Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 07/14/07 2:26
Chapter: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Comical

Haha wow you have a great sense of humour! That whole mocking of the "plastics" had me cracking up. I would feel sorry for them if they weren't... them. You know what I mean? ;)

Author's Response: =D I know exactly what you mean! Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/10/07 22:13
Chapter: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Comical

Yay! Lily and James are friends! I like the purple skin, green hair, and orange teeth. Hehe...they definitely deserve it! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! I love Lily and James so much. *squeezes* Glad you enjoyed the revenge scene, too ... sometimes the best punishment is public humiliation! Glad you liked the chapter, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/10/07 21:29
Chapter: A Life Without L.O.V.E Is Like A Life Without Chilblains

I LOOOOOVED this chapter! It's my favorite one! Sirius is great--I love how you portrayed him originally instead of how lots of other fics do--it's nice to see a fresh take on him, and personally I like your Sirius better than other fics'.

Author's Response: =D I like my Sirius, too. *pats* He's a lot of fun, and good for humour and the occasional moment of wisdom. So I'm glad you like him, too! *hugs* Thanks for reviewing this!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 14:51
Chapter: Too Much Can Happen In One Short Day

Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Freedom! I feel sorry for Ophelia though. But not the rest of them, those Mean, Mean, Mean Girls. (yes, with capital letters). I thought it was a GREAT ending to a friendship, especially considering that in my opinion they weren't real friends to begin with. Woohoo! Goooooo Lily and Iola!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: =D I'm glad you approve! Like I've said, thanks so much for reviewing, it's been great hearing your thoughts. I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic, too!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 14:35
Chapter: A Path Becomes Clear, And For Once I Take It

I think a letter is a good idea, but she'll have to face up to them eventually. I just wonder how and when it will happen... I love Iola as always, though I have found one HUGE thing different--our family troubles aren't the same, and hers are worse. Anyway, I loved this chapter, of course--amazing job!

Author's Response: Well, I'm very glad that your troubles are not as bad as hers, because I wouldn't want anyone to go through that in real life. *Shudders*. Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 14:20
Chapter: When People Ring Your Doorbell, You Have To Let Them In

Gasp! I'm glad Iola's back! Since she's practically me, I hate to see her lonely. :) Anyway, brilliant chapter as always, and I'm off to the next!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks, I hope you like it as much as you seem to have liked the rest! Thanks for reviewing this fic, I've enjoyed your thoughts!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 14:08
Chapter: When Things Get Confusing, Worlds Fall Apart

I know it's necessary, and I don't hate you... I hate Lily! Well... just at the moment. *sigh* Iola really is like me in a lot of ways. Kinda scary. Anyway, fantastuubulous chapter! Yay!

Author's Response: Ah, Lily just needs to work out what's the most important thing to her, which friendships are true and which aren't, that sort of thing. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter ... and if Iola is a lot like you, then you must be pretty cool, so congratulations! =D She's a bit like me, too, but then so is Lily (I just wish everyone would get along, for example, and go out of my way to try and make it happen, even when it clearly won't). I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 13:57
Chapter: Quidditch, And All The Mayhem It Entails

Missy is smart--she hates L.O.V.E. No need to apologize for the angst. I love angst! This chapter was really good (though I rather expected it) and I'm curious to see what happens next. Off to the next chappie!

Author's Response: Have fun! I feel the need to apologise for angst because a lot of my fics are lighthearted most of the time. And also I read them to my little brother, and he likes it best when everyone is having fun and being funny, and my best friend who betas is of a similar notion. But I'm glad you like the angst, too!

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 13:42
Chapter: How To Fish, If You Want To End Up Wet

Iola rox my sox! However, i don't think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship. Maybe the start of the beginning, but there's still L.O.V.E. to get in the way. Fantastic, lovely, brilliant chapter!

Author's Response: Perception again! Quite impressive. I love Iola too, she's so ... she's just great. Thanks for all the reviews, keep reading ...

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 13:29
Chapter: The Eternal Annoyance That Is James Potter

Oooh... What was she finding her for....? How to fish if you want to end up wet? Huh? I'm confused. Anyway, I loved this chapter. I think I'll add this fic to my favs, it's really good!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks, I'm honoured! I'm glad you liked this chapter, and you'll find out about the fishing thing soon enough, I'm sure ...

