Reviews For Vampyr
Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 04/21/05 19:22
Chapter: Chapter Six: Worse Than Death

Wow! That was great. There are so many different emotions in this fic and I'm loving them all! I feel so bad for Avril, though. That would be terrible to be a Vampyr, but I have a feeling more detail on just how bad life as one of them can be. Keep up the good work and update really soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that the detail is good. More on the way asap!

Reviewer: Nadja
Date: 04/21/05 15:48
Chapter: Chapter Six: Worse Than Death

Me likes... It's very nice, and it explains a lot. I feel kinda bad saying this, but Tom has a lot of admirable attributes. He's very self-confident (not always a bad thing) and very determined. No wonder he got so far. So, do we get to see Snape next?! PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: No worries, Snape is up next. Thank you!

Reviewer: Loki MM
Date: 04/20/05 16:18
Chapter: Chapter Six: Worse Than Death

Woah! Awesome chapter. Now excuse me while I get excited that you finally updated something. All right, now that I'm done with that, you've done an AWESOME job characterizing Avril; you can certainly understand what she's feeling. And Tom Riddle is definitely in character, going to great lengths to get what he wants. No grammar errors I saw, so really, a very awesome chapter! Cheers!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. Sorry about the lack of updates, but I have exams hanging over me. Thank you so much for such a great review!

Reviewer: tarawent
Date: 04/20/05 14:53
Chapter: Chapter Six: Worse Than Death

YIPPEEEE!!! I've waited so long!!! This was a great chapter. I really like Avril even though she's evil, she's complex, you've made her more than just a vamp. Keep up the good work and update ASAP!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, updates on the way!

Reviewer: whispers in the wind
Date: 04/20/05 7:00
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

NOOOOO, your right it is a cliffhanger! O well then . . . please hurry. bye the way i love your story!

Author's Response: Thank you, the next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: whispers in the wind
Date: 04/18/05 15:56
Chapter: Chapter One - The Return

Great story, very captivating hope you can update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, I will.

Reviewer: OdDsbOdIkInS
Date: 03/23/05 9:09
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

That was soo unexpected.... I am well shocked! My dear severus.... This is one of those rare occasions were i am glad i didnt read this chapter 4 a while because i know an update is a little bit closer.......maybe! I love where your taken this story and i am excited to see where it goes, the plot is amazing.

Author's Response: Yay - I surprised you! Thanks, I'm glad you like what I'm doing with this. No updates for a while however - see my A/N at the start of chapter 9 of TM+HBP when it comes out for details.

Reviewer: Loki MM
Date: 03/16/05 19:22
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

First of all AN UPDATE! YES, FINALLY! (sorry if I missed it and it was a few days ago; I've had band stuff to attend to). Seond of all, yes, you are definitely indulging your evil side. A cliffie, and a flashback next. Thirdly, not a grammar error in site, so this is one review that won't involve my nitpicking. Fourthly, this story is brilliant; please update it soon, flashback or not! (Wow, you just got nothing but pure praise from me.) Cheers!

Author's Response: Hurrah - I passed the test! Good to hear this chapter was error free - thank you. It'll be updated as soon as possible, hopefully the flashback will be interesting enough to stop everyone from hating me! You will find out about Severus - never fear...

Reviewer: Nadja
Date: 03/16/05 18:58
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate


Author's Response: Ha ha ha - it's the story's structure, nothing to do with me! Nope, not at all...

Reviewer: kuro_tenshi_LL
Date: 03/16/05 15:36
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

yesh!! voldemort shall killsss himsss!! lol, i just strongly dislike snape 'cause he's ugly =D

Author's Response: Never judge a book by it's cover! Or a chapter at that.....who knows what will happen?

Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 03/16/05 9:50
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

Can't wait to read the flashback! Good job, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Updates asap.

