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Name: EmmaTwitch (Signed) · Date: 05/18/08 20:16 · For: A Master of Occlumency
I REALLY love this story. Can't wait for an update!!

One thing though: there are a few spelling mistakes sprinkled here and there, nothing bad tho ~_^

Name: seeker15 (Signed) · Date: 04/16/08 19:53 · For: A Master of Occlumency
once again, another great cliffhanger!!!!! i can't wait to find out what happened to simon when he was arguing with the other slytherins!!!!!

Name: Ravenclaws Noble Heir (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 14:01 · For: Q&A
I think that this story is completely out of wack!

But still good all the same.

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Name: Ravenclaws Noble Heir (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 13:17 · For: Summer Holidays
okok I like it so far

I'm hoping to read more

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Author's Response: Thanks! It's up to you to read more but I certainly hope to hear more from you as well...

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/17/08 23:08 · For: Former Friends and Former Enemies
Okay! I give! See? I toldd you Simon was a turncoat. Someone who's nice to your face, but stabs you in the back.
Harry should be careful with this Simon charecter. He sounds slippery.
On the other hand, great chapter...I was going to turn in for the night, but could'nt resist a chance for another review! ;0)

Author's Response: haha, wait till you read on... Thanks for your review!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/17/08 22:51 · For: A True Slytherin's Speech
Great story! I think I may have reviewed this story before, but I only read a couple of chapters...Sleepy nights in front of the computer don't help, *grin*
Anyway, it seems Harry is settling into his new house. Kind of spooky to see him as a Slytherin.....Simon seems like a good guy, of course he may be a turncoat, too. But he seems okay.
Whatever is going on at the MOM, it may break up the houses of Hogwarts.
That would play into Voldemort's hand.
Sorry for the long review, but great job, look forward to the next chapter....Tomorrow! ;0)

Author's Response: oh, don't worry about the length. Write as much as you like. Especially when its words of praise :-)

Name: Templar (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 11:12 · For: Through the Vanishing Cabinet
unreal story so far

Author's Response: Hi,rnthanks for the review - do you mind me asking why you think that way? Criticism, put into friendly words, is welcome, but only a bit more detailed comments can actually help improve the story. rn

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/13/08 0:23 · For: Simon
Oooohh! I love chocolate! *grins* Another fantastic chapter and an exciting quidditch game too! Glad Harry got the Snitch and that he made up with Ron and Hermione.
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story, you're doing a fine job.

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/13/08 0:08 · For: Q&A
Right now I'm thinking...Lesstrange is Simon's last name??? He surely can't be related to Bellatrix, who killed Sirius?
Now that's a shocker!!
I think the story is excellent! I still can't get my mind around Harry being a Slytherin. But, it looks like he's standing firm, not letting Malfoy get to him.
And Snape still hates Harry. Some things never change!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 23:31 · For: The House of Phoenix
Interesting! Harry Potter in Slytherin! And Snape, his least favorite teacher is his Head of House. Groovy! lol ;0)
It's a great story so far...Bet it'll get pretty interesting in future chapters.

Author's Response: hihihi, Snape certainly doesn't like the fact that he can't take random points from Harry anymore...

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 23:08 · For: Summer Holidays
Pretty interesting chapter. I can't wait to see how Harry takes the changes at Hogwarts.
Great story! The plot sounds intrigueing.

Author's Response: Hi and welcome! Thanks for taking the time to review.

Name: James Jameson (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 20:12 · For: Through the Vanishing Cabinet
Great chapter! Long awaited, but good! I thought it went at a very fast pace though, and it was sort of hard to follow. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Hei, it was meant to be fast. The story only has a few more chapters to go... :-) Thanks for the review!

Name: seeker15 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 18:43 · For: Through the Vanishing Cabinet
great chapter! i really liked how the vanishing cabinet was like a parallel universe to hogwarts, and how it followed the whole layout of the castle. that was a really good idea! the puzzle concept was very cool too!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was afraid it could turn out too boring but adding more riddles and stuff would have taken me much longer, so I'm really glad you liked it this way.

Name: monchichi (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 12:18 · For: Through the Vanishing Cabinet
Hmmm. It's been a while since I've read this story so I went back and read the previous chapter. You're making Ron look awfully guilty for attacking Simon but the timeline seems... compressed.

How was Ron able to leave the Library and track down Simon in what comes across as a very limited amount of time? Ron didn't have the Mauraders Map.

We know Simon is skilled with the mental magic mojo, is Ron's expression of regret justified?

Author's Response: I'm not going to comment on it now, but you will get an answer to that. Thanks for your thoughts!

Name: monchichi (Signed) · Date: 01/12/08 12:06 · For: Through the Vanishing Cabinet
Welcome back.

Author's Response: Same to you! :-)

Name: seeker15 (Signed) · Date: 11/19/07 18:15 · For: Summer Holidays
this is my favorite fanfic! i love the whole concept of harry being in slytherin. it's also really suspenseful and there are so many great twists! i LOVE it!!! keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: You're a new reader, cool! Thanks for the review, I'm looking forward to your thoughts on other chapters. :-)

Name: DarkJoker (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 12:56 · For: Simon
lol yeah story is great, keep up the good job

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: dumbledorerocks (Signed) · Date: 09/20/07 8:56 · For: Corpus Inflamare
man thats one darth vader sized cliff hanger! i'm practically spending like 4 hours everyday on MNFF, hoping you would update! anyway, great chapter, yet again. what's up with ron and hermione leaving their wands behind? do update soon!

Author's Response: uhuuu! I'm sooooo sorry, you had to wait that long, but my beta quit and I had less time recently, but I used the holydays for some productive writing and beta-searching. The new one is currently marking the next chapter, so hopefully it will be up by the middle of January!

Name: fairiegirl (Signed) · Date: 08/22/07 21:40 · For: Dinner for 13
Hermione, Simon, Harry, and Ron have a great deal to do with this...hmmmm

Author's Response: With what? Baking cheesecake in the dungeons and Snape getting furious cause they forgot the raisins? :-) Thanks for the review!

Name: fairiegirl (Signed) · Date: 08/22/07 20:35 · For: (Ir)rational Jealousy
Meep. Loved this chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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