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 12:16
Chapter: More About Me (And A Little About Iola)

This is really good... Is the "unrequited love" guy Sirius? Grey eyes... wicked smile... I like Iola a lot... She's a lot like me. I like how Lily's nice, but she's got a group of friends that make it hard for her to be herself... At least that's how I see it. Maybe I'm overanalyzing... Anyway, good chapter.

Author's Response: Oooh, very good. Muchly perceptive, I must say. But that's all I will say, the rest you can find out fot yourself. There is nothing wrong with overanalysing, I do it all the time, so don't worry ... =D

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 07/06/07 12:00
Chapter: L.O.V.E And Iola Are Very Different Things

ha ha HA! I love it already. I've read several of your other fics, and they were all brilliant so I expect this will be as well... off to the next chapter!

Author's Response: =D I hope you enjoy it! And I'm glad you did the others, too. Thanks for reviewing, and like I said, enjoy ...

Reviewer: marauderres
Date: 07/01/07 9:26
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!is there going to be a sequel

Author's Response: Lol! Still unsure about a sequel, but thanks for reviewing, and don't give up hope!

Reviewer: aparna potter
Date: 06/30/07 2:55
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

Amazing!!! Beauuuuuuuuuuutiful!! I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. =D

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 06/29/07 15:02
Chapter: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Comical

I like the way things are going. The only thing that is wierd is James saying that Missy is so incredibly cute, that was a little wierd for James to say and no one catch it as a joke. Or maybe it was a joke and I missed that. I just think it was a little strange to hear a guy call a cat incredibly cute, hehe.

Author's Response: Well, since when was James a normal guy? I don't know, maybe I have weird friends, but a lot of the friends I have who are guys would probably say something weird like that ... I dunno. I'm glad you are liking how things are going.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 06/29/07 14:09
Chapter: Too Much Can Happen In One Short Day

Good for her! I am glad that she realized that those girls were not good friends at all. Ophelia was ok, but too clingy to be an actual good friend. Iola is so much more of a real person.

Author's Response: =D And that's exactly what I wanted you to think! I would love to have Iola for a friend (not that i don't love my own friends, obviously, but she's pretty cool). Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 06/25/07 22:22
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

Awww, that was so good! I'm a tad sad that it's over, but happy all the same. I can't wait to read what you write next!

Author's Response: =D Thanks. I'm really glad you liked it! I was sad that it was over, too. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: liliy16
Date: 06/25/07 17:27
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

i loved this story! i liked a lot of your other ones too, but this was my favorite. did you ever read books by katie maxwell? because the summary of the story reminds of her summaries. Anyway, my favorite scene was when OVE becomes the perfects. it was hilarious

Author's Response: =D Thanks. I can't say I have heard of Katie Maxwell, but I'll just take it as a compliment (my general approach to life). I'm really really glad you liked my fic, and my others too, although I must admit that this one is also my favourite. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lily rose
Date: 06/24/07 15:25
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

That was a fabby ending. BRAVO!

Lily Rose x

Author's Response: *Grin* Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ChAsErKeLlY
Date: 06/24/07 7:55
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

Oh, wow. I can't belive that it's over. At least you have other series to blunt our pain, and overall distract us with ADD. (: I must say that I love Sirius as you've portrayed him. As I've mentioned before, it's true love *sigh*. Erm, what was I saying? A new HP trailer came on the TV.... Oh, I have to say that my favorite quote is:
“You know what would be so awesome?” asks Ophelia excitedly.

“If you could make chocolate into a gas form and then sniff it up like a drug?” asks Iola sarcastically. She is mostly ignored.
I just keep getting a mental image.... I have to say that my favorite scene is when Iola and Lily fall into the lake. It just sticks. Erm, my favorite chapter title has to be I Do Something Stupid. No One Is Surprised. It just fits me. I allways do something stupid, like riding my brothers minibike without a helmet through the woods, or switching places with my twin and prank her teachers..... My favorite chapter has to be #15, even though it means the end. Well, I love this soo much, I would love a sequel (if you can figure out how to make a good plot line to follow this fantabulus one) and I will read your new fic! Which is a Lily/James! Yay!
Sir Lady Alanna the Random of the Turnip TAble

Author's Response: Lol, thanks, what an awesome review! The chocolate gas was something me and one of my brothers thought up ages ago... it would be awesome, no? =D Thanks for reviewing, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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