!
I wanna read more!

Author's Response: Thanks. It's always nice to see that people still know this story is around.^^ I will update, I just can't say when, at this point in time, sorry for making you wait.

Name: DracoLuva4684 (Signed) · Date: 10/13/06 22:28 · For: Part 1
I haven't read the whole thing yet! Ihave to go to bed, can you believe that?! It's only 11:30! Oh well, I'll finish it tomorow! But, already I can tell it's going to be really good! Don't worry, I'll review again when I'm done!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it so far.

Name: EmilyJayne (Signed) · Date: 10/06/06 13:54 · For: Part 1
Love it!
I was very sad that you stopped there!
I loved that Ginny didn't know what to say to Hermione and I love that Hermione is "not haveing doubts...but thoughts" that is VERY realistic!
Verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry well done and keep it up!
I am anxious for more story!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I will finish this story, the Ron/Hermione ship has a special place in my heart and I love writing it, but right now I don't have enough time what with RL-school and Autumn classes on the beta boards. There should be an update by christmas though.

Name: electronicquillster (Signed) · Date: 09/03/06 16:10 · For: Part 1
I'm afraid that this review really won't be what it should be, but I shall try.

I remember while you were writing this that you really weren't confident about how you were managing Ron, but I think you did a very great job. Percy's part being thrown in here and there among the rest of the story was a very nice way to structure the narrative.

I really liked Mrs. Granger. I liked that she was so uncooperative. It really made things interesting there. I loved Ron's attitude of "why all the drama for a wedding?" Mostly though, I really liked the end between Hermione and Ginny, because marriage is so like that. It's so permanent and a huge leap of faith, and you've got to be devoted, but I've only got the utmost confidence that Ron and Hermione will last forever.

I liked that Ginny didn't have all the answers. I liked that she left Ron alone with Percy.

Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks for the lovely review, Mar. Ron and Percy's conversation turned out better than I thought it would and I'm glad you think I did a good job with Ron. This story has been left unattended to for way to long, I hope to get an update done before the end of the year, hopefully around christmas or so.

Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 08/22/06 12:59 · For: Part 1
I agree a lot with the second reviewer, I just don't have the patience to write all that out... :-)! I can't believe Hermione's having doubts...shake her until she sees sense! Mrs. Granger thing surprised me too a bit, but its your story, so whatever.
Good job. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your kind words, as to your questions, they're answered in my response to pandafan's review^^ Look forward to seeing the actual wedding ceremony in the next chapter.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 08/22/06 12:49 · For: Part 1
Very well done my dear! I'm glad to see it's not completed, because I totally want to know what happens next.

I think your characterization was spot on. Especially with Ron and Percy. I was sad to see Hermione having doubts, but that's completely normal, so very fitting for Hermione. I was a bit surprised that Mrs. Granger was so adamant- when Hermione has always been able to manipulate her parents to her wishes when it came to magic. But then again, Mothers are very protective of what they think a wedding should be. Again, you did a fantasic job. And this is going in my favorites list so I can keep up with it!

Author's Response: *hugs Amanda* You're making me really happy with your lovely reviews, dear. Percy and Ron were really hard to write, especially when Ginny and Mrs Weasley just left them to themselves. I've never written from Ron's POV before, so I'm glad you liked my characterisation of him. Hermione was over-analysing everything in the prequel, so she had to over-analyze the wedding as well, she just wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote it. For Mrs Granger, I just think a mother wants to have pictures of her daughters weddign hanging in the living room or be able to tell friends and family about it, and she wouldn't be able to do that if they would have done a traditional wizarding wedding, too much magic to keep it hidden from Muggles. I know that Hermione can usually talk her mum into these things, but not this time, as you said, mothers are very protective.

Name: niall 2492 (Signed) · Date: 08/22/06 6:34 · For: Part 1
well i cuts out but is very good write more dude ok

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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