Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 06/03/07 13:05
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

ok so that review didnt work out the way i planned. after that sentece, i had a cool little arrow pointing towards it and it said this: that word choice doesnt do this story justice! i really dont see how you can tie all of this in, in just one more chapter. i really hope you keep writing fan fics!

Author's Response: It probably thought you were using html, and that's why it didn't show up ... no matter. As for tying it all in ... well, you'll wait and see. Prepare to be amazed ... ;-D

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 06/03/07 13:03
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

dang im sad about this story ending! its really good!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 06/03/07 13:03
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

dang im sad about this story ending! its really good!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/03/07 12:44
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

haha some what funny I think you Hagrid could have been a little more nicer but still good I love how she forgot what day it was and I'm glad there was more love in it is there going to be any Alice and frank in it? and yeah poetry! did Sirius now the poems were about him? and you should put a little more Remus in it you don't have to put more peter in it though. and does she know that Remus is a
ware wolf? cus it sounded like she did


Author's Response: Yes, she knows Remus is a werewolf, and there will be more of him next chapter, too. Um, I'm not sure whether or not Sirius knew about the poems, that's a good question. He probably did know, but didn't want to hurt her or upset her, and he probably didn't know quite what to do about it. There's no Alice and Frank, I'm afraid that's one thing missing ... let's just say they were a year or two above the Marauders and co. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: hellolondon123
Date: 06/03/07 11:35
Chapter: L.O.V.E And Iola Are Very Different Things

it is really really really good!!!!! im very pleased because you mentioned the name Octavia......thats my name!!!! yay for all ppl calle octavia!!!

Author's Response: Lol, Octavia's a nice name. Yay! Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, it's not quite over yet ... I hope you stay for the next chapter, we're almost there!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 06/03/07 10:28
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Great chapter!
Aww there is only one more chapter left!!
Plz cont soon but write some more great fics like this one!!
I can't wait to see what happens next and poor Hallead!!


Author's Response: I know, the poor guy ... horse ... being of an equine nature ... oh, whatever, the poor guy. =D I'll definitely write more, look out for it!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 06/03/07 9:47
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

great chapter..no way james and lily are an item?

Author's Response: Almost. Not quite ... just one more chapter to find out what happens. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Padfoot101
Date: 06/03/07 8:37
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

i liked this chapter alot. the part where james asks lily on a date sounded a little like my story because lily agrees to go with james by accident but doesnt want to hurt him becuase he is so excited. but i liked the way you wrote it. i can't believe its almost over!

Author's Response: Really? That's weird. I'll have to check your story out some time, it sounds fun. I can't believe it's almost over either ... it only feels like yesterday that I was flicking through my book of names trying to find good ones starting with O, V and E (obviously I already had the L) ... and now we're coming up to the last chapter! Still, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: California
Date: 06/03/07 8:19
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Theres only one more chapter? No!!! lol so they're finally together!! yay!!

Author's Response: Well, if by "they" you mean Iola and Sirius, then yes they are, but Lily and James have just that bit further to go now ... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ginny_w_rox
Date: 06/03/07 6:12
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

i LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!! please please be quick writing the last chapter!!!!!!!! Cant wait!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: The chapter's already written, a long time ago, but you'll have to wait and see what happens. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 06/03/07 5:54
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

i also agree with shewhoshantbenamed in wanting to see some major fluff

Author's Response: Well, you'll have to wait and see, won't you?

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 06/03/07 5:52
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

ok i feel so stupid i was so excited about it being updated i forgot to read the AN ! what an idiot! lol no need to answer my p.s now chelsea

Author's Response: Lol, don't worry, I understand. I'm glad it got you so excited!

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 06/03/07 5:50
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Fantastic! i was really hopeing that sirius and iola would get together i hope he dosen't hurt her though.I'm so glad to see lily and James getting close finally ! update soon i really don't want it to end though *sob* chelsea ;-) p's how many chapters left?

