Reviews For Simon says...
Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 02/21/07 18:44
Chapter: Gracious Enmities

Really? An update? *SQUEEEEEEE* *scrolls up to read*

No *I moan hopelessly* I mean, I hate Ron… I really do. But Harry and Ron, they’re best friends. Harry was just trying to be nice! And Ron totally got angry at him for no reason. Maybe if they could civilly speak to each other they could work things out; but Ron will have none of that now will he? *sigh* That stupid voice in Harry’s head! *continues reading with false hope*

Maybe Ginny will be more understand *had just read the Quidditch match* I never really had anything against Cho, but I’m happy he’s over her.

I KNEW IT! I LOVE HAGRID *continues reading with a smile and a new sense of hope*

“Hermione grinned mischievously.”

I cannot imagine that. It’s horrible! Now the progress will be ruined won’t it? *is afraid to read* Awww! Yay! The trio can tolerate each other and be civil and joke and laugh! *sniffles* I’m so happy! Oh I love you, you wonderful author you! *continues happily reading*

Yay for Neville! I love Neville, one of the nicest most respectable characters in the series, good job Neville you passed! Aw, that little chat between Ginny and Harry was just so cute.

YAY NEVILLE! THAT WAS BRILLIANT! NEVILLE IS THE BEST *HUGS NEVILLE* Neville saved the day. Yay for the power of friendship! I had my hands clamped over my mouth in shock as I was reading. Malfoy is so $^$%# And yay Neville!

Why did Harry tell Simon about the DA? Just when he patched things up with his not evil friends.

As you can see, I wrote comments throughout the entire time I read this chapter. It was action packed and exciting and heart felt, overall just lovely. I can’t wait for the next one! Stupid Simon…

Author's Response: Yay! I knew it took a long time, sorry about that! Yep, it was about time to reunite the golden Trio. But don't worry, the mushiness won't last or will it? :-) I love Neville, too. He deserves a much bigger role in Canon, however, Altron doesn't like Neville or Ron, for that matter, so ... Harry didn't tell Simon about the DA, Terry did. Keep in mind he's his adopted brother and that Harry and Simon are friends, so of course Harry would mention it. Why stupid Simon? He's a smart, handsome, young adolscent, who happens to have stupid parents, but so did Sirius. Next one's in queue, let's hope it will be validated soon! Thanks for your lovely review, I enjoyed it very much!

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 02/15/07 14:16
Chapter: Summer Holidays

Very interesting opening, my friend. I really enjoyed it. I'm hooked now!! I am anxious to continue!

Author's Response: Hi there! Coolies, thanks for leaving a note, I'm glad I got you hooked!

Reviewer: dontimamanda
Date: 01/19/07 15:34
Chapter: A Secret Revealed

yay! new chapter!! this story is going very good. i cant wait to read more.

PS- i think simon is evil. (but thats just my opinion and most people dont listen to them cause i have a rep for being crazy)
PPS- its true
XD -Al

Author's Response: So, Simon's evil. But he's helping Harry so much (potions, occlumency now as well...)! Maybe I should add a scene where Simon hands out oreos to everyone - - - hehe along with Snape - - - uhu Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: wolfzmasterz
Date: 01/17/07 16:09
Chapter: A Secret Revealed

hey i realy liike your story and cant wait to see what you mean by some people chat, some people prefer to duel? wlel i have togo read ya later byb

Author's Response: glad you're still on board - Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/16/07 18:44
Chapter: A Secret Revealed

Wait, so Harry saw Malfoy change the ingrediants? He is just as bad as Malfoy! I don't like Simon... This whole thought reading thing, yeah no.

Author's Response: Yep, but remeber: Harry also knew into what Potion it would change and since the Potion lessons with the new Prof were rather boring, he went with it, it was just a silly prank. Reading thoughs - tutut, Snape wouldn't approve. hehe. Well, Simon knows how to occlude and how to use it as ways of communication, now he's teaching Harry, think about what good it can do to him. He failed terribly with Snape, but Harry was scared of him, hated him and couldn't control his emotions. Simon is a friend, so its easier and Harry might at some point be able to keep Voldy at bay. So, it's actually a good thing. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: NikkiBly
Date: 01/16/07 15:51
Chapter: Q&A

Just a note, Malfoy uses a Nimbus 2001, not a 2000. Great story so far!

Author's Response: ha, right. mymymy, I'm amazed: how many people read this before it got online and noone noticed? Thanks for pointing this out and thanks for reviewing :-)

Reviewer: jeanv
Date: 01/16/07 14:37
Chapter: A Secret Revealed

This is a great story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 01/16/07 14:32
Chapter: Summer Holidays

Harry has an emotional problem!! Good story, though.

