Reviewer: FireboltFlyer10
Date: 06/22/12 0:54
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

I loved your take on the whole Lily/ James thing!!! It was so cute, what James did for Lily (and quite romantic)! I also liked how different Lily was from the other stories. It gave the story a nice twist. Brilliant job!!!!! I can't wait to read your other stories! :)

Reviewer: Auror Freya
Date: 06/04/11 2:43
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

I LOVE this story i think it is the BEST fanfic on this entire site. My favorite character is Iola she became my favorite when she helped Lily overcome her fear of horses.
My favorite quote is "He just grins, takes a deep breath, and yells out, “Oh pretty baby, don’t bring me down, I pray, oh pretty baby!" I love the song and i think you made this chapter so romantic. Thats why i think that "There’s A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E" is my favorite chapter. It made me cry tear of happiness when reading it.:'). My favorite scene has to be the last one were Lily and James kissed. :D :) Amber

Author's Response: Thank you again, so much! I'm really glad you liked it, and took the time to review - these all feel so old now, but it's always nice to think that people can still enjoy them! :)

Reviewer: the bushy haired know-it-all
Date: 04/25/10 13:30
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

oh my god i LOVED this! Lilly falling for James! omg that was so sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Muggle in the Know
Date: 02/22/10 6:52
Chapter: A Path Becomes Clear, And For Once I Take It

I would just like to thank you for not being insensitive in your fanfic about growing up in that situation. I know other writers sometimes can be. And that probably doesn't make any sense, so a piece of background knowledge is that Iola's "abusive father" childhood basically sums up mine. And don't do the whole sympathy thing, please? Because if you grow up in this, you kinda begin to hate that. But anyway, on lighter notes. You really do have really good writing skills, and you stick to a certain personality really well.

Author's Response: All right, no sympathy thing (without going into details, I understand how much that sucks, so don't worry). But it's really good to know that I didn't treat the situation insensitively, because I was a bit worried about that at the time, and I would never want to offend anybody. Thanks so much for this review, it actually really meant a lot to me. =)

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/11/09 23:03
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

Uh, I loved it! *squeels*

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/11/09 16:33
Chapter: Too Much Can Happen In One Short Day

uh, good. i'm only scared she will fall for them again....

Author's Response: =) We shall see ...

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/10/09 21:58
Chapter: Quidditch, And All The Mayhem It Entails

uh, i like it! but you portray the marauders as blunedering idiot, like, really shallow, you know? This isn't really a Lily/marauders fic, so I'm wondering what you'll do with that... and hwo is she gonna chooooooooooooose???

Author's Response: Who indeed ...? Yeah, the Marauders are a little blundering, but you find out later that they're not quite as shallow as they might seem (unfortunately the same can't be said for som of the other characters!)

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/10/09 21:40
Chapter: How To Fish, If You Want To End Up Wet

Uh, I like Iola.

Author's Response: I'm glad. =)

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 08/04/09 6:04
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

First of all, responding to your responses of my reviews (I guess I can do it here). I am absolutely positive that there’s no way any of your stories could disappoint anyone, let alone me (referring to your unfounded wariness about The Black Knight). I guess, when I read them, I like some better than others. But all are awesome. I liked the most of the one-shots better than the chaptered ones. Trees but not Forests, Conundrum and Art of the Quill were my faves. And if you wrote the Black Knight when you were just thirteen or fourteen, then it really is very good. Hell, I’m sixteen and I can’t write anything half as good.

The first few chapters of The Black Knight were not as good as the one-shots but the story picked up after a while. But that’s to be expected. I dunno, but once I have read fifth, sixth, seventh year fics, I don’t really enjoy anything about the first or second years that much. Even with the real Harry Potter series, if I want to re-read any book, it’s never Philosophers Stone, or Chamber of Secrets. Its usually GoF, or Half Blood Prince or Deathly Hallows, not even OotP for some reason. Enough with the rambling.

Now, The Things I Do For L.O.V.E….first of all, I really liked the summary and the way you presented it (the strikethroughs, etc.).

Iola is my favorite character. I really, really like her a lot. Better than Lola. Probably because she is more Marauderesque (and I insist, that Marauderesque is a word, and if it isn’t, it should be). Plus, I’m also glad that the fic ended before she could be killed off.

By the way, does Lily know about Remus being a werewolf? I don’t think you mentioned it anywhere but the exchange between James and Lily near the end made me think that she did….

And of course, the review would so not be complete without a mention of the chapter names. They were all inventive but ‘When people ring your doorbell, you have to let them in’ and ‘Hogsmeade has a sweetshop. How can it be Bad?’ were the best.

I liked how Sirius would switch instantly from being serious to being ridiculous and being serious again. And Padfoot Points were awesome as well.

Another thing I wanted to say..I think its fantastic the way you respond to each and every review. Not many authors do that, but the readers (atleast me) enjoy it if the author does respond. And you do so very promptly. That’s even better.

A couple of other things I enjoyed in this fic..I liked the badges, and the serenading at the end was cool. Something I can very well imagine James doing. I also liked the way you included Hagrid now and then. A few of the authors do include him but not as much as I would want. I always thought that Hagrid must have been close friends with the Marauders. Many Marauder era fics just leave him out altogether.

I think I’ll read one more fic of yours today, probably Azkaban Mistry.

This is the longest review I've ever written. My previous best was 522 words but this now closer to 550. So, YAY!! 550 Padfoot Points to me...Can I do that? Did Sirius do that?

