Reviewer: Quinn Murphy
Date: 06/07/07 16:19
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

nice job! its all been soooo good! can't wait for the last chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you so much. I can't wait to hear what everyone THINKS of the last chapter!

Reviewer: Cats Can Dissapear
Date: 06/06/07 22:23
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

wail.......no more?? none...none....NoNe?!?!?!?
Keep writing with the stars! :D

Author's Response: One more chapter, and then ... probably nothing more. But I don't know. If I think of an idea for a sequel, I'll write it, but I don't want it to end up lame, you know? So I'll have to think of a VERY good storyline if I DO write a sequel. So don't get your hopes up too high.

Reviewer: DaY_DrEaMeR_02026
Date: 06/06/07 19:34
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

really good write more soon, cuz i wont have a computar in a few days

Author's Response: Oh? How awful. Why not? And when is "a few days"? It doesn't sound like long enough. It'll probably be more like a week, what with all the queues and stuff. Sorry. But I really don't know. I hope you can still read it!

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 06/05/07 19:31
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Oh, poor Hallead is right! I've really enjoyed reading this and can hardly wait for the last chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad. Hopefully you won't have to wait TOO long ...

Reviewer: beautifulromantic
Date: 06/05/07 17:14
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Oh man, poor Hallead. Are you going to make something better happen to him in the next chapter? I hope so. And I loved the beginning, you've gotta love James when he's being romantic.

Author's Response: Oh, I know, isn't that always so much fun? As for Hallead ... well, don't worry too much. That's all I'm going to say. Thanks for reviewing, I guess I'll hear from you again next chapter ...

Reviewer: elliejelliebean
Date: 06/04/07 22:28
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Oh, that was so good! I can't believe that there's only one chapter left!

So, you can probably guess what I'm going to say...

SEQUEL! lol I just can't get enough of this witty, fabulously real Lily you've created. I'll be VERY sad to see this end...so just write more!!!

Anyway, very good chapter...

I love the way that you write the whole Lily/James relationship. Most fics have Lily suddenly realizing her deep, passionate love and all of a sudden falling hard for dear old James, but here you have her questioning all the way up to the point of their *almost* first kiss. Very good, very realistic. I would love to see more of your take on the Lily/James realtionship! *cough* Sequel! *cough*

Like I said, Lily just cracks me up. And poor Hallead! I'm happy for Sirius and Iola. Great chapter; I look forward to more. James is such a sweetie; I'm falling in love with him, too!

Author's Response: Oh, I've always been in love with James ... he was an arrogant jerk at first but once he got older ... merlin. I can see why he was so popular with the ladies (I presume that anyway, since he was a hot quidditch hero and all). As for the, um, subtle hints at a sequel ... I don't know. It'd be nice, but I don't really have enough ideas to keep it going strong enough ... although you might get a one-shot eventually. I'm really glad you like the story and Lily! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: coolcat1000
Date: 06/04/07 20:26
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

omg,omg i can't beleive this!!!!!!!!!!!! When is the next chapter going to be posted?

Author's Response: Soon I hope ... not sure yet, still working out the kinks. But don't worry, it shouldn't be long.

Reviewer: MissSammiekins
Date: 06/04/07 19:17
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

No. I will not let the next chapter be the end. Unless there's a sequel in the works... But seriously, this fic is one of my all time favorites, and I'll hate to see it finished. That's how great it is! :)

Author's Response: I'm terribly sorry to say this, but at the minute there is no sequel ... although I'm glad and honoured you like it so much ... Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: queendiva4evr
Date: 06/04/07 16:55
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Frick darn it!! they ddin't make out!!
aww...it's so cute how they're all so incredibly prude for seventeen year olds...it really makes me giggle *puts hand in front of mouth to hide giggle*...
but how about a proper description of a tonsil hockey scene? that would be fabuloso extrimio...haha

Author's Response: Lol ... yeah. Maybe if you wish REAL hard ... you might just get something resembling your wish.

Reviewer: Chomione
Date: 06/04/07 11:52
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

The last-but-one! :O
Wow, I wonder how you're going to tie up all these loose ends.
I love that you conscience thing again, and the Lily/James stuff!

Author's Response: Yay, thanks. Don't know why I seem to enjoy writing about Lily's conscience so much, but ... oh well. Never mind.