Author's Response: ok, I don't think his behavior is the best either, but he's a bit confused of what is happening and he's a teenager, so whatelse can we expect? ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: avadakedavrathishun
Date: 01/08/07 14:50
Chapter: Former Friends and Former Enemies

U cant possibly be telling the truth about the whole 'if u dont revie the next chapter will not be accessible for you'. how in the world would you do that? anyway.. i hope u update soon... i like ur story so far.. i don't think simon is telling the truth about the whole disappeering thing. and y did he give all those students those drinks to make them pass out?

Author's Response: *imagien an evil grin an my face* - yes, I can. I have the uliitmate power! (too much Charmed for me, lately, hehe) (no, seriously, the chap is still with my beta, I was just hoping I could scare a few people into reviewing, that's all) He didn't 'give' it to them, he just brews it and offers it to them, everyone is free to say no. He told them what could happen if they drink too much of it, but it's like chocolate - hard to resist. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: marauders1584
Date: 01/05/07 23:57
Chapter: Former Friends and Former Enemies

this is a really interesting story! wow! one of the best AU stories i have read! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: I guess it's time for me to stop worrying if my English is good enough for such a project or not. Thanks you for the review! :-)

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/03/07 22:19
Chapter: Former Friends and Former Enemies


Author's Response: Well, since OotP we found out, that sometimes what you see is not what really happened and if you ever got drunk, you know how hard it is to get up and moving while still being drowsy. So. just for the record: yes, the Head of House knows about this special potion. Don't worry, he's not poisoned, (remember: they all drunk it, even Simon himself) they're more like ... drunk. :-) Thanks so much for all your reviews, Chap 7 is almost done and I hope you'll come back for it!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/03/07 22:06
Chapter: A True Slytherin's Speech

I don't like this one bit. This story is highly disturbing and addictive. Why hasn't Harry talked to Hermione and Ron? This is so sad. I don't like Simon or anything about this. Why hasn't DUMBledore confronted Harry, eh? Just leave Harry to the dark side, right DUMBledore?

Author's Response: Nah, we know Dumbledore and his mind are a bit screwed up. He's not leaving Harry just like that. They'll have a comfy chat soon (chap 7 actually). Thanks again!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/03/07 21:49
Chapter: Simon

NO! I thought they were going to lose. Can't Harry talk to the hat and get out? This is terrible! Did Lily and James die for nothing? What about Sirus, eh? They all died for nothing!

Author's Response: haha, I love your reviews, thanks a lot!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/03/07 21:34
Chapter: Q&A


Author's Response: oh well, don't judge too quickly. But then. sometimes it's your guts that got it right in the first place, right? still - don't judge people too quickly, esp not when taking their families into account. Look at Sirius. ;-) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/03/07 21:10
Chapter: The House of Phoenix

Oh my goodness Harry! They did try to tell you they were together but every time they tried you yelled at them! *scrolls up to finish chapter*

They did not betray you! Ohmygosh! Don't be so stupid! Harry is seriously bugging me in this fic. H needs to talk to the hat and get out of Slytherin! That Simon boy is evil! We know it! Harry was so stupid!

Author's Response: Harry's just a bit confused and trying to understand what's happening. They didn't really try to tell him, they were a tad scared how he'd react. It's like one of these things you postpone until it's too late. But you're right, he's overreacting. a bit. Simon's evil? ;-) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/03/07 20:43
Chapter: Summer Holidays

Sounds like Harry is PMSing. Sure Sirus died, but why is he all WHOOSH. Emo Harry! I wish you had played Moody up a bit. He could have had a lot more fun with the Dursley's.

Author's Response: Hi, hehe, nice description. It was meant to show how recent effects got to Harry. Having him all calm and grown-up didn't seem to be realsitic. We all ca't take so much, but no more, right? Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: wolfzmasterz
Date: 01/03/07 16:17
Chapter: Former Friends and Former Enemies

hey ilike the story but is harry going to b dark at all i mean so far nothing intresting has happened wel anyway ill read ya later byb

Author's Response: well, I'm afraid you have to wait it out. And don't be to quick to judge. Many things already happened, they're just so tiny, you might not notice it right away, but there are already many hints on what will happen in the end. Thanks for the review and I hope you keep reading :-)

Reviewer: soma_potter
Date: 12/30/06 3:59
Chapter: Former Friends and Former Enemies

very good work
Harry .........a slytherin,that's a good imagination.
And the character very fishy yet very sweet.
I think i have fallen in love with that guy.
Anyways Looking forward to ur next chapter.
And Happy New year.
Have a great year ahead.

Author's Response: Happy News ro you, too. :-) hehe, Simon does have this affection on girls. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: parselmouth
Date: 12/28/06 12:54
Chapter: Former Friends and Former Enemies

keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I certainly will :]

Reviewer: parselmouth
Date: 12/28/06 12:53
Chapter: Former Friends and Former Enemies

keep it up

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