Author's Response: Well, I don't think Sirius gave himself points (he preferred to watch others compete for his favour in order to gain them, I'd imagine) but I'll certainly give you 550 for such an amazing review! Wahey! It's probably the longest I've ever had, let alone written, so go you! As for what you said about responding, well, I just always like to do it, because I know when I review stuff, it's always good to get a nice word back from the author - it's just nice to know they read it. So yeah, I do make a point of responding to them all. So, to get to the point, thanks so much about everything you said! It's so encouraging, even though I stopped writing Fanfiction, it's always so amazing to hear something positive about my writing in general ... so thank you. Again. =) As for "marauderesque", you're right, it totally SHOULD be a word!

Reviewer: vault713
Date: 07/17/09 14:44
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

awwww i'm sad it's over, i'm glad how they finaly got together in the end, sigh
oh and the whole betles vs. rowling stones thing craked me up (i now have a humerous mental immage of Remus Lupin in rocker clothes)

Author's Response: Oh, Remus was TOTALLY a rocker, you just know it! =D

Reviewer: vault713
Date: 07/16/09 16:31
Chapter: I Do Something Stupid. No One Is Surprised.

Awwwww, I can't belive how emotionally attached I am to these characters. You're such a good author!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so pleased you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: vault713
Date: 07/16/09 16:00
Chapter: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Comical

yay!

Author's Response: Yay indeed ...

Reviewer: vault713
Date: 07/16/09 15:10
Chapter: Too Much Can Happen In One Short Day

good for Lily!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Absolutely. =D

Reviewer: vault713
Date: 07/16/09 14:47
Chapter: A Path Becomes Clear, And For Once I Take It

the Iola story was just right in my opinion
it's cool reading things happening in the summer, you don't get that a lot with harry potter related stuff

Author's Response: Well hey, some big stuff can happen in the summer in my opinion ... it's such a great backdrop. I'm glad you're enjoying it anyway, thanks so much!

Reviewer: vault713
Date: 07/16/09 13:50
Chapter: How To Fish, If You Want To End Up Wet

this is very good!

Author's Response: Cheers!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/07/09 18:56
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

I love this whole story. It was cool and funny. I like the idea of L.O.V.E. My favourite character is Iola. I just loved her and her name. I like that name. I like her personality. I don't remember what my favourite quote is but I remember that it's really funny. My favourite chapter title is When people ring your doorbell, You have to let them in.

I like how Lily changed. I like new new Lily more. She's funny. I like how Lily and James got together. The whole scene was good. The story was good and now I'm going to go check out your other ones.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really glad you liked it! I hope you have fun if you decide to read any of the others.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 05/05/09 21:02
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

ok so to explain the last part of my last review I eant that your stories are page turners. Or i guess becasue theya re online then next clickers. ANyway when i reach teh end of one of the stories I can finally be ok with not readign the next chapter casue there isn't a next one. But if i0m in the middle of the story it's like i want to keep reading till i'm done. In any case it was a good thing. Oh and I'm glad you enjoy the reviews. Your stories make me feel liek revieweing

Author's Response: OH! I see. I thought you meant it was good that you didn't need to read the next one because you didn't really care what happened next. I get it now. Thanks! =)

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 05/05/09 20:51
Chapter: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

ok so I reviewed this yesterday but it didn't load for soem reason. I loved thsi last chater it made me laugh. James' ideas are indeed original I mean who else would do such a thing. I absolutly loved the song you made him sing it fits so well. And lily is just so funny about the whole ordeal at leaset she realised what she had to do in the end. I feel bad for Hallead but I think he is going to be ok. I ust adit I liek how you ended this story. It's not sad casue they still have soemtime to live things out yet at the same time you don't need to know more about their lives I am content with knowing things worked out. Ok now for favorites of this story. Iola takes the medal for favorite made up character. SHe is amazing and very real. THe best chapter name is "I do soemthign stupid and no one is suprised" they define Lily nd the spirit of the story so well. FAvorite made up thing is the Padfoot points it jsut seems liek somthign they would do but so far it's the first time i've read of somehtign like that. Favorite moment james singing that song. Most shoked moment, in all honesty when Remus said he didn't liek the beatles. WHAt is up with that. There are way to many faboulouse quotes to choose just one but I quite liked the exchange between lily and Vernon. I love how he is so clueless. Anyway another fantastic story. I started looking at soem of you're other work and I realised I read it back before i had an actual acount. I think I'll re read it and coment. But I wanted to tell you that I think over time you are improving as an author. The difference in your stories is noticable and each one si progressivley better. So thank you for providing such an entretaining way to spend time. It was a lovely story and i enjoyed reading very much.

Author's Response: I hate it when reviews and stuff don't work ... but what an amazingly sweet review considering you did it twice! Thank you so much. I definitely agree that they got better over time. Ugh. Some of the really early stuff makes me want to weep a little bit. =) Ah well. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this fic, I really am. It was a lot of fun to write. Thanks again for all your support!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 05/04/09 23:10
Chapter: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

I new there was soemthign going on between sirius and iola. ANd james and lily that was brilliant poor hallead i feel bad for him. I can't wait for hte next chapter. it's really sad that it's dending buta t the same time it's good to not NEED to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Um ... I'm not sure quite what that last statement means, but hey, thanks anyway. And, yeah, Sirius and Iola. Pretty obvious really. Thanks for all your reviews! Yay!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 05/04/09 22:54
Chapter: That Freezing, Stressful, Traumatic, Ridiculously Distressing, Happy Time Of Year

hahahaha a centaur tap dancing nice. Lovley chapter really. i like how htings have progressed

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad. And hey, talk about stamina, you've reviewed practically every single chapter! Wahey!

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