Reviews For Lockup
Reviewer: capella_black
Date: 10/28/06 18:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

Man, that was pretty decent, for being set in Vegas. :p I wonder what Hermione thinks about that army of house elves that now comprise Harry's staff. I really thought he was about to barge in on a more intimate moment for the two of them, so I wasn't at all surprised by the eloping. Well, it is Vegas, after all. Hehe, good job.

Author's Response: Thank you. Well, you have to work with what you got, and that "barging in" did flicker through my mind. It just didn't work out that way. Thanks!

Reviewer: Latisha
Date: 09/08/06 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

:lol: I was giggling the whole time I was reading it, from Las Vega onwards. I must say, for some reason I thought that the well dressed man was Malfoy for a moment :lol: A lovely light-hearted piece :D

Author's Response: Hah! So 'Dung fooled you too! Just don't ask what name he was going by n Vegas! ;)

Reviewer: LoneWolfLoverGirl
Date: 09/07/06 11:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

I knew it!

Author's Response: What!?! I couldn't surprise you this time!?!!! :)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/04/06 18:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hahaha! BRILLIANT! Absolutely brilliant! Really, really well written! Your writing style is incredible! You write equivilant to JKR!!! This fic was so funny and exciting and interesting! I just loved it! definitely 11/10! haha! Las Vegas! Clever!!!

Author's Response: Now that is a compliment! Thank you!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 08/26/06 20:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ha! Funny story that fits in with what's going to happen in book 6. I especially like the R/Hr element to it. ;)

Author's Response: With your username? I am shocked, shocked I tell you! :)

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 08/26/06 20:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ha! Funny story that fits in with what's going to happen in book 6. I especially like the R/Hr element to it. ;)

Author's Response: I hope it fits in, anyway!

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 08/26/06 10:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

good job

Author's Response: Thanks! My first review, ever!

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