Author's Response: Aw, Sirius wouldn't hurt her, I don't think he'd dare! Lol. I don't want it to end either, but at least it's been good fun. Thanks for all your reviews!

Reviewer: WrackspurtGirl
Date: 06/03/07 5:06
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Wow i love the way that you have written James in this chapter - the way that he understands Iola even if no one else thinks he does is really sweet!
Only one more chapter???
This really is a fantastic story your characterisation is fantstic and i love the way you have written all the characters! I feel sorry for Hallead!
Still this is absolutely fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks, that's so kind of you, I'm really glad you're enjoying it. And I think you should feel sorry for poor Hallead, he's had some rough times. He's a bit of an idiot to tell the truth, but he's loveable so it's okay. Thanks again for reviewing! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!

Reviewer: shewhoshantbenamed
Date: 06/03/07 1:39
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

I know it's a little late in the game, but this is one of the first fics I ever started reading, and I wanted to tell you I absolutely love it.

nothing makes me quite as happy as seeing the reminder in my email inbox saying it's been updated.

I'm dreadfully sad it's coming to an end though, and right when Lily and James, Sirius and Iola are FINALLY getting together. I hope things pick up between Lily and James before the end!

I for one would like to see some MAJOR fluff in the last chapter.

thanks alot for writing a great fic. looking foreword to the last chapter already!!

Author's Response: It's never too late in the game, thanks so much, I'm glad you've liked it. And hey, it's not quite over yet. The reason it's all ending as everyone is finally getting together is because ... well, everyone's finally getting together. If I continued it after that, there would have to be some kind of conflict or something, and I don't want to do that at all, not now they're so happy. Very glad you're enjoying it! See you next chapter! ;D

Reviewer: JJ876
Date: 06/03/07 0:17
Chapter: That Freezing, Stressful, Traumatic, Ridiculously Distressing, Happy Time Of Year

i can only say 2 words:




LUV IT!!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks, I'm touched.

Reviewer: mae513
Date: 06/03/07 0:08
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

The next to last chapter? That is just too sad. This has definitely been one of my favorite fics to read... Oh well, write more after this! :)

Author's Response: I will, definitely! I'm glad you've enjoyed this, I've enjoyed writing it, very much so. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 06/02/07 22:56
Chapter: L.O.V.E And Iola Are Very Different Things

Ha ha, just after I sumitted my last review, I decided to go back and read this story again, and realised that I've read Walking Naked! That book was so sad - thank god you've changed this one!

Tickled Pink

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, I only really took the very small basis of the book, and one or two little plot twists ... like Lily sending that letter Iola wrote to her father, that was in the book. But mostly I changed it.

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 06/02/07 22:54
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

NO! I don't want this story to end, it's brilliant!

I love Lilly's mad conscience, and the fights she has with it! It's such a lovely, lighthearted story, and the bits with L.O.V.E. [or should I say, the Perfects] are hilarious.

Its so sad knowing she's going to die in a few years - but I want to know what happens to Iola! I have a horrible feeling she's going to die as well, otherwise Harry would have been given to her. Please tell me I'm wrong, and Iola was though to be dead, and actually just travelling around South America or something?!

I can't wait for the next chapter! [In a really depressing way ... ah well, I'll just go and read this story again!]

Tickled Pink

Author's Response: Well, the story will end long before things turn sour, and so you can rest assured there won't be any deaths. I can't do it to myself, or to poor Iola, it would just about kill me. So don't worry about all that. I'm glad you like the story, and I hope you enjoy the final chapter when it comes.

Reviewer: echo123
Date: 06/02/07 22:50
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Nooo!!! Two more chappies! Please? pretty please?
I love this fic! It's very cool. Full of fluff--which I love! :D
Update soon soon soon!!!

Author's Response: I'll do my best, but I'm afraid next chapter will officially be the last ... unless, of course, I decide to write a sequel, but I very much doubt that, and if I did it would only be a one-shot, so don't get your hopes up too high. Enjoy it while it lasts, thanks very much for ALL your reviews!

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