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/15/05 16:59
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

Oh no, poor Severus! I hope he is okay! Update ASAP!!! 10

Author's Response: No more Severus until chapter 7, the next one's a flashback. I will write as fast as I can though! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Nadja
Date: 03/15/05 15:53
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

GAAAHHH!! NO!! Ergh, why must you do this to me?! I trusted you! But no, you have to become evil like all the rest... Grrr.... I love it. The whole time before they singled out Snape I was hardly breathing. I get too into the story... Good job. Write faster!! :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm sorry, I tend to indulge my evil side a bit too often, however I will put up the next chapter asap. You won't see Severus again though until chapter 7, the next one's a flashback.

Reviewer: Kalira30
Date: 03/15/05 14:29
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

I LOVE this story!!!!! I just read the whole thing through again and its totally great!!!!! So why do they call Avril the vampyr? What is a vampyr?? I'm kind of thick so i need help on these things ^_^ Whatever so anyway, this is very well written, but it would be nice if there was a little more detail about Avril and Nasce and Marcus. 1000000000/10

Author's Response: A Vampyr is the original term for the anglesised word "vampire", and I assume you know what a vampire is, lol. I'm so glad you like it, and don't worry, there will be much more detail about Marcus, Nasce and Avril soon.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/15/05 10:23
Chapter: Chapter Five: A Twist of Fate

Argh, cliffhanger. V.good, worth the wait, so will you update 'It Begins This Way' now?

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try. I'm so glad it finally got through, maybe this means TMR+HBP will be updated soon aswell. Glad to hear you're eager for more of 'It Begins This Way'!

Reviewer: Kalira30
Date: 03/09/05 20:09
Chapter: Chapter Four: Visions of the Golden Glade

Weeeeeeeeeell, its most certainly a different outlook on Voldy thats for sure lol. I'm a little confused though. Its kind of hard to keep up whenever you switch back and forth and theres nothing really connecting the characters except for Avril. So yeah. Language is kinda strong, no need to talk like that. But anyway...Good job! Next chappie please!!!

Author's Response: Hi, sorry if it's confusing you. Avril really serves as the connection between everyone in this, and I only switch back and forth when it's in flashback mode - which you can tell by the italics. Sorry if the language of chapter 4 got on your nerves, but as I've said before, it was to show the immature, boasting personality of a 16 yr old with no family - not my own personality! That's why I put in a warning. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: caren_the_hpfan
Date: 03/07/05 22:48
Chapter: Chapter Four: Visions of the Golden Glade

I agree with Phoenix - what an extremely sharp contrast this story is! I sort of cringed at the cussing - who wants to fill their mind with junk? - but the imagery was astonishing. Can't wait for the next chapter! A ten well deserved for all of your chapters so far.

Author's Response: Sorry if the cursing kind of got to you, but I just used it to show Tom's personality, not mine. He didn't have the best upbringing, and he's young and kind of immature at this point, seeking approval from Avril for his actions. Obviously, time will change him, as he's very different in the books. Thank you for the great review though, a ten all the way - I'm so proud!

Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 03/07/05 18:29
Chapter: Chapter Four: Visions of the Golden Glade

This is amazing! It's a sharp contrast from your other story, Tom Riddle and the Half Blood Prince, but I like it never the less. I've always wondered how Voldemort came to be how he is and why Snape left him. I'm having fun reading about your take on both subjects and can't wait to read more! Ten all the way!!! Update really soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I love to write in different genres and experiment with different styles. Glad this is working out!

Reviewer: OdDsbOdIkInS
Date: 03/06/05 12:23
Chapter: Chapter Four: Visions of the Golden Glade

Best chapter so far!.......It is hard to think of Tom or avril will feelings and emotions....i guess i always thought of them as ...well not human.....but i think it was well written and i like the different side of them and how you can see how much they have changed over the years!

Author's Response: Thanks - I know what you mean about Avril and Tom, but I always saw them as developing - I think they had to get to a stage where they weren't really human any more, and I want to show that journey. :-)

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/04/05 20:47
Chapter: Chapter Four: Visions of the Golden Glade

Perfect pourtrayel or Tom's personality, and I liked seeing Avril and Tom when they were young.

Author's Response: Thank you, those scenes are always my favourite to write.

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