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 06/04/07 5:50
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

AAAGGGHHHH!!! POOR LILY AND HALLEAD!! That's horrible! Why did Hagrid have to be so mean? It's not like him! I feel so sorry for Hallead. *sobs*
But anyway, I said about five chapters ago that Iola would get together with Sirius. I was right, hey? *looks around for support* And Lily and James ... those bloody Perfects! Way to ruin the moment!
So sad that this will be finished. But it still is my favourite fic! I can't wait for the last chapter!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed this fic. Hagrid wasn't mean, he was just upset about Hallead, and he and Lily aren't as good friends as he and the trio are (or will be). And yes, you were right about Sirius and Iola. Congratulations!

Reviewer: ronnie666
Date: 06/04/07 4:28
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Great!!!!!!!
luv it!!!!!!!!!!!
keep writing
cus i'll b waiting 4 the next chapter

Author's Response: Okay, glad you like it, won't be too long I hope. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 06/03/07 21:21
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Oh my gosh... just like Firenze...That's so sad....And why did Lily have to run away from James? They better get back together in the next (LAST?!) chapter...Please? It's happy that Iola and Sirius finally got together. That's so sweet! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yep, it's very reminiscent of Firenze ... Lily ran away from James because she still has insecurities about it all, especially when L.O.V.E (sorry, the Perfects) are involved, and it all got too much. But maybe running away and seeing Hallead so upset will make her realise something ...? Guess you'll have to see!

Author's Response: Hey! Review #300! Okay, it's a repeat of former reviews, but WHO CARES, HAVE SOME CYBER COOKIES ANYWAY! Who knew this would reach the 300 mark? Not me. THIS IS SO COOL! Yay! CYBER COOKIES FOR ALL!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 06/03/07 21:21
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Oh my gosh... just like Firenze...That's so sad....And why did Lily have to run away from James? They better get back together in the next (LAST?!) chapter...Please? It's happy that Iola and Sirius finally got together. That's so sweet! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yep, it's very reminiscent of Firenze ... Lily ran away from James because she still has insecurities about it all, especially when L.O.V.E (sorry, the Perfects) are involved, and it all got too much. But maybe running away and seeing Hallead so upset will make her realise something ...? Guess you'll have to see!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 06/03/07 21:21
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

Oh my gosh... just like Firenze...That's so sad....And why did Lily have to run away from James? They better get back together in the next (LAST?!) chapter...Please? It's happy that Iola and Sirius finally got together. That's so sweet! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yep, it's very reminiscent of Firenze ... Lily ran away from James because she still has insecurities about it all, especially when L.O.V.E (sorry, the Perfects) are involved, and it all got too much. But maybe running away and seeing Hallead so upset will make her realise something ...? Guess you'll have to see!

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/03/07 19:47
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

what? NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO
you are not allowed to end this story I repeat You are not allowed to end this *falls on floor and starts crying like a baby* I thought of the poem iola wrote or could of it goes somthing like this

a boy with grey eyes
and a wicked smile
thats never for me,
life is hard

a boy who loves everyone,
but me.

a friend is all i will be to him
a GirlFriend is all every girl will be to him
will he ever know?

his Grey eyes
a smile thats never for me
this is how life is to be

what do you think? if you want you can use it

Author's Response: OMC! That is SO GOOD! I can't really think of anywhere to put it, but I'll use it for the LiveJournal! Thanks so much! I can't believe you wrote a poem for this fic, it's SO COOL! I love it! Thank you!!! Wow! Yay!!!

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/03/07 19:03
Chapter: The Eternal Annoyance That Is James Potter

I love this fic but I thought James asked out lily way more or somthing but it was still really funny ^_^

Author's Response: Well, he does ask her out a lot, for the bet remember? But the bet was only really because he didn't dare do it alone, so the others were joining in to make him feel better. Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/03/07 18:59
Chapter: More About Me (And A Little About Iola)

hahaha Missy picks a fight with mss. norris

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, how cute!

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/03/07 18:52
Chapter: L.O.V.E And Iola Are Very Different Things

i'm rereading this story hehehe what was James and Sirius thinking?

Author's Response: When? Never mind. Glad yo hear you're re-reading this, have fun!

Reviewer: Babieblonde5629
Date: 06/03/07 16:31
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

aww that was so sad poor lily

Author's Response: Yeah ... but don't worry, because it's all necesarry sadness ... getting ready for the final chapter ...

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