Reviews For Simon says...
Reviewer: dontimamanda
Date: 08/13/07 17:14
Chapter: Corpus Inflamare

hmmm. intresting. but a big cliffy. god i hate cliffys. but still, good chapter. please update soon!


Author's Response: Thanks for the review - that's a cliff a writer has to climb - simply irresistable!

Reviewer: Merlynne
Date: 07/27/07 2:30
Chapter: A rare gift

Ooh, great chapter! I'll be eagerly waiting for the next one. I don't know what else to say. it's nearly two in the morning right now, so I'll just say "wow." I must again praise this premise. I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully the next chapter won't let you down, there's some action coming up, including a nice cliff to watch the sun set from...

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 07/20/07 15:26
Chapter: A rare gift

Ooh, great chapter. Why oh why do I have to wait until after Deathly Hallows for the next chapter? You may want to read through this again, though. I suppose in your hastiness to submit before the queue closed you missed some errors.

Author's Response: Ah, wow. Someone's actually read it before DH! Probably. I already had to fix chapter title and summary which were both messed up *cough* I'm afraid I'll have to ask to give my beta and me some time to read and digest whatever happens in a few hours time, but since the story is already complete, I'll finish the translation as well. Promise. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: a_wrackspurt_got_me
Date: 07/04/07 8:14
Chapter: The Yule Ball

A very intriguing story... Can't wait to see how it turns out, esp. whether Simon is a genuinely good guy or a Death Eater in disguise.
Gotta say, the idea of Luna asking Snape for a dance is absolutely brilliant! *LOL* Pity JKR didn't put it in one of her books before the events of HBP made such developments impossible. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! It just seems like sth Luna would do, doesn't it? Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: s0ulgoddess
Date: 06/27/07 16:42
Chapter: Q&A

whaaaaaaaaaaat? that is the CRAZIEST thing i've ever read in my LIFE!!!!!! egads.....

Author's Response: :-P Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 06/27/07 15:19
Chapter: There's something about Justin

too bad... was justin lunas bf?

Author's Response: no, it's more of a Neville/Luna ship. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 14:25
Chapter: There's something about Justin

Ah! Evil cliffie! Very intense chapter, although I would like to say that Blaise Zabini is a boy. Just thought you might want to know that.

Author's Response: hehe, yes I know. But as stated in the A/N: this was written while we were still guessing the gender and due to plot reasons Blaise will have to be female. Sorry! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 14:09
Chapter: Turning Point

Awe, poor Simon. And I can't believe the DA didn't make any accusations against Harry until now. They are clueless.

Author's Response: Again, prejudices. They can be really annoying and frustrating, can't they? Thanks again!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 13:43
Chapter: Dinner for 13


Author's Response: Thanky you :-)

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 13:33
Chapter: The Yule Ball

Yay, Simon and Hermione! Ron is so thick sometimes.

Author's Response: hihi, glad you like this new development...

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 13:19
Chapter: (Ir)rational Jealousy

Ron and Hermione are supposed to be the dream couple! But I suppose everyone has their fights. I hope they get back together. :D

Author's Response: Yep, how boring would a relationship without fights be? Especially since the two of them are nagging each other all the time anyway... :-=

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 13:07
Chapter: Gracious Enmities

This should be interesting.

It's amazing at how much things changed just because they were sorted into different houses. Their feelings for each other changed almost completely. : /

Author's Response: We're all victims of prejudices at one time or another. Teenager should have the most trouble escaping them, that's what this is all about. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Merlynne
Date: 06/27/07 12:24
Chapter: There's something about Justin

Great chapter! I read it as soon as I got the notice you updated and I'm glad I did.

"Watching their attempts to find out what, for example, a mixer was used for was more entertaining than any comedy show he had ever watched over Dudley’s shoulder. " I really liked this line here. It's nice to see you remembered Harry's childhood with the Dursleys and that he wouldn't (normally) have watched the shows outright. I liked this touch.

It's a bit AU at one point, seeing as Blaise IS a guy. One more thing, since Muggle Studies is an option, I'd doubt many Slytherins (least of all Malfoy) would bother themselves with it. It would just seem out of character for Draco to even care about anything to do with Muggles.

The scene near the beginning with Harry and Ginny really was adorable, and I can't stand the cliffhanger at the end! I can't wait for next chapter!

Author's Response: I know, I know. But as said in the A/N: this story was written way before we knew about Blaise and he has to be female due to plot reasons. Sorry! Muggle Studies is not an option in this story but obligatory for all students, so the Slytherins have no choice. Thanks for your comments, glad you liked it so much!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 06/27/07 11:59
Chapter: There's something about Justin

Wow, I was actually right. Harry did sorta kiss Ginny, and then there was the Dementor's kiss. Poor Justin. Please update soon.

Author's Response: hehe, yes! I guess the little preview was kind of obvious, at least when you know your way around the Potterverse. Thanks for the review, Chap 14 is almost finished...

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 11:44
Chapter: A Secret Revealed

Wow, that was informative. Very very good.

In the chapter that they went to Hogsmeade (sorry, I can't remember which one) it should be Dervish and Banges, not Darwish and Banges. I meant to mention it in the review, but forgot. :D

Author's Response: Right, I knew there was a typo I still have to correct...oopsies. :-)

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 11:29
Chapter: Former Friends and Former Enemies

I can't believe Harry was stupid enough to get drunk or high or whatever. And I can't believe that Simon was stupid enough to keep brewing the stupid potion. And Snape gave him the Dark Mark, didn't he?

Author's Response: What do you mean 'Snape gave him (Simon?) the Dark Mark'? He didn't, he can't - if Simon, or anyone else, had a Dark Mark, Volders would have been the one to give it to them, at least that's what I think. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 11:20
Chapter: A True Slytherin's Speech

The Slytherins are getting high! Woohoo, can I join them? lol, just kidding, I don't want to get high. :D

Author's Response: Ah, not high. Just tipsy :-)

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 11:07
Chapter: Simon

I wouldn't mind that chocolate, but I'll review anyway. I don't think you gave this quite the...persona it deserves. I didn't feel the usual rush that I feel when reading about Quidditch. Just a little thought. :D


Author's Response: No worries, not everyone can like everything and as long as the criticism is given in a nice manner, it won't do any harm, but instead could actually improve my writing. I remember that for later...

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 10:57
Chapter: Q&A

For some reason I thought Simon was a Lestrange. I dn't know why, but that's what I thought. I'm just good at guessing, aren't I? :D


Author's Response: hehe, very good guess then. Hopefully, it wasn't too obvious...

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/27/07 10:45
Chapter: The House of Phoenix

Harry's a Slytherin?! This is a really cool story, by the way. But, jeez, Harry's a Slytherin? Wow.


Author's Response: Thank you!

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